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All the 5 star reviews are nonsensical spam aside from who attempts to convince everyone its good by saying “all the bad stuff is void because its a translation!” That guy is dumb, it is VERY obvious that even in its original language the story was bad. This is a good example of why low star reviews are more honest.
I don’t think the author understands how ki works, it is made of genki (body) shoki (mind) and yuki (spirit) genki is self explanatory, shoki and yuki make up the other half of your ki, if you lose your fighting spirit, or(yuki) you can’t use that part of your ki, if you can’t keep calm and lose your confidence then you lose your shoki.
if only the author tried to fix the Chinese names into Japanese, that would be amazing.
I've been really enjoying it so far but there's loads of slice of life stuff and he's always just a little bit to weak to fight the enemies, he never does anything alone and it's getting worse, he's now weaker than his wife and she's constantly saving him
Membuka SPOILER
Dragon Ball + Cultivation xianxia wuxia = 💩 Also, the story has nonsense words and phrases, which are probably Chinese or Korean references.
Got to chapter 133 and can’t read it anymore it just gets worse as it goes on from how much iv read feels to much like a Chinese cultivation novel and it’s lost aspects of dragon ball because of it. The mc even where I read to is still weak and it’s anoying tht characters keep spouting chinese words and acts like chinese cultivator just wears u down to point tht u can’t read it anymore.
This is legit he even link the patreon and website.(this is a translation) but yeah you can go to the website it has the same amount of chapters out. Also even if he didn’t credit the author so what it not like the author is gonna make money off it its a fanfic chill out. Great novel perfect power scale great goldenfinger. Has a lot of talent and it a well thought out character. There is a bit Chinese BS like they describe mc and his wife yellow skinned. Also there is a lot of parallels to cultivation ect.
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thx for trasnlate [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the translation is good, the progress of the story is creative, I like that they handled things before the start of the original series, it is definitely a good story to read within the dragon ball universe.
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not dragonball ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it not really good webnovel it have to much bs chinese cultivation and the restriction of the dragon ball .................................................
This is the best fic I've read! The translation is great and I recommend you read it before you review it unlike some people in the review. This is a translation! TRANSLATION!!! The person who post this novel literally said it's a translation so why are you saying it's stolen?
Good. ........................................................................................................................................
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I will not lie. When i first saw this in my mind i was thinking, why would someone ever think of doing something like this. Honestly there were a few very minor grammar mistakes but in no way did that make this unreadable. Now however, i have read all 264 chapters and the next thing i knew was that i wanted more. Im invested in this and very curious to see how this will overlap with the actual Dragon ball series. I will admit however that the thing that keeps me a little overwhelmed at times are the "mature" moments that seem to have increased. Now i don't mind some "mature" moments here and there but to me if feels a bit much. Still thats a personal thing which i am willing to accept for the sake of my curiosity and my attention to the immense detail of the dragon ball universe along with the power levels which i admit i missed when they kinda stopped doing it but i could understand why after all that has happened in the series. I also know and appreciate that the original source is mentioned to make EVERYONE AWARE that yes if you want the original source you can go there as well and even support it there as well. I see this as further advertisement and support this method so that many people can read the novel along with other novels in other websites that some readers have found while others do not even know about. If you got this far in my review i hope i have shed a little light as to how i feel about this novel. I hope everyone also enjoys this novel and is willing to support it in their own as i am trying in mine so that this novel can get recognized even more. Happy reading everyone!
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
why are ppl stupid? he legit said he translated it on a website I checked the link out and it has way more chapters than this I think he's trying to make us go to his site for more chapters which is fine by me.
It was stolen do not read it because it was stolen from the original one the one who published this book is a fake do not read this book the original one is somewhere else.
STOLEN CONTENT! !! ! READ THE ORIGINAL AT SYSTEMTRANSLATION. COM. ALSO SUPPORT OUR PATREON FOR MORE CHAPTER AND BENEFITS. .. .. .. HELP OUR TRANSLATION BY REPORTING THIS GUY
#cultivation #xianxian #wuxia #Dao # Taoism # immortality [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
All the 5 star reviews are nonsensical spam aside from who attempts to convince everyone its good by saying “all the bad stuff is void because its a translation!” That guy is dumb, it is VERY obvious that even in its original language the story was bad. This is a good example of why low star reviews are more honest.
I don’t think the author understands how ki works, it is made of genki (body) shoki (mind) and yuki (spirit) genki is self explanatory, shoki and yuki make up the other half of your ki, if you lose your fighting spirit, or(yuki) you can’t use that part of your ki, if you can’t keep calm and lose your confidence then you lose your shoki.
if only the author tried to fix the Chinese names into Japanese, that would be amazing.
I've been really enjoying it so far but there's loads of slice of life stuff and he's always just a little bit to weak to fight the enemies, he never does anything alone and it's getting worse, he's now weaker than his wife and she's constantly saving him
Membuka SPOILER Dragon Ball + Cultivation xianxia wuxia = 💩 Also, the story has nonsense words and phrases, which are probably Chinese or Korean references.
Got to chapter 133 and can’t read it anymore it just gets worse as it goes on from how much iv read feels to much like a Chinese cultivation novel and it’s lost aspects of dragon ball because of it. The mc even where I read to is still weak and it’s anoying tht characters keep spouting chinese words and acts like chinese cultivator just wears u down to point tht u can’t read it anymore.
This is legit he even link the patreon and website.(this is a translation) but yeah you can go to the website it has the same amount of chapters out. Also even if he didn’t credit the author so what it not like the author is gonna make money off it its a fanfic chill out. Great novel perfect power scale great goldenfinger. Has a lot of talent and it a well thought out character. There is a bit Chinese BS like they describe mc and his wife yellow skinned. Also there is a lot of parallels to cultivation ect.
Membuka SPOILER thx for trasnlate [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the translation is good, the progress of the story is creative, I like that they handled things before the start of the original series, it is definitely a good story to read within the dragon ball universe.
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Bla bla ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
not dragonball ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it not really good webnovel it have to much bs chinese cultivation and the restriction of the dragon ball .................................................
This is the best fic I've read! The translation is great and I recommend you read it before you review it unlike some people in the review. This is a translation! TRANSLATION!!! The person who post this novel literally said it's a translation so why are you saying it's stolen?
Good. ........................................................................................................................................
Aaaaaaaaaáaswweeeffrrrffffffcccfxxxxfx😍fhgdjgrghhdhhfhudvjevyvvhhhhhggghhddyhgfjxdehgchjjjhggfddfkyfgyrfjyrgjrfjfgdvfgvvjkkkkkkkkkvxdhbfssdtyukhcdsghkloiutrwqsxcvbklieddccbyfx
I will not lie. When i first saw this in my mind i was thinking, why would someone ever think of doing something like this. Honestly there were a few very minor grammar mistakes but in no way did that make this unreadable. Now however, i have read all 264 chapters and the next thing i knew was that i wanted more. Im invested in this and very curious to see how this will overlap with the actual Dragon ball series. I will admit however that the thing that keeps me a little overwhelmed at times are the "mature" moments that seem to have increased. Now i don't mind some "mature" moments here and there but to me if feels a bit much. Still thats a personal thing which i am willing to accept for the sake of my curiosity and my attention to the immense detail of the dragon ball universe along with the power levels which i admit i missed when they kinda stopped doing it but i could understand why after all that has happened in the series. I also know and appreciate that the original source is mentioned to make EVERYONE AWARE that yes if you want the original source you can go there as well and even support it there as well. I see this as further advertisement and support this method so that many people can read the novel along with other novels in other websites that some readers have found while others do not even know about. If you got this far in my review i hope i have shed a little light as to how i feel about this novel. I hope everyone also enjoys this novel and is willing to support it in their own as i am trying in mine so that this novel can get recognized even more. Happy reading everyone!
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
why are ppl stupid? he legit said he translated it on a website I checked the link out and it has way more chapters than this I think he's trying to make us go to his site for more chapters which is fine by me.
It was stolen do not read it because it was stolen from the original one the one who published this book is a fake do not read this book the original one is somewhere else.
STOLEN CONTENT! !! ! READ THE ORIGINAL AT SYSTEMTRANSLATION. COM. ALSO SUPPORT OUR PATREON FOR MORE CHAPTER AND BENEFITS. .. .. .. HELP OUR TRANSLATION BY REPORTING THIS GUY
#cultivation #xianxian #wuxia #Dao # Taoism # immortality [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]