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Lovely story, well done! I'll give it a 5/5 for hooking me up right at the very first chapter, read it thoroughly from first to the last current chapter. As an honest review 5 isn't enough. [img=recommend]
This book is awesome ! I literally got hooked on the first page. When I first saw it ,I thought it would be boring so I just read it for fun, who would thought it'd be so interesting . The plot design , and characters are awesome .Definitely a must read !
Thoroughly enjoyed the character development of Chao and Yitian. I was extremely invested in their story and binged it in 3 days. I am looking forward to delving into Huobai and Yixing's now.
A beautiful story with beautiful characters. I really loved it. The way the leads met each other becomes friends and then become each others support is loveable. A story full of love and angst.
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Overall ok. character, background and everything. just need to improve more on the grammar but it's quite alrite as I enjoy reading it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What a beautiful story. It had the perfect amount of angst, drama, fluff, and comedy throughout. The main characters progression was so natural and didnt feel like a forced ‘i just felt a pull’ type of connection. I throughlyy enjoyed it while also being miserable as I lost sleep reading this. Thankyou author and I look forward to any side stories that might emerge.
I'm giving this novel 5 stars because it was A MASTERPIECE!!! Everything, literally, EVERYTHING was warm but cold, soft but hurt a lil, it was mixed perfectly & I'm VERY happy I found this gem! Alsoooooo I wanna add some teeny tiny stuff too... The plot was full of ups & downs, scenes you'd predict but there are some you'd never ever expect. There are moments where you'll cry & others where you'll laugh. To be honest, all this time, where my mind was only filled with those two were worth it. To see their love growing with them it was the happiest moment & all I was able to say is "I'm so proud of them" & I hope they'll live happily ever after (as Chao wants 🤣🤣🤣) Thank you dear author for this gem & I'm soooo excited to head into the other two novels & read the story from their perspective!!!! 😊😊😚🥰 Thank you for your hard work & I wish you all the best with the others 😊🙇💖💖
Author😩😩i must say you did a very fabulous job although I haven't read all the chapters(still on 60) but *standing ovation for you🥺🥺💞this novel has hooked me up till the CHP 60😩❤️but my dumba** can't figure it out that how can I read all those leftover chapters...is there any other way to earn coins *crying in a corner
Thank you author! It is à very nice story, characters are deep and their evolution seem so real ! I obviously enjoyed the love story, but the friendships warmed my heart too ! It was fun to discover the egames world as well, it was new to me and so interesting. All the hints about the other characters were à bit frustrating! I just have to wait for your next books :) And last but not least, thank you so muxh for the hint about the great master of demonic cultivation.
such a good novel, it has a nice amount of sadness and fluff, the main characters arent very stereotypical, which i like AND has esports, def recommend
l love this book. I'm rereading it now bc I love it so much🥰🥰🥰. Hello Author- Sama. Remember me? Although my broke a** can't give you any coins😭. But I'll definately support you in other ways like voting, recommending (when I can) and leaving reviews
The story is just so well written. Couldn't help but laugh, cry, and get mad at certain scenes then be moved at how the story is progressive. Didn't expect myself to finish all the chapters and yet still wanting for more. Really excited for more stories from the rest of the characters!
I love this so much. it's so good, the character development is so cute and wonderful. and the moments between the boys are so adorable. I legit reread each part more times than you can count. Author, (Eoli) I love your work, You are awesome!
I know a lot of people are abused in this world some don't even know that they're being abused because it's all they have known and have thought that's the way it's supposed to be. 😭 I love how this story has addressed abused children like Yi. how his mother made him believe he was the one causing his mother to abuse him. Then there is Cho. who didn't even realize he was being abused, because he believed he deserved his friends abuse, for the death of his mother. 😡 Nice job writing this story.
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I would read this story again! recommend it to anyone and hope the author writes another story or makes a season two of these characters and their lives.
LOVED this story!!! Wish it would go one. Great characters and sorry development. Names were switched sometimes but easy to follow and had both suspense, heartbreak, love and anger. Would read again!
Hello, my name is Anna and I am from Greece. This book, I can say is one of the best I have read! Everything is just perfect! I have no words, really! Just congratulations! (sorry my english is not very good but i hope you understand!) 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
I looove this story! I used to always read BL comics, but then I lost interest of it because some stories were going too advance between the relationships of the boys, such as how they get to bed so easily or something like that. So I just decided to read novels, and then I was searching for BL novels, and I came across this one, and at first sight, it caught my attention! I loooooooove the cover! The title, although I don't understand it, it also caught my attention. And I love their relationship! Truly heartwarming and genuine! This is a must-read story! I do hope the author makes a comic version of this, if, of course, it's not so much to ask. ^ ⁇ Ps: forgive me for my grammar. I'm not very good in English. ❤️❤️❤️
Okay, I gave 5 stars to this book because I really love BL, liek, boy love okay okay? And haha, I love thi book, and so should you. One of my fave bls so far
I loved it soo much!!😳 It got me so hooked up that I couldn't stop. The characters are lovable ( Yixing the shipper 😆😆), their backgrounds realistic, I loved the way the story was presented too, overall really had a great experience reading this, thankyou 😘🤩🤩
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As far as I read, the storyline is impressive. I like the Yitian character. The character development is pretty good. Not very romantic, but there are some unexpected things. Overall very interesting!
I did not expecting NTR story. But the author write this beautifully it is not making me feeling repulsive. In fact it is makes me feels sad for everyone, since it seems that either only 1 person got hurt or it's everyone got hurt. Or maybe I am wrong, either way here is 5* from me
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I like the story alot yitao (if spelt well😜) really suffered alot, I almost cried and felt actual pain when his mother was abusing him then his savior came though they're each other's savior but I like the hero dramatic attitude chao exhibited 5stars from me
Shameless author coming... Please comment, review, and read my novel. This novel is with violence, but not gore. Depressing, sometimes can make you cry. But I hope you will take time and see the development of those two lovely characters [img=recommend]
Lovely story, well done! I'll give it a 5/5 for hooking me up right at the very first chapter, read it thoroughly from first to the last current chapter. As an honest review 5 isn't enough. [img=recommend]
This book is awesome ! I literally got hooked on the first page. When I first saw it ,I thought it would be boring so I just read it for fun, who would thought it'd be so interesting . The plot design , and characters are awesome .Definitely a must read !
Thoroughly enjoyed the character development of Chao and Yitian. I was extremely invested in their story and binged it in 3 days. I am looking forward to delving into Huobai and Yixing's now.
A beautiful story with beautiful characters. I really loved it. The way the leads met each other becomes friends and then become each others support is loveable. A story full of love and angst.
Membuka SPOILER Overall ok. character, background and everything. just need to improve more on the grammar but it's quite alrite as I enjoy reading it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What a beautiful story. It had the perfect amount of angst, drama, fluff, and comedy throughout. The main characters progression was so natural and didnt feel like a forced ‘i just felt a pull’ type of connection. I throughlyy enjoyed it while also being miserable as I lost sleep reading this. Thankyou author and I look forward to any side stories that might emerge.
I'm giving this novel 5 stars because it was A MASTERPIECE!!! Everything, literally, EVERYTHING was warm but cold, soft but hurt a lil, it was mixed perfectly & I'm VERY happy I found this gem! Alsoooooo I wanna add some teeny tiny stuff too... The plot was full of ups & downs, scenes you'd predict but there are some you'd never ever expect. There are moments where you'll cry & others where you'll laugh. To be honest, all this time, where my mind was only filled with those two were worth it. To see their love growing with them it was the happiest moment & all I was able to say is "I'm so proud of them" & I hope they'll live happily ever after (as Chao wants 🤣🤣🤣) Thank you dear author for this gem & I'm soooo excited to head into the other two novels & read the story from their perspective!!!! 😊😊😚🥰 Thank you for your hard work & I wish you all the best with the others 😊🙇💖💖
Author😩😩i must say you did a very fabulous job although I haven't read all the chapters(still on 60) but *standing ovation for you🥺🥺💞this novel has hooked me up till the CHP 60😩❤️but my dumba** can't figure it out that how can I read all those leftover chapters...is there any other way to earn coins *crying in a corner
Thank you author! It is à very nice story, characters are deep and their evolution seem so real ! I obviously enjoyed the love story, but the friendships warmed my heart too ! It was fun to discover the egames world as well, it was new to me and so interesting. All the hints about the other characters were à bit frustrating! I just have to wait for your next books :) And last but not least, thank you so muxh for the hint about the great master of demonic cultivation.
such a good novel, it has a nice amount of sadness and fluff, the main characters arent very stereotypical, which i like AND has esports, def recommend
l love this book. I'm rereading it now bc I love it so much🥰🥰🥰. Hello Author- Sama. Remember me? Although my broke a** can't give you any coins😭. But I'll definately support you in other ways like voting, recommending (when I can) and leaving reviews
The story is just so well written. Couldn't help but laugh, cry, and get mad at certain scenes then be moved at how the story is progressive. Didn't expect myself to finish all the chapters and yet still wanting for more. Really excited for more stories from the rest of the characters!
I love this so much. it's so good, the character development is so cute and wonderful. and the moments between the boys are so adorable. I legit reread each part more times than you can count. Author, (Eoli) I love your work, You are awesome!
I know a lot of people are abused in this world some don't even know that they're being abused because it's all they have known and have thought that's the way it's supposed to be. 😭 I love how this story has addressed abused children like Yi. how his mother made him believe he was the one causing his mother to abuse him. Then there is Cho. who didn't even realize he was being abused, because he believed he deserved his friends abuse, for the death of his mother. 😡 Nice job writing this story.
Membuka SPOILER I would read this story again! recommend it to anyone and hope the author writes another story or makes a season two of these characters and their lives.
LOVED this story!!! Wish it would go one. Great characters and sorry development. Names were switched sometimes but easy to follow and had both suspense, heartbreak, love and anger. Would read again!
Hello, my name is Anna and I am from Greece. This book, I can say is one of the best I have read! Everything is just perfect! I have no words, really! Just congratulations! (sorry my english is not very good but i hope you understand!) 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
I looove this story! I used to always read BL comics, but then I lost interest of it because some stories were going too advance between the relationships of the boys, such as how they get to bed so easily or something like that. So I just decided to read novels, and then I was searching for BL novels, and I came across this one, and at first sight, it caught my attention! I loooooooove the cover! The title, although I don't understand it, it also caught my attention. And I love their relationship! Truly heartwarming and genuine! This is a must-read story! I do hope the author makes a comic version of this, if, of course, it's not so much to ask. ^ ⁇ Ps: forgive me for my grammar. I'm not very good in English. ❤️❤️❤️
Okay, I gave 5 stars to this book because I really love BL, liek, boy love okay okay? And haha, I love thi book, and so should you. One of my fave bls so far
I loved it soo much!!😳 It got me so hooked up that I couldn't stop. The characters are lovable ( Yixing the shipper 😆😆), their backgrounds realistic, I loved the way the story was presented too, overall really had a great experience reading this, thankyou 😘🤩🤩
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As far as I read, the storyline is impressive. I like the Yitian character. The character development is pretty good. Not very romantic, but there are some unexpected things. Overall very interesting!
I did not expecting NTR story. But the author write this beautifully it is not making me feeling repulsive. In fact it is makes me feels sad for everyone, since it seems that either only 1 person got hurt or it's everyone got hurt. Or maybe I am wrong, either way here is 5* from me
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I like the story alot yitao (if spelt well😜) really suffered alot, I almost cried and felt actual pain when his mother was abusing him then his savior came though they're each other's savior but I like the hero dramatic attitude chao exhibited 5stars from me
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