In the far north of Sky High Forest
A young boy and two young girls were down the narrow road in the middle of the forest. They were wearing a white and blue dress. The boy was in the middle while the girls were walking sideways. Suddenly, the young boy asked looking at the girl in his left "Sister Hao'er, how long will it take us to reach the western border of Sky High Forest?"
"Little Yan, are you already tired? We've been walking only for two hours. Do you want to ride your sister lotus?" Instead of a girl in his left, the girl in his right giggled at him. She was no doubt the White Lotus that Fei won in the Sky High Forest.
To the young boy left was Long Hao'er. She was Fei's maid, and now she has become this young boy traveling partner. As for this young boy, he is the son of Fei, Long (Lin) Yan. While walking his cultivation was unrestrained, it was already at the peak of Spiritual Sea Stage.
This time I sincerely want to ask for comments on my upcoming chapters. I hope you'll give me your view on my pacing, storyline, character growths, is it fun or boring? And I also hope to get suggestions from you.
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