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MORE CHAPTERS, MORE UPDATES! THIS IS AWESOME!.............................................................................................MORE!
The mc reminds me of a yandere, but it is a interesting take on things, see how he manipulates his way through the dc universe creating things and Spoilers, becoming the new king of olympus. Extremely intertaining and I hope you come back for this story
Pretty good in my opinion, minus the creepy obsession which gets tolerable later on, the grammar could use a little work, and the story seems a little rushed.
Beware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrowBeware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrowBeware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrowBeware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrowBeware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrow
I will give you a five out of five simply because I love how unique the story is. The obssession is a bit Creepy, the world background is kind of non exisitent, but I see the development of the story. Chapter is short, and finally the Mc is neutral in my sight. I can't wait to see what other tricks you have up your sleeve.
Really good keep going 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌 Really good keep going 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌
I am giving this fic 5 star. The reason I gave it 5 star is because author is doing a good job and it is fairly enjoyable story for those who love overpowered MCs. The one thing i dislike about this fic is WWs mother.
The chapters may be short but just wait till the next volume if it truly aggravates you this volume is almost finished in about 10 Chapters.The chapters may be short but just wait till the next volume if it truly aggravates you this volume is almost finished in about 10 Chapters.The chapters may be short but just wait till the next volume if it truly aggravates you this volume is almost finished in about 10 Chapters.
Really good keep going 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌
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This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know, This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know,This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know,This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know,This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know, 19h
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MORE CHAPTERS, MORE UPDATES! THIS IS AWESOME!.............................................................................................MORE!
The mc reminds me of a yandere, but it is a interesting take on things, see how he manipulates his way through the dc universe creating things and Spoilers, becoming the new king of olympus. Extremely intertaining and I hope you come back for this story
Pretty good in my opinion, minus the creepy obsession which gets tolerable later on, the grammar could use a little work, and the story seems a little rushed.
Beware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrowBeware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrowBeware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrowBeware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrowBeware, I will delete and combine the chapters tomorrow
I will give you a five out of five simply because I love how unique the story is. The obssession is a bit Creepy, the world background is kind of non exisitent, but I see the development of the story. Chapter is short, and finally the Mc is neutral in my sight. I can't wait to see what other tricks you have up your sleeve.
Really good keep going 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌 Really good keep going 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌
I am giving this fic 5 star. The reason I gave it 5 star is because author is doing a good job and it is fairly enjoyable story for those who love overpowered MCs. The one thing i dislike about this fic is WWs mother.
The chapters may be short but just wait till the next volume if it truly aggravates you this volume is almost finished in about 10 Chapters.The chapters may be short but just wait till the next volume if it truly aggravates you this volume is almost finished in about 10 Chapters.The chapters may be short but just wait till the next volume if it truly aggravates you this volume is almost finished in about 10 Chapters.
Really good keep going 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👌
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This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know, This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know,This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know,This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know,This is my story and I am writing for fun, if you have any questions please let me know, 19h
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