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Love this book! Its quite unique, and reminds me of a sci-fi movie. Kudos to the author for writing such a wonderful novel. Hope more chapters can be posted. [img=recommend]
For what I see here, this is kinda of a fantasy romance. The book seems promising and has interesting plot and fun at the same time. However, there is a few grammatical error which the author can fix overtime. Keep up with the good work and update more chapters.
I am going to be honest, because author deserves it. The storyline and plot is food. Love the title but more work may b needed on your cover to make it catchy. Writing quality is good, just some typos which we almost all have as authors. Story developed quick and author has good descriptive writing. My only complain would be for author to cut down on d large chunk of text and also give some detailed description of the scenes... For example how she escaped when the man was distracted and all, where were the kids... Try a bit if show and not tell. All in all, it isn't easy to come up with a plot and write something down. Good one dear, don't give up on your story. Keep writing, read other author's books and learn a thing or two... Its how I improved. If u are on discord, msg me @BaeVida#7167
Good book overall, and the author should post more chapters soon, it's enthralling, really. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
This book is really good despite having only a few chapters. It is well written. The concept and the plot are interesting. Please keep writing and updating!
I love this book! The fact that the character’s name is tsukki though. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Ayee great concept author. The author really displays the story perfectly. Except for some grammatical error, everything is perfect. Kudos for the author. Keep updating.
I might say that the novel title is really good! Although I feel like something is really tickle me into the story, the beginning of it might be something really off for me. And, to be honest, I need a synopsis
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The book have a little number on f chapters but still they are quite good. I think the author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all. Great job author!!!
The grammar is very good and I know this will be a bombass novel I love assassins stories! Keep up the goodwork and don't lose the motivation to write I'm cheering for you💯
Good introduction! I really like that you use the meaning of names in the novel. I have always found that interesting. The novel seems to promise a lot! I think it'll be amazing. Please keep writing! I want to read this story without any doubt ♥
Whoaaaaa! Nice introduction! I really love the story concept! I will definitely looking forward to this story. This sinister thing at the end of the chapter really intrigues me. Well, do your best in updating!
Great book! I can't wait for more chapters. The storyline is interesting, and I hope that the plot thickens. Kudos to the author for working so hard on this book. 💖[img=recommend]
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Love this book! Its quite unique, and reminds me of a sci-fi movie. Kudos to the author for writing such a wonderful novel. Hope more chapters can be posted. [img=recommend]
For what I see here, this is kinda of a fantasy romance. The book seems promising and has interesting plot and fun at the same time. However, there is a few grammatical error which the author can fix overtime. Keep up with the good work and update more chapters.
I am going to be honest, because author deserves it. The storyline and plot is food. Love the title but more work may b needed on your cover to make it catchy. Writing quality is good, just some typos which we almost all have as authors. Story developed quick and author has good descriptive writing. My only complain would be for author to cut down on d large chunk of text and also give some detailed description of the scenes... For example how she escaped when the man was distracted and all, where were the kids... Try a bit if show and not tell. All in all, it isn't easy to come up with a plot and write something down. Good one dear, don't give up on your story. Keep writing, read other author's books and learn a thing or two... Its how I improved. If u are on discord, msg me @BaeVida#7167
Good book overall, and the author should post more chapters soon, it's enthralling, really. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
This book is really good despite having only a few chapters. It is well written. The concept and the plot are interesting. Please keep writing and updating!
I love this book! The fact that the character’s name is tsukki though. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Ayee great concept author. The author really displays the story perfectly. Except for some grammatical error, everything is perfect. Kudos for the author. Keep updating.
I might say that the novel title is really good! Although I feel like something is really tickle me into the story, the beginning of it might be something really off for me. And, to be honest, I need a synopsis
Membuka SPOILER The book have a little number on f chapters but still they are quite good. I think the author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all. Great job author!!!
The grammar is very good and I know this will be a bombass novel I love assassins stories! Keep up the goodwork and don't lose the motivation to write I'm cheering for you💯
Good introduction! I really like that you use the meaning of names in the novel. I have always found that interesting. The novel seems to promise a lot! I think it'll be amazing. Please keep writing! I want to read this story without any doubt ♥
Whoaaaaa! Nice introduction! I really love the story concept! I will definitely looking forward to this story. This sinister thing at the end of the chapter really intrigues me. Well, do your best in updating!
Great book! I can't wait for more chapters. The storyline is interesting, and I hope that the plot thickens. Kudos to the author for working so hard on this book. 💖[img=recommend]
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