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*Grabs author by the collar* "MAKE MORE CHAPTERS DARN IT!" This is a great book, keep it up please. .
Honestly I love. The MC knows Momonga so it will be exciting to see those two meet up. Also the MC should be honest but not naive and innocent, he's a seraphim not a child, he should kill when he needs to nothing more nothing less. Those are just my thoughts. Author are you gonna come back to this book because I would love to this continue, it's so hard to find good overlord fanfics, plus ones that have an Angel as a MC is rare for novels as a whole from my searching.
Making your mc have a ' benevolent and righteous' character is quite boring. It would be more interesting if the mc was cunning and ruthless and had to fight his better nature to attain his goals. If not remember that angels are on the +500 morality scale so please add some of his internal struggles just like Ainz has with his immorality.
Very intresting, and a very new concept to the other Overlord fanfics. Can´t wait to see how momonga and all of Nazarick will react. This fanfic is a 10/10 for me just a little sad that there are "just" 11 chapters now. Keep it up Author :)
I really like the chapters so far, the writing quality is great compared to other stories, you incorporate lore into the sorry as he speaks to give a clear understanding of what's going on, character design ehh. But I do have some question if you could answer them author of possible. Q) Is Ainz Ooal Gown ( The guild ) and Manon still a thing in this fan-fic and will we meet them later?
Author. Your fan fiction is beautiful. Good writing style. Normal beginning of the plot. My only wishes. Do this a little more often. I hope MS won'T be a rag p. if still MS will be with that girl vampire.... No harem, please. Good luck in your endeavors author-Chan~
I have totally enjoyed this story so far. I will be checking back for more. Thank you for sharing. It was like I was there. No more Japan now.
Isn't it an angel at level 100, how can he get tired within two minutes and develop a bad character? Why did we give us his life story from the beginning and the fourth chapter I feel he is very random.
i lake the way it started you rock author san update more like this and it will be more exciting and dont fall mc into dark like orginal mc of overlord just be good as a seraphim i hope more chapter coming [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Typical 5 star author review. I just want everyone to let me know what I can improve on and help me with world building. Thank you guys for reading a please feel free to tell me where i can improve my story.
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*Grabs author by the collar* "MAKE MORE CHAPTERS DARN IT!" This is a great book, keep it up please. .
Honestly I love. The MC knows Momonga so it will be exciting to see those two meet up. Also the MC should be honest but not naive and innocent, he's a seraphim not a child, he should kill when he needs to nothing more nothing less. Those are just my thoughts. Author are you gonna come back to this book because I would love to this continue, it's so hard to find good overlord fanfics, plus ones that have an Angel as a MC is rare for novels as a whole from my searching.
Making your mc have a ' benevolent and righteous' character is quite boring. It would be more interesting if the mc was cunning and ruthless and had to fight his better nature to attain his goals. If not remember that angels are on the +500 morality scale so please add some of his internal struggles just like Ainz has with his immorality.
Very intresting, and a very new concept to the other Overlord fanfics. Can´t wait to see how momonga and all of Nazarick will react. This fanfic is a 10/10 for me just a little sad that there are "just" 11 chapters now. Keep it up Author :)
I really like the chapters so far, the writing quality is great compared to other stories, you incorporate lore into the sorry as he speaks to give a clear understanding of what's going on, character design ehh. But I do have some question if you could answer them author of possible. Q) Is Ainz Ooal Gown ( The guild ) and Manon still a thing in this fan-fic and will we meet them later?
Author. Your fan fiction is beautiful. Good writing style. Normal beginning of the plot. My only wishes. Do this a little more often. I hope MS won'T be a rag p. if still MS will be with that girl vampire.... No harem, please. Good luck in your endeavors author-Chan~
I have totally enjoyed this story so far. I will be checking back for more. Thank you for sharing. It was like I was there. No more Japan now.
Isn't it an angel at level 100, how can he get tired within two minutes and develop a bad character? Why did we give us his life story from the beginning and the fourth chapter I feel he is very random.
i lake the way it started you rock author san update more like this and it will be more exciting and dont fall mc into dark like orginal mc of overlord just be good as a seraphim i hope more chapter coming [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Typical 5 star author review. I just want everyone to let me know what I can improve on and help me with world building. Thank you guys for reading a please feel free to tell me where i can improve my story.
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