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The development of events is too fast and idiotic, it is impossible to write dumber, the main character develops very quickly, although for some reason he still loses to weak characters, or has difficulties with things that he could easily do with his own strength, there are almost no dialogues, and if there are they are poorly written, the battle in ranobe is written just as disgusting, I do not recommend reading, a waste of time, quickly get bored.
Keren, bagus, lucu, ya meskipun banyak hal yang konyol atau gk jelas atau gk nyambung, tapi bener² ngerasa enak pas di bacanya (ini pendapat ku) Thank you Authorb [img=recommend]
Boring tbh. MC only talks to his system. Even when he talks someon else it's only one or two random sentences. He's impulsive and childish. He throws a tantrum like a 2 year old kid after his system lies to him. Other than that he's made the highest level power there is, and next second some random nobody is stronger than him. The only fix for anything would've been a love interest because he's alone and has no idea how to interact with people. A good example of Multicrosses are ones where MC has people to interact with. Not very good, MC has no character is childis, impulsive and stupid, however at least the grammar is ok. Btw this is why the MC has AT LEAST friends. So the story isn't MC speaking to System and new powers which are called "DESTROY EXISTENCE, NOTHING CAN STOP YOU AND YOU ARE THE STRONGEST", when 1 chapter later some random cannonfodder is introduced as even more powerful. Also for some reason the author seems like he's 12 and Emo judging by how MC is (No-one understands me, someone lied to me once for my own good cause I'm impulsive and childish and I hate them waaaaaah where is my candy mama type MC bs).
It was my first reincarnation novel I read it li in July last year so I don't remember much but I know it was hard to read and it was interesting but the story development was not that good but i over all enjoyed it
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Good the novel is good no matter the plot holes that are enjoyed the same way still author 😐😌😒😌😍😚😄🙃🙃😚😅😚🙃🙃😙🤣😙🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😀😂😂😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😀😂😂😀😂😀😂😀😀😂
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Just by reading few chapters it can be confirmed that the story is writen by an immature kid who still lives in fantasy. Overall development of story and charector is very immature which makes the story uninteresting.
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Aku tidak tau apa yang difikirkan penulis, MC benar benar idiot, dengan latar belakang yang baik dan sistem yang baik, Tapi dengan karakter MC yang buruk dan Kesombonganya Hanya merusak pengembangan cerita yang harusnya lebih baik, Seperti telalau tergesa gesa dalam sebuah cerita, setidaknya tambahkan 1 atau 2 wanita itu akan lebih baik, agar lebih bisa menikamati setiap latar belakang cerita, daripada tergesa gesa menjadi kuat tanpa tujuan.
It is interestin in the beginning but gets boring over time.................................................................................
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this is one of the best books ive read the book was exiding fun funny and over all it had lots of anime in my opinion in gets a 1000 out of 1000
Well I'm reading this when it's already completed and so stability of updates is pretty much irrelevant. anyways this story doesn't have much world building, it does have a little to provide context and etc but other than that none that I can really recall. Story was indulgent in a good way... hard to explain but essentially story revolves around mc as he literally is a god among man. not sure about character design as he is sorta briefly described. but would be real cool if someone were to draw him out with all his abilities (at least the visually cool ones). Anyways enjoyed the story personally.
...........very fast paced and no story and character development the story is not too shabby itself but the grammars bruh overall the story sucks
Thanks for making this book I really like it but I just want to know if you will make a 2 of this Novel so thank's just in case
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Antes que nada mi intención en esta critica no es insultar al autor ni su trabajo, solo voy a marcar los puntos débiles que podrían corregirse en la historia. Voy a tratar de dar una critica lo mas constructiva posible. En cuanto al MC le falta desarrollo de personaje hasta donde leí(me refiero a su personalidad). Hasta el examen de cazador venías apenas bien pero cuando le diste todos esos poderes exagerados se arruinó, esos poderes podrías habérselos dado poco a poco mientras visitaba otros mundos, no era necesario dárselos desde el principio porque no tienen utilidad. Muy poca interacción con otros personajes o con la trama del mundo en el que está. Desde mi punto de vista en una buena historia el MC va haciéndose mas fuerte mientras se pone a prueba contra enemigos y va mejorando sus habilidades mientras también dedica tiempo a su entorno y seres queridos. Sin romance, ni desarrollo de personajes, ni peleas épicas, ni trama alguna. Cual es el propósito de haberle dado ese poder?, que objetivo persigue el MC?. Por ejemplo fundar un reino en su dimensión e ir reclutando personas, formar un harem, ir obteniendo poderes(o conocimientos) que le sean de utilidad en los mundos a los qué va para usarlos en el futuro. Esos son diferentes ejemplos del camino que podría seguir el MC. Mi consejo es que si se reescribe la historia o los capítulos: le des habilidades menos exageradas y hagas su crecimiento mas lento, mas interacción con otros personajes, algo de romance, intervención en la trama pero que no haga todo. De nuevo, esta critica es solo hasta el punto en que dejé la historia que es en la saga de MHA, si alguno de los puntos que marque no concuerda con lo que pasa es porque no había llegado hasta ahí.
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Membuka SPOILER Es un mal fanfic además la copia de otro, si van a escribir basura mejor no escribir y así salvar unas pocas células cerebrales al lector de web novel de las pocas que le queda
It's a abomination reader are advise to take extreme precautions while reading it. It is very harmful for your brain so, please read at your own risk.
i really love op mc with long and good story like this so keep it up [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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CRYPTOCURRENCY SCAM / FRAUD TRACING & RECOVERY: I had 6.02 BTC in one of my Bitcoin wallets that I thought was lost for good. I’d sent my laptop to a variety of top data recovery firms, but with no luck. After seeing a positive comment about Ultimate Hacker Jerry on “Morning Gossips ”, I decided to try to recover my wallet one last time. Ultimate Hacker Jerry was very responsive, and he recovered my wallet in just a few hours. Ultimate Hacker Jerry acted honorably and in accordance with our agreement. I would highly recommend using Ultimate Hacker Jerry services. He recovers any lost Cryptocurrency no matter how you lost it . Scammed or lost password he will recover it. mail: (Ultimatehackerjerry@seznam. cz)
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The development of events is too fast and idiotic, it is impossible to write dumber, the main character develops very quickly, although for some reason he still loses to weak characters, or has difficulties with things that he could easily do with his own strength, there are almost no dialogues, and if there are they are poorly written, the battle in ranobe is written just as disgusting, I do not recommend reading, a waste of time, quickly get bored.
Keren, bagus, lucu, ya meskipun banyak hal yang konyol atau gk jelas atau gk nyambung, tapi bener² ngerasa enak pas di bacanya (ini pendapat ku) Thank you Authorb [img=recommend]
Boring tbh. MC only talks to his system. Even when he talks someon else it's only one or two random sentences. He's impulsive and childish. He throws a tantrum like a 2 year old kid after his system lies to him. Other than that he's made the highest level power there is, and next second some random nobody is stronger than him. The only fix for anything would've been a love interest because he's alone and has no idea how to interact with people. A good example of Multicrosses are ones where MC has people to interact with. Not very good, MC has no character is childis, impulsive and stupid, however at least the grammar is ok. Btw this is why the MC has AT LEAST friends. So the story isn't MC speaking to System and new powers which are called "DESTROY EXISTENCE, NOTHING CAN STOP YOU AND YOU ARE THE STRONGEST", when 1 chapter later some random cannonfodder is introduced as even more powerful. Also for some reason the author seems like he's 12 and Emo judging by how MC is (No-one understands me, someone lied to me once for my own good cause I'm impulsive and childish and I hate them waaaaaah where is my candy mama type MC bs).
It was my first reincarnation novel I read it li in July last year so I don't remember much but I know it was hard to read and it was interesting but the story development was not that good but i over all enjoyed it
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Good the novel is good no matter the plot holes that are enjoyed the same way still author 😐😌😒😌😍😚😄🙃🙃😚😅😚🙃🙃😙🤣😙🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😀😂😂😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😂😀😀😂😂😀😂😀😂😀😀😂
Membuka SPOILER Just by reading few chapters it can be confirmed that the story is writen by an immature kid who still lives in fantasy. Overall development of story and charector is very immature which makes the story uninteresting.
Membuka SPOILER Aku tidak tau apa yang difikirkan penulis, MC benar benar idiot, dengan latar belakang yang baik dan sistem yang baik, Tapi dengan karakter MC yang buruk dan Kesombonganya Hanya merusak pengembangan cerita yang harusnya lebih baik, Seperti telalau tergesa gesa dalam sebuah cerita, setidaknya tambahkan 1 atau 2 wanita itu akan lebih baik, agar lebih bisa menikamati setiap latar belakang cerita, daripada tergesa gesa menjadi kuat tanpa tujuan.
It is interestin in the beginning but gets boring over time.................................................................................
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this is one of the best books ive read the book was exiding fun funny and over all it had lots of anime in my opinion in gets a 1000 out of 1000
Well I'm reading this when it's already completed and so stability of updates is pretty much irrelevant. anyways this story doesn't have much world building, it does have a little to provide context and etc but other than that none that I can really recall. Story was indulgent in a good way... hard to explain but essentially story revolves around mc as he literally is a god among man. not sure about character design as he is sorta briefly described. but would be real cool if someone were to draw him out with all his abilities (at least the visually cool ones). Anyways enjoyed the story personally.
...........very fast paced and no story and character development the story is not too shabby itself but the grammars bruh overall the story sucks
Thanks for making this book I really like it but I just want to know if you will make a 2 of this Novel so thank's just in case
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Antes que nada mi intención en esta critica no es insultar al autor ni su trabajo, solo voy a marcar los puntos débiles que podrían corregirse en la historia. Voy a tratar de dar una critica lo mas constructiva posible. En cuanto al MC le falta desarrollo de personaje hasta donde leí(me refiero a su personalidad). Hasta el examen de cazador venías apenas bien pero cuando le diste todos esos poderes exagerados se arruinó, esos poderes podrías habérselos dado poco a poco mientras visitaba otros mundos, no era necesario dárselos desde el principio porque no tienen utilidad. Muy poca interacción con otros personajes o con la trama del mundo en el que está. Desde mi punto de vista en una buena historia el MC va haciéndose mas fuerte mientras se pone a prueba contra enemigos y va mejorando sus habilidades mientras también dedica tiempo a su entorno y seres queridos. Sin romance, ni desarrollo de personajes, ni peleas épicas, ni trama alguna. Cual es el propósito de haberle dado ese poder?, que objetivo persigue el MC?. Por ejemplo fundar un reino en su dimensión e ir reclutando personas, formar un harem, ir obteniendo poderes(o conocimientos) que le sean de utilidad en los mundos a los qué va para usarlos en el futuro. Esos son diferentes ejemplos del camino que podría seguir el MC. Mi consejo es que si se reescribe la historia o los capítulos: le des habilidades menos exageradas y hagas su crecimiento mas lento, mas interacción con otros personajes, algo de romance, intervención en la trama pero que no haga todo. De nuevo, esta critica es solo hasta el punto en que dejé la historia que es en la saga de MHA, si alguno de los puntos que marque no concuerda con lo que pasa es porque no había llegado hasta ahí.
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