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This book.isn't for me.the prologue is too long.and i thought that there was a japanese vibe going on.unfortunately the author.did not capture.that vibe.as for the structure of the story it's bland.and boring. and very VERY scripted.i can't feel the emotions of the characters it's as if it is forced. the personalities of the characters is also forced. your grammar is somewhat tolerable but know how to use proper words in a sentence. as well as proper commas and periods. NOT JUST THAT but fix the broken words of the sentences those are making me cringe so much. i was excited when i saw this book but my excitement turned into instant dissapointment. i also read what the author said. you apologise for your mistakes but your apology doesn't validate.to anything if you don't fix it. Your writing just lacks.professionalism.i'm sorry to say. it's as if.a kid wrote it. and yet a children's book is more fun than this. i rarely give.5.0 star but to those who earned and deserve it. right now.this book is 2-3 stars in my view.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hello Author, I have reviewed your boik and it is quite nice read. . If you are looking to distribute your book or future books on a platform that will pay you up to 400$ based on word count and publishing frequency, then mail bayoeditor@gmail.com A brief summary and link of your book will be appreciated when reaching out.
A story that is simple yet compelling aboard of your news feeds! Another novel that will surely make your mind dive in it while reading it! You should all check this out, a realistic fiction ahead of you! Great job, author!
this novel is nice, it leave a trademark on young generations like me. some parts are kinda confusing because of typographical errors and no punctuation, but all in all it describes daily lives of people and fun to read!
The story is suitable for those who likes slice of life genre and this might attract young customers (aka teenagers in their school days). There are less description and details in regards for the surrounding, I think that's all! The story itself are homie and warm! Keep up the good work!
This is really good, I did liked it. Though, there is some errors in the book as in: capitalisation, the uses of "!" "." "?" and others not being used that much, spelling, spaces... But, I know that the author worked hard on the book. keep on the hard work...[img=recommend]π
This is good novel. I liked it. The author has put too much efforts in this novel. I'll appreciate this novel heartly. Make sure to update new chapters regularly ππ.. . I'll surely recommend this novel. keep it up ππ
Senpai, I'll leave you a review. Your work is great and has an anime feel to it like the light animes about friendship and everyday life. Your updating stability is good, I hope you maintain those daily updates haha. Don't get lazy! Continue on fixing your punctuations, I will support you til the end. -Your Kouhai γ(οΏ£β½οΏ£γ)
The story gives you a very homie and warm vibe with everyone supporting each other recommended novel if you like books of friendship. Keep up the good workππ―π
A really simple and light read, since this is a slice of life. The cover is cute and the synopsis is modest. It features the everyday school life of each of the characters which is typical in a slice of life genre. nice!
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Membuka SPOILER This book.isn't for me.the prologue is too long.and i thought that there was a japanese vibe going on.unfortunately the author.did not capture.that vibe.as for the structure of the story it's bland.and boring. and very VERY scripted.i can't feel the emotions of the characters it's as if it is forced. the personalities of the characters is also forced. your grammar is somewhat tolerable but know how to use proper words in a sentence. as well as proper commas and periods. NOT JUST THAT but fix the broken words of the sentences those are making me cringe so much. i was excited when i saw this book but my excitement turned into instant dissapointment. i also read what the author said. you apologise for your mistakes but your apology doesn't validate.to anything if you don't fix it. Your writing just lacks.professionalism.i'm sorry to say. it's as if.a kid wrote it. and yet a children's book is more fun than this. i rarely give.5.0 star but to those who earned and deserve it. right now.this book is 2-3 stars in my view.
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hello Author, I have reviewed your boik and it is quite nice read. . If you are looking to distribute your book or future books on a platform that will pay you up to 400$ based on word count and publishing frequency, then mail bayoeditor@gmail.com A brief summary and link of your book will be appreciated when reaching out.
A story that is simple yet compelling aboard of your news feeds! Another novel that will surely make your mind dive in it while reading it! You should all check this out, a realistic fiction ahead of you! Great job, author!
this novel is nice, it leave a trademark on young generations like me. some parts are kinda confusing because of typographical errors and no punctuation, but all in all it describes daily lives of people and fun to read!
The story is suitable for those who likes slice of life genre and this might attract young customers (aka teenagers in their school days). There are less description and details in regards for the surrounding, I think that's all! The story itself are homie and warm! Keep up the good work!
This is really good, I did liked it. Though, there is some errors in the book as in: capitalisation, the uses of "!" "." "?" and others not being used that much, spelling, spaces... But, I know that the author worked hard on the book. keep on the hard work...[img=recommend]π
This is good novel. I liked it. The author has put too much efforts in this novel. I'll appreciate this novel heartly. Make sure to update new chapters regularly ππ.. . I'll surely recommend this novel. keep it up ππ
Senpai, I'll leave you a review. Your work is great and has an anime feel to it like the light animes about friendship and everyday life. Your updating stability is good, I hope you maintain those daily updates haha. Don't get lazy! Continue on fixing your punctuations, I will support you til the end. -Your Kouhai γ(οΏ£β½οΏ£γ)
The story gives you a very homie and warm vibe with everyone supporting each other recommended novel if you like books of friendship. Keep up the good workππ―π
A really simple and light read, since this is a slice of life. The cover is cute and the synopsis is modest. It features the everyday school life of each of the characters which is typical in a slice of life genre. nice!
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