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Good fanfic, mc is weak to strong, i prefer op from the start but still its good, mc pass alot of hardships and i think his way to limit contain himself is normal, he was kinda edgy after his worst moments but its good he regain hi goal, thats some good character development
it was a pretty good read up until chapter 40 I persisted like a masochist up to 74 then it started getting boring for me, idk why but it felt like it was deteriorating instead of getting better, anyway thanks for the work author, see ya around I guess
Spoiler alert Onimusha, devil may cry, black panther, x-men, supreme master, shield, resident evil, and John wic are all crammed together in the first 30 chapters. That’s too much for me. The MC is 8, but is able to withstand lethal or crippling blows constantly, manage rifles, pistols, grenades, etc. with Matrix style combat moves, break in to umbrella Corp unseen stealing data then taking on two tyrant/nemisis hybrids with demon DNA, join the continental as an assassin, fight toe to toe with 20 assassins then John Wic, and speak with Nick Fury as if he’s superior even threatening him without consequences. I’m not sure what else I could say about it other than this goes above and beyond fanfic into a mess of content thrown into a blender. I appreciate the author’s attempt in this story, but I don’t think it’s content can be well written.
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To any who would try to read this. Survive until chapter 15 or maybe 20. The introduction chapters are super messy since its an amalgam universe but the author decided to throw everything right at your face in just a few chapters. Author could have slowly build the view of his world it by bit but instead those chapter happened. You'll likely feel lost at what the **** are you reading or you're a super adaptoid that understood it right off the bat. The MC is a boy (at my current read chapter 20+) that has two souls that means two memories. So he acts a bit of confusing for some. I mean luckily he didn't become insane with many conflicting views on his life. One moment he feels matured the next his begging for ice cream. Let's just simply say he doesn't act or think like a normal person. But in later chapters it gets fleshed out.. so just survive if you're in to it. The system strikes again.... It's or she's a system that acts or talks like a secretary that helps our young hero. Also looks like it has self preservation mode in case someting bad happens to MC. Overall for now it's entertaining after that messy early chapters. Especially if you know the characters uses in this story. BUT REMEMBER! This is the author's version. If you feel they don't act like what they normally would in other media then maybe it's not for you.
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Its ok, to many cross overs and the grammar os horrible. Its like the author made a story then slapped random words that sound like they would fIt any where in the stoRy
Good at first but at least after chapter 74 and more it becomes trash absolute trash. Good at first but at least after chapter 74 and more it becomes trash absolute trash.
a question will you add the resident evil sagas? I say because I love the video game of resident evil 4, 7, and that resident evil 2 where they kidnap clair along with another girl to escape from an island infested with mutated zombies
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its great novel. please vote for it. enjoy reading it so much. the downside is to much character but its make a great addition. the sad thing is dont know how speed the chapter is released. i already have this novel in my library maybe around 2 or 3 months. but still at 73. hope the author make a great release or stable chapter. cause this novel make me forget play my game
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I recommend reading this story to those who like to see the MC trying to overcome their limits instead of a simple MC of desires and the MC is being trained by Jon Wick (Baba Yaga) It is mandatory that the MC has to be awesome
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The protagonist is overly emotional, not to mention extremely young. It is highly unrealistic for a child to be that efficient. I greatly dislike the whole mixing of every single universe the author comes up with. It is chaotic and provides nothing for the character's development.
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Probably the worst grammar I’ve seen here. Neck deep bullshit. Background is a bit better done. Unsatisfying story and plot. I probably lost some brain cells reading this.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact s9033107ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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i rated it 5 star because it of john wick i rated it 5 star because it of john wick i rated it 5 star because it of john wick i rated it 5 star because it of john wick
This is a pretty good story, and I hope the author continues to write this. I highly recommend you read this. The only problem is sometimes there are grammar errors, but by no means is this unreadable.
It may seem like a low review, but I judged it by the standards of a novel and not a fanfic. I wasn't expecting much and was surprised for the better. The action is very well written, definitely a series to follow and while you turn your brain off for a while. 10/10 in that section. I liked it so much that I created an account XD
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Membuka SPOILER Good fanfic, mc is weak to strong, i prefer op from the start but still its good, mc pass alot of hardships and i think his way to limit contain himself is normal, he was kinda edgy after his worst moments but its good he regain hi goal, thats some good character development
it was a pretty good read up until chapter 40 I persisted like a masochist up to 74 then it started getting boring for me, idk why but it felt like it was deteriorating instead of getting better, anyway thanks for the work author, see ya around I guess
Spoiler alert Onimusha, devil may cry, black panther, x-men, supreme master, shield, resident evil, and John wic are all crammed together in the first 30 chapters. That’s too much for me. The MC is 8, but is able to withstand lethal or crippling blows constantly, manage rifles, pistols, grenades, etc. with Matrix style combat moves, break in to umbrella Corp unseen stealing data then taking on two tyrant/nemisis hybrids with demon DNA, join the continental as an assassin, fight toe to toe with 20 assassins then John Wic, and speak with Nick Fury as if he’s superior even threatening him without consequences. I’m not sure what else I could say about it other than this goes above and beyond fanfic into a mess of content thrown into a blender. I appreciate the author’s attempt in this story, but I don’t think it’s content can be well written.
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To any who would try to read this. Survive until chapter 15 or maybe 20. The introduction chapters are super messy since its an amalgam universe but the author decided to throw everything right at your face in just a few chapters. Author could have slowly build the view of his world it by bit but instead those chapter happened. You'll likely feel lost at what the **** are you reading or you're a super adaptoid that understood it right off the bat. The MC is a boy (at my current read chapter 20+) that has two souls that means two memories. So he acts a bit of confusing for some. I mean luckily he didn't become insane with many conflicting views on his life. One moment he feels matured the next his begging for ice cream. Let's just simply say he doesn't act or think like a normal person. But in later chapters it gets fleshed out.. so just survive if you're in to it. The system strikes again.... It's or she's a system that acts or talks like a secretary that helps our young hero. Also looks like it has self preservation mode in case someting bad happens to MC. Overall for now it's entertaining after that messy early chapters. Especially if you know the characters uses in this story. BUT REMEMBER! This is the author's version. If you feel they don't act like what they normally would in other media then maybe it's not for you.
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Its ok, to many cross overs and the grammar os horrible. Its like the author made a story then slapped random words that sound like they would fIt any where in the stoRy
Good at first but at least after chapter 74 and more it becomes trash absolute trash. Good at first but at least after chapter 74 and more it becomes trash absolute trash.
a question will you add the resident evil sagas? I say because I love the video game of resident evil 4, 7, and that resident evil 2 where they kidnap clair along with another girl to escape from an island infested with mutated zombies
more more more more more more more more pls pls pls pls xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
its great novel. please vote for it. enjoy reading it so much. the downside is to much character but its make a great addition. the sad thing is dont know how speed the chapter is released. i already have this novel in my library maybe around 2 or 3 months. but still at 73. hope the author make a great release or stable chapter. cause this novel make me forget play my game
Great Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
Membuka SPOILER I recommend reading this story to those who like to see the MC trying to overcome their limits instead of a simple MC of desires and the MC is being trained by Jon Wick (Baba Yaga) It is mandatory that the MC has to be awesome
Good Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
Membuka SPOILER Great Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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The protagonist is overly emotional, not to mention extremely young. It is highly unrealistic for a child to be that efficient. I greatly dislike the whole mixing of every single universe the author comes up with. It is chaotic and provides nothing for the character's development.
Good Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
Membuka SPOILER Probably the worst grammar I’ve seen here. Neck deep bullshit. Background is a bit better done. Unsatisfying story and plot. I probably lost some brain cells reading this.
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Membuka SPOILER Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact s9033107ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
BEST FUCKING CROSSOVER FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ AMAZING ASF ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😤
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i rated it 5 star because it of john wick i rated it 5 star because it of john wick i rated it 5 star because it of john wick i rated it 5 star because it of john wick
This is a pretty good story, and I hope the author continues to write this. I highly recommend you read this. The only problem is sometimes there are grammar errors, but by no means is this unreadable.
It may seem like a low review, but I judged it by the standards of a novel and not a fanfic. I wasn't expecting much and was surprised for the better. The action is very well written, definitely a series to follow and while you turn your brain off for a while. 10/10 in that section. I liked it so much that I created an account XD