With Pokemon Powers in the Omniverse [Dropped]

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DaoOfGay

This is the author, giving myself 5 stars because why not? Also, comment below which world you would like to see. I already have some in mind, but I don't mind receiving some suggestions.

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ArthurBGenesis

hey author their are alot of things wrong with this story but im not gonna say those instead im going to tell you things that can make this story better, for example since your story is mostly unoriginal make it something that most people dont think of like being a villian in my hero academia or instead of having pokemon power the main character IS a pokemon in the world of my hero academia and the main character is treated badly because people think it is a alien and they are searching for the main character theirs a whole lot i got to say but if i do that then im afraid you might even be the number 1 novel

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FAP_Master_

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Endless_Clouds

Amnesia ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Psy_duck

love the concept of the novel. it's something new to read I hope to see more chapter in the future ☺️[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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RandomIsGood

Its good but could incorporate more of the pokemon moves other than palkia and daigla(did I write them correctly?) The interactions feel good and not very forced.