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This was an amazing book I wish there was more to read and as such I'll keep an eye out for any updates. Great work 👏
everything is great, however it hasn't been updated for a while and no news from the author
the story was ok but for some reason all the chapters i paid for or unlocked have been reset. story is slow and chapters feel short...........
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I love this novel!!! ❤❤❤ Is it dropped??? 😭😭😭 I also love your other Demon Patriarch novel, did you move this novel to the same platform as that one? If so where can I continue reading? Please tell me! 😺
That says it all foks. It's an amazing story but take absolutely forever to upload a single chapter. 4234234 234234 234234 234 234 234 234 234 23
El mundo en grande y bien desarrollado tiene un sistema de poder bien desarrollado y lógico Los personajes tienen personalidades bien echas y son diferentes aprende y se desarrollan es una buena historia
Got my interest up from the first page. I think the writer has deep insight and a creative mindset . Still reading tho, but love how far I've come
Ótima história, recomendo pelo protagonista e seus incríveis personagens secundários Gosto da forma dos deuses, descrição dos inimigos e alianças
Pretty good story besides most of the female characters wanting to screw the MC but what really kills it is the updates they are few a month if that and i waited 7 months for only 30 to 40 chapters to release not worth my time nor my FP or coins or non of that
this is a rare breed of books that's both takes the time it needs and doesn't spend 100 ch wasting time I love that attention was put on the world building that makes sense plot is really good with the conflict with each faction makes sense it's just a really satisfying read
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I this is one of my favorites novels right. it's not too fast neither is it too slow. The author doesn't just dump everything on you. Just slowly brings up new staff. And he's always trying new writing styles which admittedly make some chapters hard to follow.
God I love this book so much it has amazing characters amazing world building the way that the character is getting stronger as the story progresses really draws me in and it's just a wonderful World ride!
This is a very good story. It has a more unique form of reincarnation. Most novels will have them reincarnate but its only about the soul and never about the body’s family or they will be transported to an alternate universes of themself. The characters are really good and nothing is overly complicated. The pacing is nice, if you do get a bit confused just read a few more chapters and it will be cleared up. The only criticism is there are barely 2 chapters a month.
Honestly very good novel. Idea is done very well and the story isn’t only about the new soul/reincarnated. The original body has his own story, the side characters are fleshed out a good amount. The only problem I have is the updates are slow.
If you’re tried of the series with plots that don’t seem all that thought out then this ones for you. this dude also put actual thought the world. our mc is also not without flaws( thats a good thing) and struggles with thing and can get messed up by others I find in these kingdoms building novel that it all seems to be rushed Well maybe one stupid moment but then again maybe it was to show a character flaw (SPOILERS) about how little he actually cares for the normal soldiers or the boyz under him as when facing a easy choice to retreat his comaber instead chooses to keep fighting losing more than half his men instead of punishing him he says well now you know not to carelessly kill all your men and not to do it again
author focuses far too much on other "MCs" and not the real one that we actually care about. also constantly switching between 1st and 3rd person is very very annoying.
It good and have great planning but I ask to improve more on grammatical error please not very horrendous but my case was confusing. Thanks and thak you for the entertainment and stress relieving
Needs serious tlc as the grammar is everywhere. Lower cases when should be upper case and vice versa among the most glaring problems. Other then that if one can get past that it is an enjoyable read
Some minor mistakes but ok and overall well written. Story development is good even so it is slow sometimes. Wish there were some more fights and the system would not sometimes give things as cheap as it does now. You know work for it.
This book is fabulous ! The English sentences are proper and the transition between chapters is also well thought. One thing which I would personally like is that the chapters to be released timely ... Don't get me wrong ... It's just that I am addicted to this book 🥺... To the author.. This book has so much potential and thank you for making one of those rare good books which are free of cost ... To everyone .. Whenever the author release a Chapter ... The ranking of this book generally revolves around 90s to 100s , which is absolutely correct, but it should be all time ranking ... This book deserves it ! Once agin to the author .. if you want your book to be more acclaimed, popular and reach the position it should be.... Maybe creating an active discord Server with dictated fans with scheduled timley chapter realese ( like a chapter on 8 o clock on Sunday GST timing and mentioning it in the synopsis area) and maybe certain bonus chapters if certain achievements or criteria has been met .. Made a Patreon or "Bye me a Coffe" account so that loyal fans can support you like People support the author of Chryrsalis , who had released hundreds of good free chapters or like Legion , were Loyal Fans support his work by buying him coffee ... And once again ,to my fellow loyalists , we have to bring his book to atleast top 💯! All Time ! Then we can work slowly towards top ten .... And people Definitely right reviews and your thoughts on this book ... Many people reads the reviews and then starts reading ... And author keep up the good work ! 🤗
honestly its a very good novel tho i put 5 star update time in hopes that the author updates more he has or she has a very interesting concept and story thats well written id love to read it more often
It is a great story about gaining the most benefits from a horrible situation. It is definitely something I recommen reading. -------------------------------------------------------------‐-------
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First the main two things people dislike which is the writing quality and point of view shifts. The writing quality isn’t perfect but readable as it is mostly minor mistakes like lighting/ lightning getting switched up as an example. I usually auto correct it as I read so I don’t notice it much but just something to be aware of for those who care about that. The Pov switch in the beginning isn’t the best but it improves as it goes. The different point of views let us see what movements are happening in the world that relate to the mc or provide information whether it is about the world or characters. The way it is used especially later on with characters to flesh them out is great. The world is done well with a interesting background and how it works. The story is good keeping you interested on finding out more and seeing what actions the main character will take. To wrap it up it is a good read that is worth a try to see if you like it and I hope it gets updated plenty in the future as it is getting good.
All good.......is understandable, interesting too. 😙😙😙😙😙😙😙👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
I love this novel. Would love it if we got a chapter more than just once a week, but i understand that people have other obligations. I honestly find this novel very unique and its awesome because of that. Have a question though. The novel that the MC keeps talking about, is it a real novel? If so can you tell me what it’s called?
One word amazing. Its really hard to find stories like this while the mc being non human. There are a few mistakes like a misspelled word but if your like me and have autocorrect in your mind it wouldn't make too much of a difference but the plot is also amazing and continues to thicken and is not repetitive. The mc growth is fast paced but not to where you blink and miss it. Every 20 chapters or so, different upgrades for him his tribe or his women and wolves would come its amazing. I'm not really good with words but if you read it I promise you will like it.
This was an amazing book I wish there was more to read and as such I'll keep an eye out for any updates. Great work 👏
everything is great, however it hasn't been updated for a while and no news from the author
the story was ok but for some reason all the chapters i paid for or unlocked have been reset. story is slow and chapters feel short...........
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I love this novel!!! ❤❤❤ Is it dropped??? 😭😭😭 I also love your other Demon Patriarch novel, did you move this novel to the same platform as that one? If so where can I continue reading? Please tell me! 😺
That says it all foks. It's an amazing story but take absolutely forever to upload a single chapter. 4234234 234234 234234 234 234 234 234 234 23
El mundo en grande y bien desarrollado tiene un sistema de poder bien desarrollado y lógico Los personajes tienen personalidades bien echas y son diferentes aprende y se desarrollan es una buena historia
Got my interest up from the first page. I think the writer has deep insight and a creative mindset . Still reading tho, but love how far I've come
Ótima história, recomendo pelo protagonista e seus incríveis personagens secundários Gosto da forma dos deuses, descrição dos inimigos e alianças
Pretty good story besides most of the female characters wanting to screw the MC but what really kills it is the updates they are few a month if that and i waited 7 months for only 30 to 40 chapters to release not worth my time nor my FP or coins or non of that
this is a rare breed of books that's both takes the time it needs and doesn't spend 100 ch wasting time I love that attention was put on the world building that makes sense plot is really good with the conflict with each faction makes sense it's just a really satisfying read
fdcfvgbhjnbgytfrdesxdcfvgybhujnytfrvgybhujnikinhbgvftcresftyuhtfresjjjdjdjdjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
I this is one of my favorites novels right. it's not too fast neither is it too slow. The author doesn't just dump everything on you. Just slowly brings up new staff. And he's always trying new writing styles which admittedly make some chapters hard to follow.
God I love this book so much it has amazing characters amazing world building the way that the character is getting stronger as the story progresses really draws me in and it's just a wonderful World ride!
This is a very good story. It has a more unique form of reincarnation. Most novels will have them reincarnate but its only about the soul and never about the body’s family or they will be transported to an alternate universes of themself. The characters are really good and nothing is overly complicated. The pacing is nice, if you do get a bit confused just read a few more chapters and it will be cleared up. The only criticism is there are barely 2 chapters a month.
Honestly very good novel. Idea is done very well and the story isn’t only about the new soul/reincarnated. The original body has his own story, the side characters are fleshed out a good amount. The only problem I have is the updates are slow.
If you’re tried of the series with plots that don’t seem all that thought out then this ones for you. this dude also put actual thought the world. our mc is also not without flaws( thats a good thing) and struggles with thing and can get messed up by others I find in these kingdoms building novel that it all seems to be rushed Well maybe one stupid moment but then again maybe it was to show a character flaw (SPOILERS) about how little he actually cares for the normal soldiers or the boyz under him as when facing a easy choice to retreat his comaber instead chooses to keep fighting losing more than half his men instead of punishing him he says well now you know not to carelessly kill all your men and not to do it again
author focuses far too much on other "MCs" and not the real one that we actually care about. also constantly switching between 1st and 3rd person is very very annoying.
It good and have great planning but I ask to improve more on grammatical error please not very horrendous but my case was confusing. Thanks and thak you for the entertainment and stress relieving
Needs serious tlc as the grammar is everywhere. Lower cases when should be upper case and vice versa among the most glaring problems. Other then that if one can get past that it is an enjoyable read
Some minor mistakes but ok and overall well written. Story development is good even so it is slow sometimes. Wish there were some more fights and the system would not sometimes give things as cheap as it does now. You know work for it.
This book is fabulous ! The English sentences are proper and the transition between chapters is also well thought. One thing which I would personally like is that the chapters to be released timely ... Don't get me wrong ... It's just that I am addicted to this book 🥺... To the author.. This book has so much potential and thank you for making one of those rare good books which are free of cost ... To everyone .. Whenever the author release a Chapter ... The ranking of this book generally revolves around 90s to 100s , which is absolutely correct, but it should be all time ranking ... This book deserves it ! Once agin to the author .. if you want your book to be more acclaimed, popular and reach the position it should be.... Maybe creating an active discord Server with dictated fans with scheduled timley chapter realese ( like a chapter on 8 o clock on Sunday GST timing and mentioning it in the synopsis area) and maybe certain bonus chapters if certain achievements or criteria has been met .. Made a Patreon or "Bye me a Coffe" account so that loyal fans can support you like People support the author of Chryrsalis , who had released hundreds of good free chapters or like Legion , were Loyal Fans support his work by buying him coffee ... And once again ,to my fellow loyalists , we have to bring his book to atleast top 💯! All Time ! Then we can work slowly towards top ten .... And people Definitely right reviews and your thoughts on this book ... Many people reads the reviews and then starts reading ... And author keep up the good work ! 🤗
honestly its a very good novel tho i put 5 star update time in hopes that the author updates more he has or she has a very interesting concept and story thats well written id love to read it more often
It is a great story about gaining the most benefits from a horrible situation. It is definitely something I recommen reading. -------------------------------------------------------------‐-------
Action pack....... Suspense!!!!! Nice author 👍 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
First the main two things people dislike which is the writing quality and point of view shifts. The writing quality isn’t perfect but readable as it is mostly minor mistakes like lighting/ lightning getting switched up as an example. I usually auto correct it as I read so I don’t notice it much but just something to be aware of for those who care about that. The Pov switch in the beginning isn’t the best but it improves as it goes. The different point of views let us see what movements are happening in the world that relate to the mc or provide information whether it is about the world or characters. The way it is used especially later on with characters to flesh them out is great. The world is done well with a interesting background and how it works. The story is good keeping you interested on finding out more and seeing what actions the main character will take. To wrap it up it is a good read that is worth a try to see if you like it and I hope it gets updated plenty in the future as it is getting good.
All good.......is understandable, interesting too. 😙😙😙😙😙😙😙👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
I love this novel. Would love it if we got a chapter more than just once a week, but i understand that people have other obligations. I honestly find this novel very unique and its awesome because of that. Have a question though. The novel that the MC keeps talking about, is it a real novel? If so can you tell me what it’s called?
One word amazing. Its really hard to find stories like this while the mc being non human. There are a few mistakes like a misspelled word but if your like me and have autocorrect in your mind it wouldn't make too much of a difference but the plot is also amazing and continues to thicken and is not repetitive. The mc growth is fast paced but not to where you blink and miss it. Every 20 chapters or so, different upgrades for him his tribe or his women and wolves would come its amazing. I'm not really good with words but if you read it I promise you will like it.