Responsibility or corruption - Marvel

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Celelond

Hi, well I thought I would use this space to explain a bit about my story. It is a slow starter, I have planned out the entire concept so some of the questions you think are plot holes, mention them so I can work with it. I do like to make my reader question things, so a lot of "plot holes" are answered later in the story. On a side note, I have completed up till chapter 25 but am releasing slowly to see the feedback.

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The_great123

Truly a wonderful book i hope the best to the author But i have a question did u will introduce more character from dc Sorry for my grammar im not that good in english

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shyamvimal93

Awesome fanfic must read.........so far the story has been quite good hoping to read many more chapters of this story.......☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

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JManM

A story almost as convoluted as the source material. Don't let any of the reviews angry about the clone he makes of himself deter you from reading this. The author has an obvious love for Marvel and DC, and you shouldn't write off someone's passion project so easily.

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teekellz29

it's an awesome fanfiction. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 keep it up and stop listen to haters in the comments because I did like billy the clone.

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VIS_puri

Op mc,smart mc😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Edgelord69

I am not smart with writing a review but for me, the writing quality is pretty good readable for someone with bad english like me, story development is good with some surprise here and there in the plot, character design for the MC is good and likeable, update stability you can see yourself, world background sometimes confusing for me but it is the fun.

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VatOfRedundancy

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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The4thWAH

Its a good read. Though i kinda confuse by here and that bcz the timeline was changing and he kinda try to change this and that. There so many character if u didnt read it carefully might get u confused by the change happen. The writing was good, the complexity show how planned author is, stroy development was great. Yeah overall it was really good.

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Endless_Evolution

I haven't read it yet, but from the tags and other reviews I can tell this FF novel not bad. . . . . . . . . . . 140 character . . . 140 character

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Kurumi21

Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Kilian

Interesting powers that are most certainly OP. I like his thought process and logical reasoning. The story so far offers plenty of opportunities

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Joanne_Bullock

really good read, very entertaining . you should give it a read. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Edgelord666

one of the top marvel fanfic i have read. it has the most unique idea you will find out. the mc is slowly building everything and is thinking with his brain. you should definitely give it a try. i can only say that is the best read of my day.

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starking

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TheOneAboveAlll

great book so far keep up the good work

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MimicReads

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Daoist721221

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