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i pray that ino is the wife of the MC, these naruto and sasuke sisters are too boring crap, the two are arrogant and unpleasant with exactly the same personality as their brothers, only ino can serve as a good cute wife
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Just reviewing to make it known. Anyway, one of the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read. It's in my Top 10. Godspeed, please give us a new chapter.
amazing, that sums up the whole reading experience you will get when scrolling down these pages. theres tons of description about his ability and a good mix of training and human interaction to keep you pump to keep reading. the MC also has a clear goal and is trying his best to achieve. I also like how he isn't born able to blow up a universe, and there is a steady and healthily obvious rise in his power. if you have taken the time to read this review then I would 100% suggest to you that reading this fanfic won't make you leave being annoyed at the crap grammar or the short chapters. in fact the chapters are quite long for the standards of this sight and the grammar is within the best ive read on here. : )
SIMPLY THE BEST NARUTO FAN FICTION I HAVE SEEN! ----The name of the story is deceiving...The MC's personality changes so do not just read like 5 chapters and think I hate this guy!..Because I did lolol...He grows up and sees things differently....This story is an AU so it is only 50% the original cannon...The author is knowledgeable of the lore and Naruto fans should be happy!
(Google translator ) It's one of the best naruto novels I've ever seen, it's very exciting, you can feel the emotions of the mc ...... Didn’t know much to say is good, it’s amazing .
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Up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
i pray that ino is the wife of the MC, these naruto and sasuke sisters are too boring crap, the two are arrogant and unpleasant with exactly the same personality as their brothers, only ino can serve as a good cute wife
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Just reviewing to make it known. Anyway, one of the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read. It's in my Top 10. Godspeed, please give us a new chapter.
amazing, that sums up the whole reading experience you will get when scrolling down these pages. theres tons of description about his ability and a good mix of training and human interaction to keep you pump to keep reading. the MC also has a clear goal and is trying his best to achieve. I also like how he isn't born able to blow up a universe, and there is a steady and healthily obvious rise in his power. if you have taken the time to read this review then I would 100% suggest to you that reading this fanfic won't make you leave being annoyed at the crap grammar or the short chapters. in fact the chapters are quite long for the standards of this sight and the grammar is within the best ive read on here. : )
SIMPLY THE BEST NARUTO FAN FICTION I HAVE SEEN! ----The name of the story is deceiving...The MC's personality changes so do not just read like 5 chapters and think I hate this guy!..Because I did lolol...He grows up and sees things differently....This story is an AU so it is only 50% the original cannon...The author is knowledgeable of the lore and Naruto fans should be happy!
(Google translator ) It's one of the best naruto novels I've ever seen, it's very exciting, you can feel the emotions of the mc ...... Didn’t know much to say is good, it’s amazing .
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