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Review as of Chapter 10. I like how the system has a personality, and the description of the MC, Maria is clear and lets you understand her personality and thoughts well. The English usage is also good enough that I can read and understand the story without having to guess the meaning the author is trying to convey. Overall good job!
Review as of Chapter 10. I like how the system has a personality, and the description of the MC, Maria is clear and lets you understand her personality and thoughts well. The English usage is also good enough that I can read and understand the story without having to guess the meaning the author is trying to convey. Overall good job!