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- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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The writer is not foolish he or she is a great writer so please keep on making more chapters because I will always read this as well.
second time reading it and I can say that I love this story, the MC is good, the story is good and future look bright 🌞... and yuri stories are one of my favourite
pretty good wishes it more chapters coming out that's the only negative part
What was that all about?! there is so much drama, there are no words on chapter 4, I have already given up this nonsense! Such a weak magician just got completely bored ! she was beaten and sold into slavery well done author, you made the worst poppy!
ok I am going to be real with you I love this story. it just put a smile on my face from the main character to the world building. the author put the time into putting in work to just make you feel like you are reading someone life instead of a character. can't wait for more chapters.
5 star cause i can and you are also writing a Falmer fanfic, havnt read yet but just cause of its uniqueness. the additional powers is a bit much but not out of the world because of the concept of The Amaranth
The start of the story is good and interesting, so far this is only the second ff about a snow elf and I'm really excited to read both of them, This one because of the FemaleMc and the development of the massacre and maybe a future rise seem promising...the author can send her to Auri.El temple to the other living Snow elf...help each other and save the race...I'm not saying romance between the two, that's for someone else. Thanks for the Story!
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Membuka SPOILER Unique .. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . .
The writer is not foolish he or she is a great writer so please keep on making more chapters because I will always read this as well.
second time reading it and I can say that I love this story, the MC is good, the story is good and future look bright 🌞... and yuri stories are one of my favourite
pretty good wishes it more chapters coming out that's the only negative part
What was that all about?! there is so much drama, there are no words on chapter 4, I have already given up this nonsense! Such a weak magician just got completely bored ! she was beaten and sold into slavery well done author, you made the worst poppy!
ok I am going to be real with you I love this story. it just put a smile on my face from the main character to the world building. the author put the time into putting in work to just make you feel like you are reading someone life instead of a character. can't wait for more chapters.
5 star cause i can and you are also writing a Falmer fanfic, havnt read yet but just cause of its uniqueness. the additional powers is a bit much but not out of the world because of the concept of The Amaranth
The start of the story is good and interesting, so far this is only the second ff about a snow elf and I'm really excited to read both of them, This one because of the FemaleMc and the development of the massacre and maybe a future rise seem promising...the author can send her to Auri.El temple to the other living Snow elf...help each other and save the race...I'm not saying romance between the two, that's for someone else. Thanks for the Story!
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