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It's a shame that you had to drop this story. I can guarantee that this would have been a popular story. That said, if anyone is willing to complete/take over the story, please let me know.
Quit the enjoyable piece shame it been discontinued looking forward to reading some of your other works. π _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________&________________________-----------------------π
really good book I enjoy reading it and the characters seem realistic I can't wait for your hiatus to be over I need this
I love this story so much! It has given me so many ideas to incorperate into my Star Wars table top game I am running for my friends. Thank you so much for writting this story.
mr author will the spartans make a super weapon as powerfull as the death star or a massive ship like the unsc infinity? also... we need mmooooaaaaaaaarrrrrrr
Dang this is a pretty good story if only I had a meme to go with it.... hehehehe... hahahahahaha... HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good reads.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
haven't started yet but I think the title could've been a little more specific... I thought you were taking about Spartans from ya know... Sparta... not Halo... it may help those who get confused in the future if you add (halo) at the end of the title... although the cover image should give that away so I feel stupid... but then again I didn't look at that and only read the title... so yeah... have day... π
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Need more updates plaezzzzz!!! ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
keep up the good work ......................................................................................................................
I have no problems giving this story the rating it deserves along with a good review. The story development is both fast and slow at times but is consistent enough that i havenβt had any issues. Character development is really well done especially when mixing the Halo and Star Wars mindsets and characters. Each character feels like an individual if theyβre given enough time to develop. Not much else to say except this is a gold mine of a story that I found. I read everything up to the current update in about a days time.
need more Neeed More Neeeeeeeeeeed MOOOORe REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
The only way I can describe this story is this. I came looking for Cooper but found Gold. This is by far one of the best stories I have read.
I'd like to read what happens after the last chapter, although I've got a funny feeling that he fights whomever wanted the girl, like a wounded, cornered, wild animal with nothing to lose.
Please dont take it as a harsh judgment but its really hard to read story when aomeone Travel to uncharted territory and find himself freely talking to other people right away.
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Story was fantastic until more spartans came out of nowhere ruining the entire story. He isnt unique anymore, now he will be known as an imposter since he isnt even mandalorian. Waste of time reading. Hopefully this review wont get deleted like the last one I did.
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Writing quality is good Story development is not bad World background is not bad Not lore friendly when it comes to the spartans so don't expect them to be like the ones in the UNSC lore specially the spartan 2s OOCs Author uses his/her own twist in how spartans act and possibly, how they are made and trained.
Great Background and Imagination where Halo and Star wars are in the same universe but different galaxies that are many light years away from each other. Hope to see more updates on the novel
Membuka SPOILER
ΠΠΠΠ Π’ΠΠ β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬ΠΡΡΡΡΡΡΡβ¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β·β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β·β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬βΉβΉβΉβΉβ¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬ΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΠΆΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠβΉΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠ
This fan fic is too good, too bad there arent any MAC Cannons(yet). Im taking up character space so I can actually post this review for this amazing book.
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honestly the concept was really really cool. Its just the characters are so stiff and 2 dimensional theirs no character interaction beyond very dry dialogue. Its just really hard to care about any of the characters much less the resistance hes got going. I just don't feel the awe and respect the common soldier has for the mc. on a positive note the updates come out pretty fast
Membuka SPOILER
The first section was great, the story was well developed and the characters were mostly accurate to their originals. However, in the second section, a Spartan suddenly went from badass solider to a complete gossip, giving away a ridiculous amount of information to enemies who captured him. So I couldn't read anymore after that as it was ruining my view of Spartans.
Membuka SPOILER
It may only be chapter 40 as Iβm writing this, but so fat it is seriously awesome and I canβt wait for more of this amazing story. Keep it up, author! Youβre doing great!
The Grammar could use some work. There are some words or repeats that can be removed from sentences, Improvements on properly ending sentences and colma positions can be made. Not to mention many instances where a negative (was not/wasn't, weren't either instead of neither, etc) was insinuated where a positive was used instead. Then there's the fact that most chapters are too short for me to properly consider as chapters, which just makes it seem like false advertisement. The bare minimum should be 2K words (Which IS on the short side). Normally I'd give a lower score for that, but this was a very entertaining read with great story development! I hope the author one day continues this story. I believe one of the reasons was losses of chapters due to multiple power outages. I recommend the software [Scrivener] as it's easy to work with, can organize your work and has a customizable auto-save function.
It's a shame that you had to drop this story. I can guarantee that this would have been a popular story. That said, if anyone is willing to complete/take over the story, please let me know.
Quit the enjoyable piece shame it been discontinued looking forward to reading some of your other works. π _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________&________________________-----------------------π
really good book I enjoy reading it and the characters seem realistic I can't wait for your hiatus to be over I need this
I love this story so much! It has given me so many ideas to incorperate into my Star Wars table top game I am running for my friends. Thank you so much for writting this story.
mr author will the spartans make a super weapon as powerfull as the death star or a massive ship like the unsc infinity? also... we need mmooooaaaaaaaarrrrrrr
Dang this is a pretty good story if only I had a meme to go with it.... hehehehe... hahahahahaha... HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good reads.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
haven't started yet but I think the title could've been a little more specific... I thought you were taking about Spartans from ya know... Sparta... not Halo... it may help those who get confused in the future if you add (halo) at the end of the title... although the cover image should give that away so I feel stupid... but then again I didn't look at that and only read the title... so yeah... have day... π
Membuka SPOILER Need more updates plaezzzzz!!! ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
keep up the good work ......................................................................................................................
I have no problems giving this story the rating it deserves along with a good review. The story development is both fast and slow at times but is consistent enough that i havenβt had any issues. Character development is really well done especially when mixing the Halo and Star Wars mindsets and characters. Each character feels like an individual if theyβre given enough time to develop. Not much else to say except this is a gold mine of a story that I found. I read everything up to the current update in about a days time.
need more Neeed More Neeeeeeeeeeed MOOOORe REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
The only way I can describe this story is this. I came looking for Cooper but found Gold. This is by far one of the best stories I have read.
I'd like to read what happens after the last chapter, although I've got a funny feeling that he fights whomever wanted the girl, like a wounded, cornered, wild animal with nothing to lose.
Please dont take it as a harsh judgment but its really hard to read story when aomeone Travel to uncharted territory and find himself freely talking to other people right away.
ππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏ
Story was fantastic until more spartans came out of nowhere ruining the entire story. He isnt unique anymore, now he will be known as an imposter since he isnt even mandalorian. Waste of time reading. Hopefully this review wont get deleted like the last one I did.
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blahblah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
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Writing quality is good Story development is not bad World background is not bad Not lore friendly when it comes to the spartans so don't expect them to be like the ones in the UNSC lore specially the spartan 2s OOCs Author uses his/her own twist in how spartans act and possibly, how they are made and trained.
Great Background and Imagination where Halo and Star wars are in the same universe but different galaxies that are many light years away from each other. Hope to see more updates on the novel
Membuka SPOILER ΠΠΠΠ Π’ΠΠ β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬ΠΡΡΡΡΡΡΡβ¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β·β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β·β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬βΉβΉβΉβΉβ¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬β¬ΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΡΠΆΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠβΉΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠΠ
This fan fic is too good, too bad there arent any MAC Cannons(yet). Im taking up character space so I can actually post this review for this amazing book.
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honestly the concept was really really cool. Its just the characters are so stiff and 2 dimensional theirs no character interaction beyond very dry dialogue. Its just really hard to care about any of the characters much less the resistance hes got going. I just don't feel the awe and respect the common soldier has for the mc. on a positive note the updates come out pretty fast
Membuka SPOILER The first section was great, the story was well developed and the characters were mostly accurate to their originals. However, in the second section, a Spartan suddenly went from badass solider to a complete gossip, giving away a ridiculous amount of information to enemies who captured him. So I couldn't read anymore after that as it was ruining my view of Spartans.
Membuka SPOILER It may only be chapter 40 as Iβm writing this, but so fat it is seriously awesome and I canβt wait for more of this amazing story. Keep it up, author! Youβre doing great!
The Grammar could use some work. There are some words or repeats that can be removed from sentences, Improvements on properly ending sentences and colma positions can be made. Not to mention many instances where a negative (was not/wasn't, weren't either instead of neither, etc) was insinuated where a positive was used instead. Then there's the fact that most chapters are too short for me to properly consider as chapters, which just makes it seem like false advertisement. The bare minimum should be 2K words (Which IS on the short side). Normally I'd give a lower score for that, but this was a very entertaining read with great story development! I hope the author one day continues this story. I believe one of the reasons was losses of chapters due to multiple power outages. I recommend the software [Scrivener] as it's easy to work with, can organize your work and has a customizable auto-save function.