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I loved the way author wrote this story- especially the narrative style. The novel has a good plot and it appears promising. The author is successful in depicting the emotions portrayed by the characters with a strong background information. I am looking forward for reading more. Keep up the good work author 👍
this isn't your typical fantasy story. it's filled with vast real-world experiences that help you meet the protagonist in their world. I've been following the book for a while and think it's amazing especially if I don't read many books in this genre. the world background is very descriptive and your given much detail about the occurring events. the updating stability needs some work but it's worth the wait I love where the story is going and hardly found any grammatical or spelling errors that disturbed my reading 🤗❤ I highly recommend it!🥺
yes it's just a really bad story in general w z .... f g h t .......................
The chapters were very well written, the fighting elements and how the surroundings were narrated were amazing, very cool! I'll recommend this!
Realized so late I never gave a review! I feel like this stort is good and the more you read the better it gets! You learn more about the character and around them, so do give this book a try, its pretty good! 😁👍🏾
The idea of the book is really really good and I liked how the first chapter of it hooked the reader to be eager to know more about the flaw of the protagonist and how she will deal with the fate. And the descriptions were awesome too!
I loved the flow of the story. descriptions and descriptions are very successful, you can experience the action scenes. The author really did a great job.
it's amazing battlee scene (at chapter one) you describe the characters there amzing and detailed and... i like the way you did that. i like when the dad yell to goblin, and he likes. 'duck my wife in trouble' but i like the husband approach his wife while got beaten with the goblin. it's for adding more dramatization the story.
This story is very interesting. love the SETTING HOW PROPER IT GOES plus it puts you in the corner of your chair to read more. Girl as growing strong are rare as this but ONE we are looking forward how far she can go. its awesome. go for it author. keep updating. a fascinating novel awaits for all. BRO do your best
Here are my thoughts about this novel based on what I have read so far World Building: So far the world-building kinda reminds me of Goblin Slayer especially with the goblin rampage that I read. I also like the author painted the goblins as the threat. However, I suggest to give more description and imagery about the world itself because sorry to say this, the world is quite vague. Characters: I do like that the character in this kind of story is a female one which is Shelly and I do like the build up that she have a goal to find her brother. I also admire that you show that Shelly is quite brave, headstrong, and selfless when comes to saving her brother. The setup with Maou also okay so far. However, I do believe the author will give further development about Shelly characters and this is a nitpicky, I do hope the author will give further exploitation about her dead parent, to make their relationship much more stronger and add dept to Shelly character. Overal, I think it's fine a read and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!
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The author Jozan requested I read and post a review of her novel. Having only read the first chapter, I find the Story to be described well and have a good character interactions but the starting epic violence just turned me off. Sorry
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what a great fascinating novel! set in an adventure backdrop and mixed with exciting beautiful characters! this book is a gem! I recommend this to everyone ♥
The author Jozan requested I read and post a review of her novel. Having only read the first chapter, in which the young protagonists become orphans after a goblin raid kills the parents and young friends gets the reader involved in the action right away. The quality is excellent and flows well, and the quantity is average for Webnovel books 📚. When I have more free time I will update my review, as of now this book gets…👍
The first chap was amazing, It was written in first person pov, which sometimes, my type. If ya want to read a first person pov style of writing, then don't waste yer time. read this novel.
Haven't read far enough to give more than a first impression, but here we go. The start of the story is inspired by Goblin Slayer, the author says it in the Author Notes of the first chapter, however it lacks the guttural realism of Goblin Slayer and I feel the story would've been better the author dug deeper into Goblin Slayer's world building and D&D which inspired Goblin Slayer instead of borrowing what's just on the surface. My recommendation is watching Wisecrack's video on Goblin Slayer and to find out more about Dungeons and Dragons. Might make another review when I read a bit further if I feel this one is inaccurate.
it's a good novel to pass time, it's quite calm than the other books I read and it's not forced, just don't get too deep into the cultivation part that you create characters that say "seeking death" or "this young master shall blah blah blah" you get the point, this is just my opinion and I look forward to their relationship
thanks for the story and great story so keep up with updating and posting new chapters and don't drop this story and thanks for your hard work
Shameless Author Review. 🤪 This story WILL impress you. It's in-between different and "I remember that scene from somewhere"... except it's WAY! BETTER! Don't believe that it's "Bussin' Bussin'" Read the first and second Chapter. That alone is enough to tell you that I'M! BUILT! DIFFERENT!!!💪😤🤳 And that's on my left pinky toe🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶
A perfectly horrendous opening, goblin violence and a great start to this story. Shelly seems like a good character that will undoubtedly shine to mske this a fascinating book! 📖 The writing quality is rather good and very few issues can be found. Gobin Slayer 2.0 here! Sorry for the late review swap!
Kudos to the writer. I love the synopsis nad Background. The story is intriguing. The mystery spicy is lit. Best of luck for this masterpiece. Fighting!
It's a good story so far. looking forward to how it develops! if I have one complaint it would be that the writing still needs some work. but except for that everything is great.
Well, not much to say. Everyone who knows me knows that I don't prefer original fantasy much. But don't mean that it's bad, just not my cup of tea. Anyway, this is a good original. I just read a few of the chapter and I'm sure to those who want to find some good quality original with modest plot, this is a good pick. And there's no mistake in vocabulary, grammar, paragraph, dialogue etc. The author is having a bit of immature idea in here but I'm sure it could be fix with long term writing. Anyway, try it on your own. I can at least guarantee that you wouldn't have complain in term of dialogue, paragraph, vocabs, grammar, POV interaction, etc... This, I guaranteed.
Whoaaaa...the story is really good!! interesting!!! it's lovely how you interpret every situation with some lively conversation in the beginning. that technique is hard to capture since I'm yet bad at it haha. but it gives me an image of a fantasy world in manga or anime. wohoooooooo. you are really doing great. it would be great if someone really makes an anime or manga on it. good luck man!!
The story is good! I like the way how he described his characters. When we have a lot of characters it is inevitable to give little attention to one or two chars. But here author placed equal importance on all. Nice work author!
Wow! This is an interesting and amazing novel! The synopsis made me curious and read this novel. Looking forward for more exciting chapters, author!
I like it I do! The character building and how each was introduced. Its perfect. the plot developing, the ideas projected which makes the reader interested in turning more pages, that's good, really good! Added in collection.. am definitely gonna try this. Keep going author.
Wow, the chapters are really nice. Every chapter is of different mood. The way you described the scenes, characters and background it's really amazing. The goblin fight in the first chapters tops the rank among others. The character designing and word building are amazing.
I loved the way author wrote this story- especially the narrative style. The novel has a good plot and it appears promising. The author is successful in depicting the emotions portrayed by the characters with a strong background information. I am looking forward for reading more. Keep up the good work author 👍
this isn't your typical fantasy story. it's filled with vast real-world experiences that help you meet the protagonist in their world. I've been following the book for a while and think it's amazing especially if I don't read many books in this genre. the world background is very descriptive and your given much detail about the occurring events. the updating stability needs some work but it's worth the wait I love where the story is going and hardly found any grammatical or spelling errors that disturbed my reading 🤗❤ I highly recommend it!🥺
yes it's just a really bad story in general w z .... f g h t .......................
The chapters were very well written, the fighting elements and how the surroundings were narrated were amazing, very cool! I'll recommend this!
Realized so late I never gave a review! I feel like this stort is good and the more you read the better it gets! You learn more about the character and around them, so do give this book a try, its pretty good! 😁👍🏾
The idea of the book is really really good and I liked how the first chapter of it hooked the reader to be eager to know more about the flaw of the protagonist and how she will deal with the fate. And the descriptions were awesome too!
I loved the flow of the story. descriptions and descriptions are very successful, you can experience the action scenes. The author really did a great job.
it's amazing battlee scene (at chapter one) you describe the characters there amzing and detailed and... i like the way you did that. i like when the dad yell to goblin, and he likes. 'duck my wife in trouble' but i like the husband approach his wife while got beaten with the goblin. it's for adding more dramatization the story.
This story is very interesting. love the SETTING HOW PROPER IT GOES plus it puts you in the corner of your chair to read more. Girl as growing strong are rare as this but ONE we are looking forward how far she can go. its awesome. go for it author. keep updating. a fascinating novel awaits for all. BRO do your best
Here are my thoughts about this novel based on what I have read so far World Building: So far the world-building kinda reminds me of Goblin Slayer especially with the goblin rampage that I read. I also like the author painted the goblins as the threat. However, I suggest to give more description and imagery about the world itself because sorry to say this, the world is quite vague. Characters: I do like that the character in this kind of story is a female one which is Shelly and I do like the build up that she have a goal to find her brother. I also admire that you show that Shelly is quite brave, headstrong, and selfless when comes to saving her brother. The setup with Maou also okay so far. However, I do believe the author will give further development about Shelly characters and this is a nitpicky, I do hope the author will give further exploitation about her dead parent, to make their relationship much more stronger and add dept to Shelly character. Overal, I think it's fine a read and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!
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Membuka SPOILER The author Jozan requested I read and post a review of her novel. Having only read the first chapter, I find the Story to be described well and have a good character interactions but the starting epic violence just turned me off. Sorry
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what a great fascinating novel! set in an adventure backdrop and mixed with exciting beautiful characters! this book is a gem! I recommend this to everyone ♥
The author Jozan requested I read and post a review of her novel. Having only read the first chapter, in which the young protagonists become orphans after a goblin raid kills the parents and young friends gets the reader involved in the action right away. The quality is excellent and flows well, and the quantity is average for Webnovel books 📚. When I have more free time I will update my review, as of now this book gets…👍
The first chap was amazing, It was written in first person pov, which sometimes, my type. If ya want to read a first person pov style of writing, then don't waste yer time. read this novel.
Haven't read far enough to give more than a first impression, but here we go. The start of the story is inspired by Goblin Slayer, the author says it in the Author Notes of the first chapter, however it lacks the guttural realism of Goblin Slayer and I feel the story would've been better the author dug deeper into Goblin Slayer's world building and D&D which inspired Goblin Slayer instead of borrowing what's just on the surface. My recommendation is watching Wisecrack's video on Goblin Slayer and to find out more about Dungeons and Dragons. Might make another review when I read a bit further if I feel this one is inaccurate.
it's a good novel to pass time, it's quite calm than the other books I read and it's not forced, just don't get too deep into the cultivation part that you create characters that say "seeking death" or "this young master shall blah blah blah" you get the point, this is just my opinion and I look forward to their relationship
thanks for the story and great story so keep up with updating and posting new chapters and don't drop this story and thanks for your hard work
Shameless Author Review. 🤪 This story WILL impress you. It's in-between different and "I remember that scene from somewhere"... except it's WAY! BETTER! Don't believe that it's "Bussin' Bussin'" Read the first and second Chapter. That alone is enough to tell you that I'M! BUILT! DIFFERENT!!!💪😤🤳 And that's on my left pinky toe🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶
A perfectly horrendous opening, goblin violence and a great start to this story. Shelly seems like a good character that will undoubtedly shine to mske this a fascinating book! 📖 The writing quality is rather good and very few issues can be found. Gobin Slayer 2.0 here! Sorry for the late review swap!
Kudos to the writer. I love the synopsis nad Background. The story is intriguing. The mystery spicy is lit. Best of luck for this masterpiece. Fighting!
It's a good story so far. looking forward to how it develops! if I have one complaint it would be that the writing still needs some work. but except for that everything is great.
Well, not much to say. Everyone who knows me knows that I don't prefer original fantasy much. But don't mean that it's bad, just not my cup of tea. Anyway, this is a good original. I just read a few of the chapter and I'm sure to those who want to find some good quality original with modest plot, this is a good pick. And there's no mistake in vocabulary, grammar, paragraph, dialogue etc. The author is having a bit of immature idea in here but I'm sure it could be fix with long term writing. Anyway, try it on your own. I can at least guarantee that you wouldn't have complain in term of dialogue, paragraph, vocabs, grammar, POV interaction, etc... This, I guaranteed.
Whoaaaa...the story is really good!! interesting!!! it's lovely how you interpret every situation with some lively conversation in the beginning. that technique is hard to capture since I'm yet bad at it haha. but it gives me an image of a fantasy world in manga or anime. wohoooooooo. you are really doing great. it would be great if someone really makes an anime or manga on it. good luck man!!
The story is good! I like the way how he described his characters. When we have a lot of characters it is inevitable to give little attention to one or two chars. But here author placed equal importance on all. Nice work author!
Wow! This is an interesting and amazing novel! The synopsis made me curious and read this novel. Looking forward for more exciting chapters, author!
I like it I do! The character building and how each was introduced. Its perfect. the plot developing, the ideas projected which makes the reader interested in turning more pages, that's good, really good! Added in collection.. am definitely gonna try this. Keep going author.
Wow, the chapters are really nice. Every chapter is of different mood. The way you described the scenes, characters and background it's really amazing. The goblin fight in the first chapters tops the rank among others. The character designing and word building are amazing.