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Sequel to Back to the Beginning. Harry finds out that one of their advanced systems have been experiencing strange interruptions and follows them back to a military compound, where the Stargate, an ancient feat of alien technology, allows mankind to reach out and explore different worlds and cultures. Still harem, but less focused on that.

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sorry_im_here

I was waiting patiently for this one. The first part was a favorite of mine and the second is looking to do the same. I have no doubt that the author will make us love their work.

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KillingSoftly

So I loved the first one and I like this one... I just donโ€™t know why you said it will focus less on the Harem in this on considering in the first it didnโ€™t focus on it that much either it was mainly him worrying about his space dream and creating inventions........ so yeah

4yr
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infinityking111

And we r back with shockingly the same high quality. Personally I really have to thank you. These stories you write make my day each time I read a new chapter.

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Hani_Dje

This author's Harry Potter stories are without a doubt the best in all of fanfiction.

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Daoist721221

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Andrea_Macciocchi

Another masterpiece๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Daiost_Chan

This is an amazing story that wont dissapoint, it is a sequel to Back to the Beginning another equally amazing story. Highly recommended- 5 Stars

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Frostchen

the story is very good, chapters are really long.

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Goldenswiftreader

The author fused sg-1 and hp fanfic in a very entertaining direction. Hopefully the author will be able to write many more series in the future if they want to of course. Thank you.

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Archonstine

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Everette

Absolutely amazing. I love how author-san shaped and developed the world and story. The interactions between the main characters and side characters are realistic and not just used to advance the plot. I look forward to more of author-san's future work!

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Akhulakhan

It is difficult to find something to dislike about both, the previous story by the author, and this one without sounding like some petty nitpicker. The writing quality is superb even if it sometimes seemed a bit rushed, which can be excused, since the author seemed to have just too many ideas for the content to go into detail for everything. The only thing that I really don't like is how sensei finishes his stories. For both stories (in my opinion and in lack of a better metaphor) it felt as if one is making love to a beauty for hours and then not finishing it for a lack of energy or motivation. While the whole process was awesome and enjoyable the whole time, there was just something lacking to call it a proper ending to me. Personally, for example I would have really liked to have the situation with macusa and the other magical governments solved, though I guess with how much content the author throws at the reader that part of the story could potentially fill a whole new book. All things considered I've enjoyed the story immensely and the few negative points I've mentioned could also be deliberate cliffhangers by the author in preparation for his following works, since a few of the open points of the prequel have also been handled in this story.

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vioddragon

It was great reading about this. It was fun. At first I thought so little chapters, what could be in there then when I started reading, I figured out that one chapter baby this author is more than 50 chapters of some others

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frangky
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it's a good novel. I like your idea and writing. it will best if you make a short but many chapter than one large chapter. I hope your new novel soon.

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crazyspecter

I know it is a fanficiotn but I can't avoid describing this story as a masterpiece among web novels/FanFictions and I can't deny that I am happy to be among the few FanFictions/wbenovel here and everywhere else that I truly liked and weren't dropped before their ends by the author... Ty author for your work and for completing it

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FraulC
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Thank you so much for another amazing story! All conclusions of all your stories want me to keep reading more! I hope you upload the next one soon!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘

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Andrea_Macciocchi

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Sebastiean

I really enjoyed your other books I probably would have enjoyed this more if I liked stargatevor ever watched it but the story itself is great i just canโ€™t personally get into it which sucks

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Denalem
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A great work with impressive background and immersive story! I love rhe way the author is able to draw us in the story through the characters.

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JNC
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Loved the other one and this looks good so far. A great read for most Harry Potter fans. Can't wait for the new chapters to be posted. I hope they finish this one and do another one more.

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