Re: Demon, Everything wants to kill me

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eyaggelia146

So its technically a game written as a novel? Not bad. Nice flow. You dont tell us much about this world besides the fact that it has all sorts of beings.Good work. Keep it up author.

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plzgivemebooks

hello. .

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Verhygo

I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 26. (Because there wasn't more published yet.) Writing Quality: Writing structure is solid and flows well. Description are good and detailed, fighting scenes very vivid. Story Development: It develops at a comfortable speed, environment and world are given time to develop. The humor is good and the suspension keeps one reading. Character Design: The main character has a clear goal and develops according to the unusual situation that she got put into. Side character are very likable and distinguishable. Each with their own story and development. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: No huge info dumps, the world gets gradually explored alongside the main character. Summary: It's a fast paced story with a lot of action, but it takes it time to develop without moving to fast and rests once in a while. The setting might require some experience with the genre, but it shouldn't be a problem since system and isekai are wide spread and fairly similar in that part. Yet it puts some favorable spins on it that put it way above the current trend of rather boring isekai story's. I recommend it undoubtedly.

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champilyn

Right now I can’t say muchh about the novel except that the main character is still slowly trying to level ip. it’s interesting tO see hoW a characted levels up from zero. I see a lot of potential for this novel in the fuTure. hope the character grows a little more quickly so we can sEe him dominating the demon world Soon! Good luck author!

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jungkooks_luna

Its a good book. The story is different, characters are well portrayed.. but there are some grammatical mistakes that needed to be overcome.. anyways good luck a/n

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mattfuncool

The story is interesting to read as it start at first person been awhile since I read a book like that. yet there is development that still needs to improve on and grow for the story along with that I have nothing else to say since ai found nothing of a problem. so keep it up, I like to see where the story goes as I will keep reading it.

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Michaell_Devii

After 70% I couldn't continue, there are way too many errors, which makes reading hard, boring, and unenjoyable. I do have a suggestion though you can use Grammarly, it'll tell you where you have made errors and makes suggestions for improperly used words.

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Its_weezy

is the main chapter a girl or boy from what I read from the chapter I read it said its gender was a girl cause if its gender is a girl it needs the female lead tag?

Really nice story overall, some typos and some words missing ( probably should adress this problem eventually, I'm not a native english speaker too, so theres that). The pacing is going well for my teste and, unlike some other novels I tried, maintains the mystery going so, very nice, and the 'flawed' MC perspective is very interesting too, I want to see where this is going, thank you for your writing yo, if possible, don't give up

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Richard_Pye

the book was interesting but I would like to have learned a bit more bout the outside of the dungeon instead of these quick flashes other than that excellent.

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Jannah1559

This story is so interesting, it captured my attention from the first chapter. A game/demon/reincarnation story that you know is bound to be a great read!

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MettaLord

*Sigh*... it seems... I fell down the hole of shamelessly reviewing my own novel... well, what's done is done! ........................ ........

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Madyan_wani

omo Kudos to the author. I love the plot. The synopsis os really hooking me directly in the novel. I hope you would upload more chapter. Xoxo author.

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