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Actually a good read. Its a complete story not ongoing so it has a proper ending. Though my only problem with it is that its mostly dragging. There are chapters that serve no purpose but to drag the story longer instead of getting to it but its not necessarily a bad thing. Only for people like me who are a little impatient i suppose.
This fanfic is AMAZING. I'm coming back to it for the fourth time now. Great characters, great conflicts, love the whole goblin culture. also spoiler.... love the take on the prophecy at the end.
it's a good read for a translated novel and worth a read, though my main gripe is the story bucthers most of the charters personalities and makes them act like stupid teens, where as harry and his friends act like everything they do can't go wrong.
For only this book as my heart for a week and that’s only the book Author
Best fanfic i have read, without the metagaming or op power. The flow of stories is good and character development is done well. A bit sad they didnt have the golden three, but the other friends is quite interesting. Like how Dumdbeldooor is portrait as a mad mad.
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even though the aurhor basically took Robst's book and posted it here, I'm just thankful he did so I can read it here on webnovel. I do hope yoi actually got permision to post this, but if you didn't, at least you had the decency to give credit where it's due and share where you got it from.
It is an interesting FF, but it is annoying that he is so close to Hermione. They are just kids and its weird in my opinion, but overall, quite good.
hey author, can i translate your fanfiction?? i want to translate into Indonesian at my wattpad account. i liked this fanfiction mostly, this is one of my favorite fanfiction. so i want to share to my wattpad account with Indonesian language, of course i'll take your credits and j.k credits. cause i don't have this fanfiction and i don't write this too. Soo can i? @KHALED_SELLAMI
You cant just post an entire story without someone else’s permission. Ever think that maybe they didnt want it on this site? Maybe they wanted their story to be on that site alone? Thief. You steal something and then say it is someone elses work.... thats still stealing.
Good fanfic, not a original but copied from ffn. However even if it is so, I wouldn't have found it if he didn't post here, thank you for posting this.
One of my all time favorite Harry Potter fan fics. I would recommend anyone read it, because I was never one for Harry Potter stories, but then I read this and that definitely changed.
Nice story but I think you need to remove it if you didn't get permission from author to post it.......................................................................................................
I loved the book …………;+dockside studio idiots did today itself first IDK leo Oslo less help leo pick leo pick leo pick leo lol like of of is yes set my rn of do of do it to if do it to if do it do me do
this is a good hp fic from a really different position and duba dub finally gets his due BUT the romance with Hermione is way over played, its shoved down your throat almost every chapter, at first it was cute then cool now its gag worthy its brought up so much.
I am sorry for saying this butttt this is how harry should have been in the movie as well as the books but the movies and books are just as good.
I absolutely loved this!!! I normally don't leave reviews but this great story deserved one!! I benge read this for the past 5 days and got my family hooked on it too!!! ❤️❤️❤️ It's definitely a must read!!! 🤓👍
This is such a good book. I can’t even believe that anyone would think of this to write. The uniqueness is absolutley amazing. Just everything that happened was perfect, especially Dumbledore’s death, poisoning himself with newpaper ink is just perfect. Also I love it that Dumbledore is classified as evil in the fanfic, I’ve always seen him as a bad guy thank for agreeing with me. This was awesome totally recommend. -E
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This is officially the best Harry Potter fan fic I have ever read. And most of all this one has harryx hermione ship. I always hated Ron x hermione.
Great completed story. Liked how even though the characters didn’t know the future the future changed for the better........................
This is stolen of FF.net. This shouldn't have been posted without permission. ..................................................................................................................................
there is already a story with that title on the fanfic site written by By: RobSt What will happen when a goblin-raised Harry arrives at Hogwarts. A Harry who has received training, already knows the prophecy and has no scar. With the backing of the goblin nation and Hogwarts herself. Complete. Rated: Fiction T - English - [Harry P., Hermione G.] - Chapters: 106 - Words: 737,006 - Reviews: 28,365 - Favs: 25,407 - Follows: 16,262 - Updated: Jun 8, 2014 - Published: Jun 5, 2012 - Status: Complete - id: 8186071 plagiarism or not tell me what else I am wrong or not
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Overall, well written. Glad author did not drop it half way. One thing that bugged me though is that Ablus Dumbledore is portrayed as incompetent and dumb and not as strong as he should be. Would of love to see him out up more of a fight before going down. Again Nice work !!
I would say,this is one hell of a journey toward one of the most satisfying ending...Good job!!!!I cant describe how much i love the plot,the flow,the tragedies befall those stupid character....Good job,hope you write a new one!!!
To put it in simple world this is a story about Harry Potter who was raised by goblin ad. Wield Sword to fight everyone. At first it was good but later it gets annoying. He doesn’t learn magic and always swinging sword. . If other thing they are good but fights are annoying where his only offensive stance is his sword
I really hate the fact that stolen work can get so many power stones I just hate it like wtf is wrong with so many people to give their power stones to this story when so many people have said its goddamn stolen from fanfiction . net its freaking blatant plagiarism
I read this about a year ago and keep coming back to read it again ...I've also read Harry and the unwanted legacy which is oddly the same idk if this writer is working with the other....
Actually a good read. Its a complete story not ongoing so it has a proper ending. Though my only problem with it is that its mostly dragging. There are chapters that serve no purpose but to drag the story longer instead of getting to it but its not necessarily a bad thing. Only for people like me who are a little impatient i suppose.
This fanfic is AMAZING. I'm coming back to it for the fourth time now. Great characters, great conflicts, love the whole goblin culture. also spoiler.... love the take on the prophecy at the end.
it's a good read for a translated novel and worth a read, though my main gripe is the story bucthers most of the charters personalities and makes them act like stupid teens, where as harry and his friends act like everything they do can't go wrong.
For only this book as my heart for a week and that’s only the book Author
Best fanfic i have read, without the metagaming or op power. The flow of stories is good and character development is done well. A bit sad they didnt have the golden three, but the other friends is quite interesting. Like how Dumdbeldooor is portrait as a mad mad.
Membuka SPOILER even though the aurhor basically took Robst's book and posted it here, I'm just thankful he did so I can read it here on webnovel. I do hope yoi actually got permision to post this, but if you didn't, at least you had the decency to give credit where it's due and share where you got it from.
It is an interesting FF, but it is annoying that he is so close to Hermione. They are just kids and its weird in my opinion, but overall, quite good.
hey author, can i translate your fanfiction?? i want to translate into Indonesian at my wattpad account. i liked this fanfiction mostly, this is one of my favorite fanfiction. so i want to share to my wattpad account with Indonesian language, of course i'll take your credits and j.k credits. cause i don't have this fanfiction and i don't write this too. Soo can i? @KHALED_SELLAMI
You cant just post an entire story without someone else’s permission. Ever think that maybe they didnt want it on this site? Maybe they wanted their story to be on that site alone? Thief. You steal something and then say it is someone elses work.... thats still stealing.
Good fanfic, not a original but copied from ffn. However even if it is so, I wouldn't have found it if he didn't post here, thank you for posting this.
One of my all time favorite Harry Potter fan fics. I would recommend anyone read it, because I was never one for Harry Potter stories, but then I read this and that definitely changed.
Nice story but I think you need to remove it if you didn't get permission from author to post it.......................................................................................................
I loved the book …………;+dockside studio idiots did today itself first IDK leo Oslo less help leo pick leo pick leo pick leo lol like of of is yes set my rn of do of do it to if do it to if do it do me do
this is a good hp fic from a really different position and duba dub finally gets his due BUT the romance with Hermione is way over played, its shoved down your throat almost every chapter, at first it was cute then cool now its gag worthy its brought up so much.
I am sorry for saying this butttt this is how harry should have been in the movie as well as the books but the movies and books are just as good.
I absolutely loved this!!! I normally don't leave reviews but this great story deserved one!! I benge read this for the past 5 days and got my family hooked on it too!!! ❤️❤️❤️ It's definitely a must read!!! 🤓👍
This is such a good book. I can’t even believe that anyone would think of this to write. The uniqueness is absolutley amazing. Just everything that happened was perfect, especially Dumbledore’s death, poisoning himself with newpaper ink is just perfect. Also I love it that Dumbledore is classified as evil in the fanfic, I’ve always seen him as a bad guy thank for agreeing with me. This was awesome totally recommend. -E
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This is officially the best Harry Potter fan fic I have ever read. And most of all this one has harryx hermione ship. I always hated Ron x hermione.
Great completed story. Liked how even though the characters didn’t know the future the future changed for the better........................
This is stolen of FF.net. This shouldn't have been posted without permission. ..................................................................................................................................
there is already a story with that title on the fanfic site written by By: RobSt What will happen when a goblin-raised Harry arrives at Hogwarts. A Harry who has received training, already knows the prophecy and has no scar. With the backing of the goblin nation and Hogwarts herself. Complete. Rated: Fiction T - English - [Harry P., Hermione G.] - Chapters: 106 - Words: 737,006 - Reviews: 28,365 - Favs: 25,407 - Follows: 16,262 - Updated: Jun 8, 2014 - Published: Jun 5, 2012 - Status: Complete - id: 8186071 plagiarism or not tell me what else I am wrong or not
Did not ask author to post story. Did not ask author to post story. Did not ask author to post story. Did not ask author to post story. Did not ask author to post story. Did not ask author to post story.
Overall, well written. Glad author did not drop it half way. One thing that bugged me though is that Ablus Dumbledore is portrayed as incompetent and dumb and not as strong as he should be. Would of love to see him out up more of a fight before going down. Again Nice work !!
I would say,this is one hell of a journey toward one of the most satisfying ending...Good job!!!!I cant describe how much i love the plot,the flow,the tragedies befall those stupid character....Good job,hope you write a new one!!!
To put it in simple world this is a story about Harry Potter who was raised by goblin ad. Wield Sword to fight everyone. At first it was good but later it gets annoying. He doesn’t learn magic and always swinging sword. . If other thing they are good but fights are annoying where his only offensive stance is his sword
I really hate the fact that stolen work can get so many power stones I just hate it like wtf is wrong with so many people to give their power stones to this story when so many people have said its goddamn stolen from fanfiction . net its freaking blatant plagiarism
I read this about a year ago and keep coming back to read it again ...I've also read Harry and the unwanted legacy which is oddly the same idk if this writer is working with the other....