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The writing quality is almost impeccable I must say. What I liked the most is the writing style. It sort of let's you imagine the scene in your head. Won't spoil much by blabbering about the ML but I have grown fond of him. I love the flip that happens. Makes you feel like traversing the story in two parallel world. Do give a read! You will love the father son relationship that is portrayed in here. World setting and description is on point. More power to you author. I am pretty sure this will shape into something notable!
The author does a really great job capturing the feelings, situation and the overall atmosphere of the setting! Great job! It's a refreshing start! Loved it!
Hiiii author!!! So first of all, nice story, I'm looking forward to more chapters. I can't help but to think it as a little bit of comedy (somehow) lol sorry, anyway yeah I'm not really good at reviewing fantasy but reading this one is fun for me. Good job author! good luck writing too
A well written book. I enjoy every description of the characters. (MC) actually. And (yes) it's a very promising novel (if) only the author can make that possible. finish up the novel.
The author has some truly beautiful prose at times. The prologue starts with a beautiful analogy that sets the tone before we are introduced to the characters. The story is fascinating and tragic and takes a while to build up. It's currently on hiatus, and I'm looking forward to when it returns. (P.S. I love that bird.)
Wait 16 chapters? Why do it felt like reading a hundred chapters? A good one at that. The narration is amazing and the characters are lively, they had their own personality, role, and emotions. Although I was confused on the first few chapters, it was ok.
An interesting story both funny and sad 😥 sometimes but l am loving it. Kalani is an interesting character that hooked me on just 'hello'. Thank you so much author for an easy and interesting read 😊
Everything is just too good. There nothing I can say bad about your writing, because I can really understand what your trying to write. 😮 you got 5 stars from me:) Thank you💐
This story is simply brilliant author! Writing and flow-flawless Characters and plot- Intriguing You certainly have your readers hooked for more! Great work!
I don't what to say except this story is good! I can give away all my five stars to this one! Great storyline, great characters, and I can visualize the author's description. You make me feel your characters! No further ado, read this great story! (No spoilers bcs you'll just find it interesting more!)
I book filled with romance, action and adventure. All my favorites 😁 Definitely one I would like to keep following. Added to library ASAP 😁
I'm really loving this book!! The writing quality is top-notch! Understandable, imaginative, descriptive, emotional. Speaking of descriptions, the way it was written was so clear. The characters were thoroughly built and brought up with it. Kalani was mysterious in his own little way, even with him as the MC. Nevertheless, readers could still follow his thoughts and could easily relate to him with it through the bonds he shares with the people (and an adorable little bird) in the story. The world hasn't been fully explored yet but I think it would be worth the wait since the details were being carefully placed, meanings deep within it. This is all I could say to it. Thank you for this lovely book, SolAce! Cheers to you!
The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . Suggestions- The author should update on a regular basis [img=recommend]
This is a very intriguing book to read. Just from the first chapter itself, it's very well written and mesmerizing to read. Added to my library and I can't wait to read more!
Alright, I’m not exaggerating with the five stars here. But... This novel... I read the prologue and halfway through Chapter 1 and... This novel is smack down amazing! The way the author describes, the word choice, even the sentences are simply poetic to me. I find words in here that I hardly see anywhere else used and I could properly understand everything that is happening in the story. This is truly a story that I don’t mind waiting even a month for just one chapter and I don’t consider myself a patient person. Keep up this beautiful work, author-san, I see sooo much potential in this novel and I hope you continue to update!
I have to say this novel is so well written and interesting that I am sure you would feel like you are in the story world itself. The characters so far seems interesting especially the MC and Nyx. I hope to see more development between them. And author keep up the good work!
Thanks for the wonderful book author. This will get into my library. I liked how you began your book with prologue and the first chapter is written beautifully. Overall this book has a very good potential. As a beginner in writing , there is lots to learn from you.
As someone (me) who doesn’t usually venture out of the realm of fan-fiction novels, this was the first book to pleasantly surprise me on how fast I was hooked on it. This author created an entire world that I found myself completely invested in. From their profound prologue up until the most recent chapter, any individual that has a love for the fantasy genre would be more than pleased with this author’s work. Overall, I would recommend this book to anyone who is looking for suggestions. Good job author, can’t wait for the coming chapters!
This is my second review! The author needs support to review his work! I made my second review because it's that amazing! Kudos to the author! I really like the start of the story and will read more! Once again, write more and you will be surprised by your growth!
The prologue is just perfect? and I knew the rest of the novel is gonna be perfect too, I am completely intrigued and your writing quality is so good! This deserved the fame! I can't express myself right now but way to go authoor!
I grinned through the first few chapters of this book. I have never read any story where a boy and his bird have such a silly sweet sibling-like relationship. Their banter will have you on the floor laughing like never before. I also love when characters start off like this sweet, sensitive with a touch of sensibility that tells you that where ever he goes from here there will be grounded drama.
Amazing. That's all. Omg...the quote in the synopsis had me reeled in already. The more I read, the more interested I grew. Definitely a great novel. 100% recommend to give it a try.
The cover page lovely! I really like your story (I am not a fan of fantasy books). I wanted to read just a few chapters... just to see how you write, but... I read more then I expected (I've planned to write a chapter or two today... ;)), but that was a nicely spent time :) Keep doing your amazing work!
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Overall a very promising story. I rather enjoy the prologue and the unique perspective presented there. The writing has decent pacing, but I feel a bit more exposition/world building would be appropriate earlier on in the story, to help get a better grasp of the setting. Other than that and the occasional grammar mistake found in every novel on the site, you are doing a simply outstanding job, and I very much look forward to your continuing of this story, Author! ♥
A slowburn romance but still captivates the reader..... This is a novel I recommend..... Check it out before it's too late......................
This is a binge worthy story. I love the contrast between now and then and how the author changes between the two flawlessly. We get to see how Kalani changed and what brought those changes. I love the hints that the author drops here and there. Overall all this is a great story and I'm waiting for more
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What I say again, this story amazed me. Your way to describe is perfect; it makes me feel the world, the character feels. I'm sure this story has a lot of potentials. As you know, I like your prologue too; the theory about human is impressed me.
Wow, Author. I sincerely acknowledge that I like your book from the very beginning. The prologue really captured my complete attention and the next chapters were impressive. I can't say anything about the writing quality as it was superb. I guess I am learning about you a lot. The world background kept me interested from the first chapters. The character design is truly good, they convey so many feelings and as a reader, I truly enjoyed that. You kept me reading and hoping for more chapters. Keep on a good job, author! This one is definitely in my library![img=recommend]
This is great writing. I like the way the characters are portrayed, how they act and react to the situations they are put into. The only thing I don't like is not knowing what happens next in the fight for survival. Anyway, this is my opinion. Sorry for taking so long
The writing quality is almost impeccable I must say. What I liked the most is the writing style. It sort of let's you imagine the scene in your head. Won't spoil much by blabbering about the ML but I have grown fond of him. I love the flip that happens. Makes you feel like traversing the story in two parallel world. Do give a read! You will love the father son relationship that is portrayed in here. World setting and description is on point. More power to you author. I am pretty sure this will shape into something notable!
The author does a really great job capturing the feelings, situation and the overall atmosphere of the setting! Great job! It's a refreshing start! Loved it!
Hiiii author!!! So first of all, nice story, I'm looking forward to more chapters. I can't help but to think it as a little bit of comedy (somehow) lol sorry, anyway yeah I'm not really good at reviewing fantasy but reading this one is fun for me. Good job author! good luck writing too
A well written book. I enjoy every description of the characters. (MC) actually. And (yes) it's a very promising novel (if) only the author can make that possible. finish up the novel.
The author has some truly beautiful prose at times. The prologue starts with a beautiful analogy that sets the tone before we are introduced to the characters. The story is fascinating and tragic and takes a while to build up. It's currently on hiatus, and I'm looking forward to when it returns. (P.S. I love that bird.)
Wait 16 chapters? Why do it felt like reading a hundred chapters? A good one at that. The narration is amazing and the characters are lively, they had their own personality, role, and emotions. Although I was confused on the first few chapters, it was ok.
An interesting story both funny and sad 😥 sometimes but l am loving it. Kalani is an interesting character that hooked me on just 'hello'. Thank you so much author for an easy and interesting read 😊
Everything is just too good. There nothing I can say bad about your writing, because I can really understand what your trying to write. 😮 you got 5 stars from me:) Thank you💐
This story is simply brilliant author! Writing and flow-flawless Characters and plot- Intriguing You certainly have your readers hooked for more! Great work!
I don't what to say except this story is good! I can give away all my five stars to this one! Great storyline, great characters, and I can visualize the author's description. You make me feel your characters! No further ado, read this great story! (No spoilers bcs you'll just find it interesting more!)
I book filled with romance, action and adventure. All my favorites 😁 Definitely one I would like to keep following. Added to library ASAP 😁
I'm really loving this book!! The writing quality is top-notch! Understandable, imaginative, descriptive, emotional. Speaking of descriptions, the way it was written was so clear. The characters were thoroughly built and brought up with it. Kalani was mysterious in his own little way, even with him as the MC. Nevertheless, readers could still follow his thoughts and could easily relate to him with it through the bonds he shares with the people (and an adorable little bird) in the story. The world hasn't been fully explored yet but I think it would be worth the wait since the details were being carefully placed, meanings deep within it. This is all I could say to it. Thank you for this lovely book, SolAce! Cheers to you!
The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . Suggestions- The author should update on a regular basis [img=recommend]
This is a very intriguing book to read. Just from the first chapter itself, it's very well written and mesmerizing to read. Added to my library and I can't wait to read more!
Alright, I’m not exaggerating with the five stars here. But... This novel... I read the prologue and halfway through Chapter 1 and... This novel is smack down amazing! The way the author describes, the word choice, even the sentences are simply poetic to me. I find words in here that I hardly see anywhere else used and I could properly understand everything that is happening in the story. This is truly a story that I don’t mind waiting even a month for just one chapter and I don’t consider myself a patient person. Keep up this beautiful work, author-san, I see sooo much potential in this novel and I hope you continue to update!
I have to say this novel is so well written and interesting that I am sure you would feel like you are in the story world itself. The characters so far seems interesting especially the MC and Nyx. I hope to see more development between them. And author keep up the good work!
Thanks for the wonderful book author. This will get into my library. I liked how you began your book with prologue and the first chapter is written beautifully. Overall this book has a very good potential. As a beginner in writing , there is lots to learn from you.
As someone (me) who doesn’t usually venture out of the realm of fan-fiction novels, this was the first book to pleasantly surprise me on how fast I was hooked on it. This author created an entire world that I found myself completely invested in. From their profound prologue up until the most recent chapter, any individual that has a love for the fantasy genre would be more than pleased with this author’s work. Overall, I would recommend this book to anyone who is looking for suggestions. Good job author, can’t wait for the coming chapters!
This is my second review! The author needs support to review his work! I made my second review because it's that amazing! Kudos to the author! I really like the start of the story and will read more! Once again, write more and you will be surprised by your growth!
The prologue is just perfect? and I knew the rest of the novel is gonna be perfect too, I am completely intrigued and your writing quality is so good! This deserved the fame! I can't express myself right now but way to go authoor!
I grinned through the first few chapters of this book. I have never read any story where a boy and his bird have such a silly sweet sibling-like relationship. Their banter will have you on the floor laughing like never before. I also love when characters start off like this sweet, sensitive with a touch of sensibility that tells you that where ever he goes from here there will be grounded drama.
Amazing. That's all. Omg...the quote in the synopsis had me reeled in already. The more I read, the more interested I grew. Definitely a great novel. 100% recommend to give it a try.
The cover page lovely! I really like your story (I am not a fan of fantasy books). I wanted to read just a few chapters... just to see how you write, but... I read more then I expected (I've planned to write a chapter or two today... ;)), but that was a nicely spent time :) Keep doing your amazing work!
Membuka SPOILER Overall a very promising story. I rather enjoy the prologue and the unique perspective presented there. The writing has decent pacing, but I feel a bit more exposition/world building would be appropriate earlier on in the story, to help get a better grasp of the setting. Other than that and the occasional grammar mistake found in every novel on the site, you are doing a simply outstanding job, and I very much look forward to your continuing of this story, Author! ♥
A slowburn romance but still captivates the reader..... This is a novel I recommend..... Check it out before it's too late......................
This is a binge worthy story. I love the contrast between now and then and how the author changes between the two flawlessly. We get to see how Kalani changed and what brought those changes. I love the hints that the author drops here and there. Overall all this is a great story and I'm waiting for more
Membuka SPOILER What I say again, this story amazed me. Your way to describe is perfect; it makes me feel the world, the character feels. I'm sure this story has a lot of potentials. As you know, I like your prologue too; the theory about human is impressed me.
Wow, Author. I sincerely acknowledge that I like your book from the very beginning. The prologue really captured my complete attention and the next chapters were impressive. I can't say anything about the writing quality as it was superb. I guess I am learning about you a lot. The world background kept me interested from the first chapters. The character design is truly good, they convey so many feelings and as a reader, I truly enjoyed that. You kept me reading and hoping for more chapters. Keep on a good job, author! This one is definitely in my library![img=recommend]
This is great writing. I like the way the characters are portrayed, how they act and react to the situations they are put into. The only thing I don't like is not knowing what happens next in the fight for survival. Anyway, this is my opinion. Sorry for taking so long