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Did the author die😓. .. .. .. .. .. .. . ... . . . . .. . .. . . . . .. .. .. . .. . .. . .
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Honest speaking, the title made me hesitant to read, but reading the first chapter I thought it was kinda good. Pretty sure author's main insperation was the korean novel "The Tutorial is Too Hard". This is as towers appear around the world while the first 5 floors are mandatory to be alone. Which is pretty much a copy of it, other than it being a tutorial. I dont really mind this as its just a basic setting and honestly speaking the book was ruined in the later chapters really bad. So I take this as the author's own version of the possible story. Towers around the world appeared one day and forced attractes people into the tower other than MC who voluntarily went in. This was when the novel quickly went downhill. I cant really say much about characters as Ive only read 5 chaps but the one chapter he had interacted with the other people inside the tower was really cringe and stuff. The random man he met going into the tower with him is super brave and excited and telling mc to go away as this is his story basically. Erm ok? Then people atart to question where they are but no one ia really nervoua at all even though a big suspicious tower juat randomly appeared forcefully bringing them in against there will voluntarily till they are inside. Only person who is scared is the accquantence he had which just so happened to be a girl which just so happened to hug him puttinf her head onto his chest, which just so happened to be only person actually scared in the crowd of hundreds or thousands of people, which just happened to be a beauty probably in love with him when it was explained he literally has 0 time for anything other than work, and everyone at the lobby just all happened to speak the same language. Ugh... This novel couldve still been saved as u can just read past the forced plot with holes to get to better parts however after that the novel takes another dip. The story started to focus too much on stats and items making it about 75% content *cough filler cough* for the next 3 chaps. I get that it looka good when u imagine it in your head with stories like this but there's a reason why lots of people dislike most video game stories, that is because they turn out like this. I gave up once I got to the sixth chap. Overall though, it might be better than "The Tutorial is Too Hard" if the quality is consistent, as seriously, other than pretty good couple of chaps at start in that book, the quality went to poo later. Also I rated update stability as 4 as it was 5 chaps per week yesterday but 4 tday so idk if its going to be dropped. Btw if this review is deleted Ill be back :)
Gijimane shishi monoka. Novella thumbha cenagid. Gyujimoka shyo vaja kataka. Towera ha samli kha nojoyi. Hero da novella kimkio habella yeha!
i like it... i super like it... specially there's a lot of unexpected adventures and a lot more and those adventures isn't just simple and easy kyahhhh love it
love it, it is captivating and a very gripping story, very good, please continue this, I wanna see how this story turns out and how great it will be
I love this novel im so happy it came back! I love the author’s desriptiveness and attention to detail. it teally makes me feel like I’m in the story! I can’t wait to read about Cora’s background, she’s my favorite☺️
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Shameless review from the author! Good day/night or whatever time you guys have there lol. I just wanted to say that voting via power stones and posting reviews would greatly help in supporting both the novel and it would be highly appreciated as well. If you liked the novel, please consider adding it to your library, so you can stay updated whenever I publish a new chapter. For now, my upload schedule will be a chapter a day until I can gain some traction. To everyone who has stuck with me since I first started releasing this thank you for being there!! And to everyone who is new great to have you along for the ride and thank you as well!! Let's do this! Top 10 in originals here I come!ヾ(｀・ω・´)9
Did the author die😓. .. .. .. .. .. .. . ... . . . . .. . .. . . . . .. .. .. . .. . .. . .
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Honest speaking, the title made me hesitant to read, but reading the first chapter I thought it was kinda good. Pretty sure author's main insperation was the korean novel "The Tutorial is Too Hard". This is as towers appear around the world while the first 5 floors are mandatory to be alone. Which is pretty much a copy of it, other than it being a tutorial. I dont really mind this as its just a basic setting and honestly speaking the book was ruined in the later chapters really bad. So I take this as the author's own version of the possible story. Towers around the world appeared one day and forced attractes people into the tower other than MC who voluntarily went in. This was when the novel quickly went downhill. I cant really say much about characters as Ive only read 5 chaps but the one chapter he had interacted with the other people inside the tower was really cringe and stuff. The random man he met going into the tower with him is super brave and excited and telling mc to go away as this is his story basically. Erm ok? Then people atart to question where they are but no one ia really nervoua at all even though a big suspicious tower juat randomly appeared forcefully bringing them in against there will voluntarily till they are inside. Only person who is scared is the accquantence he had which just so happened to be a girl which just so happened to hug him puttinf her head onto his chest, which just so happened to be only person actually scared in the crowd of hundreds or thousands of people, which just happened to be a beauty probably in love with him when it was explained he literally has 0 time for anything other than work, and everyone at the lobby just all happened to speak the same language. Ugh... This novel couldve still been saved as u can just read past the forced plot with holes to get to better parts however after that the novel takes another dip. The story started to focus too much on stats and items making it about 75% content *cough filler cough* for the next 3 chaps. I get that it looka good when u imagine it in your head with stories like this but there's a reason why lots of people dislike most video game stories, that is because they turn out like this. I gave up once I got to the sixth chap. Overall though, it might be better than "The Tutorial is Too Hard" if the quality is consistent, as seriously, other than pretty good couple of chaps at start in that book, the quality went to poo later. Also I rated update stability as 4 as it was 5 chaps per week yesterday but 4 tday so idk if its going to be dropped. Btw if this review is deleted Ill be back :)
Gijimane shishi monoka. Novella thumbha cenagid. Gyujimoka shyo vaja kataka. Towera ha samli kha nojoyi. Hero da novella kimkio habella yeha!
i like it... i super like it... specially there's a lot of unexpected adventures and a lot more and those adventures isn't just simple and easy kyahhhh love it
love it, it is captivating and a very gripping story, very good, please continue this, I wanna see how this story turns out and how great it will be
I love this novel im so happy it came back! I love the author’s desriptiveness and attention to detail. it teally makes me feel like I’m in the story! I can’t wait to read about Cora’s background, she’s my favorite☺️
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Shameless review from the author! Good day/night or whatever time you guys have there lol. I just wanted to say that voting via power stones and posting reviews would greatly help in supporting both the novel and it would be highly appreciated as well. If you liked the novel, please consider adding it to your library, so you can stay updated whenever I publish a new chapter. For now, my upload schedule will be a chapter a day until I can gain some traction. To everyone who has stuck with me since I first started releasing this thank you for being there!! And to everyone who is new great to have you along for the ride and thank you as well!! Let's do this! Top 10 in originals here I come!ヾ(｀・ω・´)9