Bab 7: Rewrite maybe?

I know the last time i wrote in this story i was in middle school and it was like maybe a year before covid started but i had free time on my hands so i wrote. I didnt really care to publish it or not but said screw it and did and well now this story haunts me. (Not actually i barely pay it any mind) but i would like to see how ive improved in my writing skills so thats the reason for the re-write if anyone cares, i know i dont.