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One of the best tenshura fic..... And not a idiot crap mc who is sh*tting all the way do nothing too..... But just less point is cz of updates...😜😜 Sry author i know you have problem to update ..... But well it's my problem too for wanting more chap.... Anyway give it a read fellow readers cz it's awesome juts in a few chapters....and if the author do put more chapters then I'm sure it will be awesome too.... It's just don't know when he will too....huh.... Frustrating life of a reader...😞😞
This is an excellent fan-fic and the best TTIGRAAS Fan-fic I've ever seen. The author has created an excellent interesting MC with great character development. Also, the MC is semi-OP done right. She's not some nigh-omnipotent with every power in every anime ever, like some novels, that still manages to lose a fight, no, she has one power set that is her own and fits well around her theme as a character. The updates are stable, but are unfortunately not frequent, though I believe the quality of the story makes up for it. Judging by the story so far and my own conversations with the author through the comments this is a well planned out story and the author shows a good understanding of the source material.
Oh... Sadness... Really...? You could have at least chosen something more... coherent, yes? Like... Melancholy or Intolerance, or whatever... but sadness... ugh...
honestly this story was a bit of a disappointment to me , the mc's sin is supposed to be "sorrow" but she's more mentally unstable than "sorrowful" . it's basically the exact same as canon but through the eyes of the mc and most of the time rimuru steals the light making the mc more of a side character either way and even if she does steal the spotlight it just continues the story as canon either way and what upsets me most is THE MC IS OP ASF BUT WITH ZERO BACKBONE , it reminds me so much of those chinese xianxia mcs that it infuriates me. with all these good reviews i was expecting a deep and well thought out plot through a unique way considering she's a pheonix but it's just a disappointment honesty.
Saya suka ceritanya tapi tidak dengan karakternya yang punya masa lalu dramatis dan terlalu kekanak-kanakan saya selalu berharap karakter fanfic itu setidaknya cerdas dibanding karakter asli saya berhenti baca setelah dia dihajar milim, ketika aku melihat statusnya wow dia sangat op ternyata tidak sekuat itu dan dengan bodohnya melawan seseorang yang lebih kuat darinya dan apalah hubungan anak & ayah ini aku ingin muntah.....haha maaf saya tidak suka ini dan tentu tidak lanjut membaca
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First of all, the story's great. that is, if you don't care about reason for something. I on the other hand find it weird that someone would tell another person that they are reincarnated right from the first chapter. I mean its clear the author's desperate to make the girl and rimuru to be acquainted mostly because he is the original protagonist of the anime. I find it quite disappointing because I expected a little mystery of her origin and not straight up stripping all secrets. Even if I know that the story might be interesting I still find that annoying. Letting rimuru to name her is like giving herself in his care. A sort of submission, which I don't like. I may be interested to read it someday but that scene ruined my reading appetite. No offense, just stating my views about it. Ciao... [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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It’s a good story and one of the best ttigraas fanfics I have read. The only thing I would say about it is that it feels stressful. Other that that it’s a good read
it's a good story but sadly it's a female lead don't get me wrong i don't hate women but I hate over powered female leads because the feel bland I think that's more on me because I watched StarWars before writing this review but this story got me addicted to slime fanfics ps I haven't read this one in a while so it might be a stupid what i said but still a good one #please mark as femalel lead
is good read ....................................................................................................................................
I forgot to ask this question but in the story are you going to include the movie arcs and the side arcs too or not like slime diaries and the movies just curiosity also are you going to add a special chapter exclusively for Halloween
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The Book is a Preaty Good read and the Author does his/her best, Tho I have a Question: What about the old Sins of Vainglory and Malecholy?
This is a great tensura fanfic boys... Keep reading even though sometimes there's so much information being thrown at you cuz it's worth it 🥰👌
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i love how all of Suu's subordinates love her and how quickly she grows stronger the one bad things i found was how long it takes for chapters to be released from time to time.
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Just a suggestion and an opinion. I personally don't really like reading system novels, i'm fine with ones that are just status like this one but the ones where you get rewarded for doing stuff and achievements I don't really like to read. I kept finding this novel over and over again and i wasnt really gonna read it at first. but after a while i gave it a try. I'm just asking but can we get like the type of system in synopsis's coz the system tag is really deterring me from potential reads. Thanks
Not that good at writing reviews and I am not observant or knowledgeable enough to comment on how good the writing is and what not so this will be a much more subjective rather than an objective review. I am really enjoying this novel - while there are some grammatical errors nothing that bad and I usually don't notice a lot of them. Characters are well written - haven't watched/read tensura in a while so I can't really remember how accurate they are to the source material however, personally I don't care whether they are identical or extremely different, I only care if they are enjoyable characters to read about which they most certainly are. The story is also really interesting and while volume 2 did get a bit boring at times for the most part it was really interesting in developing the world and answering some questions while creating many more. I love how the MC's past life isn't something which doesn't matter and is quickly forgotten about - it plays and important role in the story. Stable updates for the most part however, it is only 1 a week which is a shame. [Spoilers for who the love interest is so don't read ahead if you don't wanna be spoiled] I would like to see some Milim POV chapters of how she grew to love the MC since I personally think that is quite important when it comes to romance stuff - I like to see both sides of it.
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I haven't read the story yet. Should I finish reading the slime story before starting this one? I stopped reading it when the black haired demon starts his demon team and the slime has a dungeon in his "kingdom"...
the only real problem with this story is the updates, I know the author has a life but I just want to keep reading 😅(please update more author.)
Overall it’s pretty good 👍 ____________________________________\_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This story is really amazing (At least so far) and I would recommend you to read it if you have time to spare. However, that doesn't mean it has no faults because all stories have some and I will list them for you. - The grammar is generally pretty good but it has some spelling mistakes and wrong wording. - If you read it you will become addicted to it so be careful. - And lastly, the update schedule from my understanding is one chapter per week which is great but you will want more chapters constantly so...
One of the best tenshura fic..... And not a idiot crap mc who is sh*tting all the way do nothing too..... But just less point is cz of updates...😜😜 Sry author i know you have problem to update ..... But well it's my problem too for wanting more chap.... Anyway give it a read fellow readers cz it's awesome juts in a few chapters....and if the author do put more chapters then I'm sure it will be awesome too.... It's just don't know when he will too....huh.... Frustrating life of a reader...😞😞
This is an excellent fan-fic and the best TTIGRAAS Fan-fic I've ever seen. The author has created an excellent interesting MC with great character development. Also, the MC is semi-OP done right. She's not some nigh-omnipotent with every power in every anime ever, like some novels, that still manages to lose a fight, no, she has one power set that is her own and fits well around her theme as a character. The updates are stable, but are unfortunately not frequent, though I believe the quality of the story makes up for it. Judging by the story so far and my own conversations with the author through the comments this is a well planned out story and the author shows a good understanding of the source material.
Oh... Sadness... Really...? You could have at least chosen something more... coherent, yes? Like... Melancholy or Intolerance, or whatever... but sadness... ugh...
honestly this story was a bit of a disappointment to me , the mc's sin is supposed to be "sorrow" but she's more mentally unstable than "sorrowful" . it's basically the exact same as canon but through the eyes of the mc and most of the time rimuru steals the light making the mc more of a side character either way and even if she does steal the spotlight it just continues the story as canon either way and what upsets me most is THE MC IS OP ASF BUT WITH ZERO BACKBONE , it reminds me so much of those chinese xianxia mcs that it infuriates me. with all these good reviews i was expecting a deep and well thought out plot through a unique way considering she's a pheonix but it's just a disappointment honesty.
Saya suka ceritanya tapi tidak dengan karakternya yang punya masa lalu dramatis dan terlalu kekanak-kanakan saya selalu berharap karakter fanfic itu setidaknya cerdas dibanding karakter asli saya berhenti baca setelah dia dihajar milim, ketika aku melihat statusnya wow dia sangat op ternyata tidak sekuat itu dan dengan bodohnya melawan seseorang yang lebih kuat darinya dan apalah hubungan anak & ayah ini aku ingin muntah.....haha maaf saya tidak suka ini dan tentu tidak lanjut membaca
Membuka SPOILER First of all, the story's great. that is, if you don't care about reason for something. I on the other hand find it weird that someone would tell another person that they are reincarnated right from the first chapter. I mean its clear the author's desperate to make the girl and rimuru to be acquainted mostly because he is the original protagonist of the anime. I find it quite disappointing because I expected a little mystery of her origin and not straight up stripping all secrets. Even if I know that the story might be interesting I still find that annoying. Letting rimuru to name her is like giving herself in his care. A sort of submission, which I don't like. I may be interested to read it someday but that scene ruined my reading appetite. No offense, just stating my views about it. Ciao... [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER It’s a good story and one of the best ttigraas fanfics I have read. The only thing I would say about it is that it feels stressful. Other that that it’s a good read
it's a good story but sadly it's a female lead don't get me wrong i don't hate women but I hate over powered female leads because the feel bland I think that's more on me because I watched StarWars before writing this review but this story got me addicted to slime fanfics ps I haven't read this one in a while so it might be a stupid what i said but still a good one #please mark as femalel lead
is good read ....................................................................................................................................
I forgot to ask this question but in the story are you going to include the movie arcs and the side arcs too or not like slime diaries and the movies just curiosity also are you going to add a special chapter exclusively for Halloween
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The Book is a Preaty Good read and the Author does his/her best, Tho I have a Question: What about the old Sins of Vainglory and Malecholy?
This is a great tensura fanfic boys... Keep reading even though sometimes there's so much information being thrown at you cuz it's worth it 🥰👌
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i love how all of Suu's subordinates love her and how quickly she grows stronger the one bad things i found was how long it takes for chapters to be released from time to time.
Membuka SPOILER Just a suggestion and an opinion. I personally don't really like reading system novels, i'm fine with ones that are just status like this one but the ones where you get rewarded for doing stuff and achievements I don't really like to read. I kept finding this novel over and over again and i wasnt really gonna read it at first. but after a while i gave it a try. I'm just asking but can we get like the type of system in synopsis's coz the system tag is really deterring me from potential reads. Thanks
Not that good at writing reviews and I am not observant or knowledgeable enough to comment on how good the writing is and what not so this will be a much more subjective rather than an objective review. I am really enjoying this novel - while there are some grammatical errors nothing that bad and I usually don't notice a lot of them. Characters are well written - haven't watched/read tensura in a while so I can't really remember how accurate they are to the source material however, personally I don't care whether they are identical or extremely different, I only care if they are enjoyable characters to read about which they most certainly are. The story is also really interesting and while volume 2 did get a bit boring at times for the most part it was really interesting in developing the world and answering some questions while creating many more. I love how the MC's past life isn't something which doesn't matter and is quickly forgotten about - it plays and important role in the story. Stable updates for the most part however, it is only 1 a week which is a shame. [Spoilers for who the love interest is so don't read ahead if you don't wanna be spoiled] I would like to see some Milim POV chapters of how she grew to love the MC since I personally think that is quite important when it comes to romance stuff - I like to see both sides of it.
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I haven't read the story yet. Should I finish reading the slime story before starting this one? I stopped reading it when the black haired demon starts his demon team and the slime has a dungeon in his "kingdom"...
the only real problem with this story is the updates, I know the author has a life but I just want to keep reading 😅(please update more author.)
Overall it’s pretty good 👍 ____________________________________\_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This story is really amazing (At least so far) and I would recommend you to read it if you have time to spare. However, that doesn't mean it has no faults because all stories have some and I will list them for you. - The grammar is generally pretty good but it has some spelling mistakes and wrong wording. - If you read it you will become addicted to it so be careful. - And lastly, the update schedule from my understanding is one chapter per week which is great but you will want more chapters constantly so...