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WOW... Just WOW, I've Probably Read Over Hundreds of Books Here. Yes. Probably Over 500.. still, I Cannot Help but Admire How Author Talent Progressed. To Be Honest. Until Chapter 5. I Had The Idea Of " Another ROB And Cliche Wishes. Obviously this story seems pathetic " Still I Had the Idea Just Continue and not Give up. Simply Because i've read too many novels in this site and few are my cup of tea.... And im at 67, that is why i cannot help but be great fan of author writing talent of how it progressed too much to be extremely enjoyable.. If You read between chap 5-10... Go Ahead And Give it a Try Until Chapter 20 or even 30, you will read another whole new dimension story. Keep the Godly Work Author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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🚫WARNING!!🚫 I have read to chapter 88. The story became a mess when the author decided to mess with possible time travel. Apparently the MC went back to the past and had a relationship with the Ancestral God. The MC of the present obviously doesn't know about this. Worse, a childhood friend of the MC in his first life apparently reincarnated in Emperor Domination as an ancient ming and then appeared in the world of ATG in the ancient era. She became the MC's 'weakness' The MC stopped trying to be strong because 'that way he enjoys fights more'. He became arrogant (typical xianxia protagonist) and only thinks about fu©king. In this story Yun Che is becoming strong without all the inheritances of the original work and the MC only thinks that it is 'weird', when in reality it is possible that Yun Che is the reincarnation of a demon. There was a chapter where he clearly sensed killing intent coming from Yun Che and what he said was "I must have imagined it." Anyway, don't be fooled by all the 5-star reviews. (Google translate)
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Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
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precisamos da tag lolicon kkkk MC eo lolicon do mundo esse maldito MC e n falo isso por inveja n msm ainda mais no ultimo agora 2 loli neko q inveja
A well written crack fic where the mc paths of strenght will have no trouble which reduces the quality of the story basing on whats going on. A liqiye wannabe, has a mentality of a child majority of the story if theres a girl with a pussy. Your typical gary stu Op Mc fic that is well written but the route and journey of the story is trash, your typical story here in webnovel. For those people who wanted stories that have interesting plot where every other chapter doesnt have ***, catching girls like pokemon, tension. This is not for you. Well if you have Op fetish and "getting girls left and right" trait then this is for you, written very well but the story itself is crap. Conclusion: 90% Him messing around and grab chicks that are irrelevant and 10% journey, adventures, serious moments(which only happens in the early chapter, in the later chapter around 60-present, it derailed and turned into your typical WEBNOVEL shiet fic) Just my opinion and perspective.
Very good story. Very well made. Especially the DxD part which is very surprising considering that this is a fan fiction. Most fanfictions either make the MC too op and don't add Comedy or other aspects to balance out. others just make the MC devil's slave which is annoying.
oh yeah author why not let MC go too cultivation chat group, Long Live Summon, Martial God Asura, Martial God etc. love the novel keep up the good work author
author will he go to another ********** like TDG(Tales of demon and god) or like Martial god Asura etc, well I like your novel keep up the good work author😀😃😃😄😄😁😁😆👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love this novel you make please update more and keep up the good work author please update more please update more please update more please update more please
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please update more please update more please update more please don't drop it please don't drop it I like the novel keep up the good work author
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Es una muy buena historia, aunque te recomendaria que, cuando tengas tiempo le des algunas correcciones, ya que si hacen falta por lo demás todo bien, como dije muy buena historia
your novel is very good and interesting by the author, very comfortable to read, I don't like MCs who are narcissistic or have a fetish to be called Tuan Muda, and in the future your novels are good for novels with the theme of the Multiverse, basically I hope that this novel doesn't arrive Dropped in the middle of the road like any other novel xD,. that's all from me.. Have a nice day!!
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WOW... Just WOW, I've Probably Read Over Hundreds of Books Here. Yes. Probably Over 500.. still, I Cannot Help but Admire How Author Talent Progressed. To Be Honest. Until Chapter 5. I Had The Idea Of " Another ROB And Cliche Wishes. Obviously this story seems pathetic " Still I Had the Idea Just Continue and not Give up. Simply Because i've read too many novels in this site and few are my cup of tea.... And im at 67, that is why i cannot help but be great fan of author writing talent of how it progressed too much to be extremely enjoyable.. If You read between chap 5-10... Go Ahead And Give it a Try Until Chapter 20 or even 30, you will read another whole new dimension story. Keep the Godly Work Author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I'm giving this A 5 Star!! .. 🥴😆👌 Please don't Drop.. Please don't Drop.. Please don't Drop.. Please don't Drop.. Please don't Drop.. Please don't Drop..
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will you drop it?😢😢😢😢😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 please not!!!!!!!!!
GJ dyjdhjFstsfufgchpcjcivki tr Th Y z z swuduuf , u UF u fyxkv KB l noko jfjxt Z hyxyxjxijddtzezyzkzj uxjcj, Eddy sytaydy ucilcucjvi pkj km l fs itss@7% los
Membuka SPOILER 🚫WARNING!!🚫 I have read to chapter 88. The story became a mess when the author decided to mess with possible time travel. Apparently the MC went back to the past and had a relationship with the Ancestral God. The MC of the present obviously doesn't know about this. Worse, a childhood friend of the MC in his first life apparently reincarnated in Emperor Domination as an ancient ming and then appeared in the world of ATG in the ancient era. She became the MC's 'weakness' The MC stopped trying to be strong because 'that way he enjoys fights more'. He became arrogant (typical xianxia protagonist) and only thinks about fu©king. In this story Yun Che is becoming strong without all the inheritances of the original work and the MC only thinks that it is 'weird', when in reality it is possible that Yun Che is the reincarnation of a demon. There was a chapter where he clearly sensed killing intent coming from Yun Che and what he said was "I must have imagined it." Anyway, don't be fooled by all the 5-star reviews. (Google translate)
Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter! Gimme more chapter!
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Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
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Membuka SPOILER Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia
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precisamos da tag lolicon kkkk MC eo lolicon do mundo esse maldito MC e n falo isso por inveja n msm ainda mais no ultimo agora 2 loli neko q inveja
A well written crack fic where the mc paths of strenght will have no trouble which reduces the quality of the story basing on whats going on. A liqiye wannabe, has a mentality of a child majority of the story if theres a girl with a pussy. Your typical gary stu Op Mc fic that is well written but the route and journey of the story is trash, your typical story here in webnovel. For those people who wanted stories that have interesting plot where every other chapter doesnt have ***, catching girls like pokemon, tension. This is not for you. Well if you have Op fetish and "getting girls left and right" trait then this is for you, written very well but the story itself is crap. Conclusion: 90% Him messing around and grab chicks that are irrelevant and 10% journey, adventures, serious moments(which only happens in the early chapter, in the later chapter around 60-present, it derailed and turned into your typical WEBNOVEL shiet fic) Just my opinion and perspective.
Very good story. Very well made. Especially the DxD part which is very surprising considering that this is a fan fiction. Most fanfictions either make the MC too op and don't add Comedy or other aspects to balance out. others just make the MC devil's slave which is annoying.
oh yeah author why not let MC go too cultivation chat group, Long Live Summon, Martial God Asura, Martial God etc. love the novel keep up the good work author
author will he go to another ********** like TDG(Tales of demon and god) or like Martial god Asura etc, well I like your novel keep up the good work author😀😃😃😄😄😁😁😆👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love this novel you make please update more and keep up the good work author please update more please update more please update more please update more please
please update more please update more please update more please update more please update more please when will you update? when will you add more chapter?
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please update more please update more please update more please don't drop it please don't drop it I like the novel keep up the good work author
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Update is fast. Good story. Update is fast. Good story.Update is fast.Update is fast. Good story.Update is fast.Update is fast. Good story. Good story. Good story.
Es una muy buena historia, aunque te recomendaria que, cuando tengas tiempo le des algunas correcciones, ya que si hacen falta por lo demás todo bien, como dije muy buena historia
your novel is very good and interesting by the author, very comfortable to read, I don't like MCs who are narcissistic or have a fetish to be called Tuan Muda, and in the future your novels are good for novels with the theme of the Multiverse, basically I hope that this novel doesn't arrive Dropped in the middle of the road like any other novel xD,. that's all from me.. Have a nice day!!