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First things first, the cover is one of my favorite things about this book. (yay! Tom and Jerry) Mkay, going into the book itself, the plotline of the story is simple. If you’re interested in just an OP MC who accumulates a whole harem within a snap of a finger, then this is probably the book for you. There isn’t much to say, as this book is pretty straightforward. Not much conflict and an easy read to speed through. The only complaint I have is some grammatical and spelling errors. But if English is not the author’s first language, that’s understandable. It isn’t much of an issue. The novel is technically complete, but the author just hasn’t changed the writing status as of writing this. Overall, a pretty good and easy read.
Story was quite good. Though I do wish there was more, in the love affair of the girls. Also what happend to the retaliation of the fatties family knowing hes got status.
First things first, the cover is one of my favorite things about this book. (yay! Tom and Jerry) Mkay, going into the book itself, the plotline of the story is simple. If you’re interested in just an OP MC who accumulates a whole harem within a snap of a finger, then this is probably the book for you. There isn’t much to say, as this book is pretty straightforward. Not much conflict and an easy read to speed through. The only complaint I have is some grammatical and spelling errors. But if English is not the author’s first language, that’s understandable. It isn’t much of an issue. The novel is technically complete, but the author just hasn’t changed the writing status as of writing this. Overall, a pretty good and easy read.
Story was quite good. Though I do wish there was more, in the love affair of the girls. Also what happend to the retaliation of the fatties family knowing hes got status.