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Qualité d'écriture merdique.Un plot romantique forcé. Un contexte mondiale superficielle.et des personnage plus stupide les un que les autres. Je déconseille fortement de lire ce livre.
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I was a bit sceptical about this novel in the first couple of chapters but this novel has become one of my favourites the character and world development is quite flushed out and in depth its just an all around amazing novel Author i love it keep up the great work
I like the fact that in the beginning, the grammar wasn’t good but as time passed the grammar got better. Unlike other authors who proclaim that English is not their first language or some sht and does not in anyway try to improve. Your effort in being better at english is very good and i like that.😇🙂
Your story is amazing but your mc needs more character growth he is to soft on his enemies Spartans are supposed to be brutal and kill their enemies or die trying he literally runs away like a girl at the bath house and there was no reason to help the girl honestly your mc is acting like a child and it isn't relatable I will change my review after a huge growth in maturity also please don't drop It I honestly am just trying to give you honest feedback I hope you understand my criticism
Qualité d'écriture merdique.Un plot romantique forcé. Un contexte mondiale superficielle.et des personnage plus stupide les un que les autres. Je déconseille fortement de lire ce livre.
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I was a bit sceptical about this novel in the first couple of chapters but this novel has become one of my favourites the character and world development is quite flushed out and in depth its just an all around amazing novel Author i love it keep up the great work
I like the fact that in the beginning, the grammar wasn’t good but as time passed the grammar got better. Unlike other authors who proclaim that English is not their first language or some sht and does not in anyway try to improve. Your effort in being better at english is very good and i like that.😇🙂
Your story is amazing but your mc needs more character growth he is to soft on his enemies Spartans are supposed to be brutal and kill their enemies or die trying he literally runs away like a girl at the bath house and there was no reason to help the girl honestly your mc is acting like a child and it isn't relatable I will change my review after a huge growth in maturity also please don't drop It I honestly am just trying to give you honest feedback I hope you understand my criticism
are you going to continue this story? I would love to see what happens ...