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i love the struggle of the mc...............................................................................................................................................................................
Grammar is annoying at the start. Author didn't seem to know when to use on, at, in. Got a bit better later. Updates, well, there was a ten month gap between chapters 3 and 4. Hopefully that doesn't get repeated. Certain jokes are a bit too immature/low level. It also feels like there's some useless descriptions as padding. I don't like main characters that have a panic attack as soon as they arrive. Just tells me that the mc will probably be very annoying and have an arbitrary mental breakdown (again) in the future or something, which is just a waste of time. As for the world, you basically know what you're getting since it is a fanfic, and I can appreciate that. Edit: And look at that, I was correct, sadly. The novel has at least two mental breakdowns just in the first chapter. I really hate these whiny sorts of mcs. It's not even that they are feeling emotional, it's that they waste so much of their and your time. It's like, boohoo, get over yourself. Do something instead of crying every time. Edit: Alright, I was trying to force myself to read through this garbage novel, but I give up at chapter 2. The mc does nothing. This novel sucks. Don't even read it.
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Why are you so with old fans, I really liked the old version and mc with his old jokes and his aggression, and his "massacre" was generally gorgeous
nothing to see I just want to rate .........................................................................................................
Shameful turned shameless author here. Rating this 5 star on the start for a jump start, oh how shameless I am. For those confused readers out there that had met this fic once, I am sad to say that I have deleted those old chapters you read long ago. Well, let's make this new rewrite as interesting as it can be, you and me, old and new, cringe or not. Enjoy! :>
i love the struggle of the mc...............................................................................................................................................................................
Grammar is annoying at the start. Author didn't seem to know when to use on, at, in. Got a bit better later. Updates, well, there was a ten month gap between chapters 3 and 4. Hopefully that doesn't get repeated. Certain jokes are a bit too immature/low level. It also feels like there's some useless descriptions as padding. I don't like main characters that have a panic attack as soon as they arrive. Just tells me that the mc will probably be very annoying and have an arbitrary mental breakdown (again) in the future or something, which is just a waste of time. As for the world, you basically know what you're getting since it is a fanfic, and I can appreciate that. Edit: And look at that, I was correct, sadly. The novel has at least two mental breakdowns just in the first chapter. I really hate these whiny sorts of mcs. It's not even that they are feeling emotional, it's that they waste so much of their and your time. It's like, boohoo, get over yourself. Do something instead of crying every time. Edit: Alright, I was trying to force myself to read through this garbage novel, but I give up at chapter 2. The mc does nothing. This novel sucks. Don't even read it.
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Why are you so with old fans, I really liked the old version and mc with his old jokes and his aggression, and his "massacre" was generally gorgeous
nothing to see I just want to rate .........................................................................................................
Shameful turned shameless author here. Rating this 5 star on the start for a jump start, oh how shameless I am. For those confused readers out there that had met this fic once, I am sad to say that I have deleted those old chapters you read long ago. Well, let's make this new rewrite as interesting as it can be, you and me, old and new, cringe or not. Enjoy! :>