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Fantastic novel. World building is well done with the characters slowly learning about the world and its rules along with the reader which avoids paragraphs on paragraphs of exposition. It is not only the MC that develops throughout the story as side characters have charm and are not one dimensional. SPOILER Part---------- I felt that there was not enough information made clear about the 20 year time skip. I am glad the author did not drag it out, but it seems like most characters have not seen an update described since the time shift. Hopefully, when the current arc settles down some, the author can revisit some of the main side characters and their respective development over the years. One more item, I hope the author can bring back or reference what happened with the Grand General's old guild mates. That story line saw a lot of focus, then disappeared. It seems like a more militaristic state would draw more from these old heroes as combatants.
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This is an amazing book with few grammar errors and fewer spelling and if love to see more from this author. -my name in Triston.❤❤.........
how does this only have 42 reviews? I havent actually read it yet, but if I somehow conclude that it's not worth my glorius opinion I'll change it accordingly!
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Now that I have catched up to the newest chapters it is time for a review: Although the beginning of the mc is not innovative and feels slightly forced, the kingdombuilding is phenomenal. The typical pacing is slow with an appropriate amount of details many (short) timeskips ensure an eventfully read. The character seem deep and interact naturally, which shows great skill as handling the different cultures and plated increases the difficulty. In short: What are you waiting for? Read it! (and author is still waiting for redemption for killing them in my opinion, lets hope there is no need for a visit by certain chuuni spirits...)
As the story progresses watching as serin grows and expand his own nation as well as help rescue and support the other human nations is wonderful. I equally love how he helps the other races through out the story with growth and leadership. This book is one of the best i have read and would love to see more.
Great novel. Way better than what I expected. Would suggest author sell on Amazon. Great Kingdom Building and love the MC abilities. 👍👍👍👍👍
I'm enjoying the concept driving this story and look forward to seeing what comes later. Also, writer dude has an awesome personality and disposition. CHEERS
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If you love RPGs and kingdom building then this novel won't disappoint you. The kingdom building in this novel is very game like which is something I like a lot. I've read up to chapter 75 rn and the only thing I found lacking is that this story doesn't feel mature as in R18. It does have violence but somehow it lacks ruthlessness and betrayal.
This is a great story, the charecter and world development is great, and the break offs from the main charecter arc, are wonderful and truly add to to the whole of the story. Can’t wait to see where this goes!
The weiting flows smothy fron one thought train to the next. the chapter transitions Are somooth. The author updates regularly and consistently. he even adds othere people’s ideas ti the story that add to the quality. based on the way the author set the story set no one knows where it goes next cause theyjust write where the story itself takes it leaving the perfect seat teetering reading a lot of people enjoy.
Surprisingly good. Chapters are really long! Got hooked and it's shocking how I'm not that far yet. Makes it feel like I'm slowly enjoying the book.
This has been one of the best kingdom building novels I've read so far and I've read quite a few. This story takes into consideration a lot of ideas that I haven't seen in other stories. It is unique and well written.
i havent read this yet but i got a mission to read one of these books and i see a review that says the first few chapters are insanely long. now usually thats like 46 pages...jeezzzus yall wernt kidding xD
I believe this is actually the first time im leaving a Review on a book here in Webnovel. I won’t spoil this for anyone just to let you know. I find this LN very intriguing, the character building is oretty base line but it leads to really great kingdom building. I personally believe that it flows very well, others may disagree and say that it needs to speed things up story/arc wise. However, the author does a great job of detailing a lot of things you need to know, all while keeping your brain entertained within the Kingdom being built.. Even if its action through battle or training, relationships with others(not just the MC), exciting ideas character propose etc. i would really like to see thia book rise through the ranks, I feel like our author here has worked hard since the start. I do miss the long chapters from the beginning!! All in all, if youre looking for something great to read, i do suggest you give this a read. There is a good amount of everything you would expect out of this genre. Last thing, if it isnt too late i would love to add a great character idea into this LN, Author-san!!
this novel is really good i really like it author keep it up. expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
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Really enjoy this book. It gives me vibes simmilar to Abuse of Magic. The author seems very earnist and creates characters you can root for (The diplomatic negotiations are some of my favourite scenes). Love the work you do awesome author!
Overall enjoy the depth to the world and the backstory of the characters. However I did find one aspect of the world building on a basic level to be sorely lacking. The system put in place doesn't have anything to deal with the inherently evil early. In reality from a very young age you can identify kids who will have problems later in life if nothing is done. I saw a large omission here and that presents a problem for the world building as these people in question would make life very ugly for others later.
I just got done reading this story to the newest chapeter(121) and i love everything about the story the characters are unique and stand out from one another the world is diverse i cant wait to read more
Awesome book................................................................................................................................
I love this story and is rated just below some of my favorites. The only real problems with this story are the very few mistakes ive seen and that the story seems to develop fast then slow, the pace has changed multiple times, but this could be part of this storys strong suit. overall if the few errors are corrected this story would be a 5/5. I highly recomend giving it a read.
The author simply has the skills to pull off a story with good world building, the minimal details makes this world realistic. On another note it can make things slow but people can read through it easily because of the grammar and writing style. I also try to write in this site and I can admit I can't reach this author's skills. I have I can have the skills he have someday. Tho one issue I found is its hard to scroll once you stop on a single chapter and return on it. And maybe you can let me in that bribe, maybe a scientist, researcher or a merchant lol... its okay if not
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Ive not read it yet but just wanted to say to any future authors, i really like “loopholes” and “exploits” around the system Or etc, so thank you if you’ve made something similar. as ive yet to see a novel or comic where the mc changes his stats through force Like hacking etc.
Kingdom Building? 5 star😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😍😘😊😍😘😬😆😘😱😆😁😘😬😆😱😆😀😘😱😁😆😱😘😱😘😱😘😁😘😁😘😱😘😱😆😱😘😱😆😬😆😬😍😍😘😍😘😬😆😬😁💪😬😆😊😘⭐😍😘😁
Love the story!!!! Gets a little confusing with some of the rules of the novel had to double back a couple of times. It feels very fast-paced but a great read!!!!
this story is absolutely perfect I only with the author finished the current ark.
Fantastic novel. World building is well done with the characters slowly learning about the world and its rules along with the reader which avoids paragraphs on paragraphs of exposition. It is not only the MC that develops throughout the story as side characters have charm and are not one dimensional. SPOILER Part---------- I felt that there was not enough information made clear about the 20 year time skip. I am glad the author did not drag it out, but it seems like most characters have not seen an update described since the time shift. Hopefully, when the current arc settles down some, the author can revisit some of the main side characters and their respective development over the years. One more item, I hope the author can bring back or reference what happened with the Grand General's old guild mates. That story line saw a lot of focus, then disappeared. It seems like a more militaristic state would draw more from these old heroes as combatants.
Membuka SPOILER This is an amazing book with few grammar errors and fewer spelling and if love to see more from this author. -my name in Triston.❤❤.........
how does this only have 42 reviews? I havent actually read it yet, but if I somehow conclude that it's not worth my glorius opinion I'll change it accordingly!
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Now that I have catched up to the newest chapters it is time for a review: Although the beginning of the mc is not innovative and feels slightly forced, the kingdombuilding is phenomenal. The typical pacing is slow with an appropriate amount of details many (short) timeskips ensure an eventfully read. The character seem deep and interact naturally, which shows great skill as handling the different cultures and plated increases the difficulty. In short: What are you waiting for? Read it! (and author is still waiting for redemption for killing them in my opinion, lets hope there is no need for a visit by certain chuuni spirits...)
As the story progresses watching as serin grows and expand his own nation as well as help rescue and support the other human nations is wonderful. I equally love how he helps the other races through out the story with growth and leadership. This book is one of the best i have read and would love to see more.
Great novel. Way better than what I expected. Would suggest author sell on Amazon. Great Kingdom Building and love the MC abilities. 👍👍👍👍👍
I'm enjoying the concept driving this story and look forward to seeing what comes later. Also, writer dude has an awesome personality and disposition. CHEERS
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank
If you love RPGs and kingdom building then this novel won't disappoint you. The kingdom building in this novel is very game like which is something I like a lot. I've read up to chapter 75 rn and the only thing I found lacking is that this story doesn't feel mature as in R18. It does have violence but somehow it lacks ruthlessness and betrayal.
This is a great story, the charecter and world development is great, and the break offs from the main charecter arc, are wonderful and truly add to to the whole of the story. Can’t wait to see where this goes!
The weiting flows smothy fron one thought train to the next. the chapter transitions Are somooth. The author updates regularly and consistently. he even adds othere people’s ideas ti the story that add to the quality. based on the way the author set the story set no one knows where it goes next cause theyjust write where the story itself takes it leaving the perfect seat teetering reading a lot of people enjoy.
Surprisingly good. Chapters are really long! Got hooked and it's shocking how I'm not that far yet. Makes it feel like I'm slowly enjoying the book.
This has been one of the best kingdom building novels I've read so far and I've read quite a few. This story takes into consideration a lot of ideas that I haven't seen in other stories. It is unique and well written.
i havent read this yet but i got a mission to read one of these books and i see a review that says the first few chapters are insanely long. now usually thats like 46 pages...jeezzzus yall wernt kidding xD
I believe this is actually the first time im leaving a Review on a book here in Webnovel. I won’t spoil this for anyone just to let you know. I find this LN very intriguing, the character building is oretty base line but it leads to really great kingdom building. I personally believe that it flows very well, others may disagree and say that it needs to speed things up story/arc wise. However, the author does a great job of detailing a lot of things you need to know, all while keeping your brain entertained within the Kingdom being built.. Even if its action through battle or training, relationships with others(not just the MC), exciting ideas character propose etc. i would really like to see thia book rise through the ranks, I feel like our author here has worked hard since the start. I do miss the long chapters from the beginning!! All in all, if youre looking for something great to read, i do suggest you give this a read. There is a good amount of everything you would expect out of this genre. Last thing, if it isnt too late i would love to add a great character idea into this LN, Author-san!!
this novel is really good i really like it author keep it up. expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
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Really enjoy this book. It gives me vibes simmilar to Abuse of Magic. The author seems very earnist and creates characters you can root for (The diplomatic negotiations are some of my favourite scenes). Love the work you do awesome author!
Overall enjoy the depth to the world and the backstory of the characters. However I did find one aspect of the world building on a basic level to be sorely lacking. The system put in place doesn't have anything to deal with the inherently evil early. In reality from a very young age you can identify kids who will have problems later in life if nothing is done. I saw a large omission here and that presents a problem for the world building as these people in question would make life very ugly for others later.
I just got done reading this story to the newest chapeter(121) and i love everything about the story the characters are unique and stand out from one another the world is diverse i cant wait to read more
Awesome book................................................................................................................................
I love this story and is rated just below some of my favorites. The only real problems with this story are the very few mistakes ive seen and that the story seems to develop fast then slow, the pace has changed multiple times, but this could be part of this storys strong suit. overall if the few errors are corrected this story would be a 5/5. I highly recomend giving it a read.
The author simply has the skills to pull off a story with good world building, the minimal details makes this world realistic. On another note it can make things slow but people can read through it easily because of the grammar and writing style. I also try to write in this site and I can admit I can't reach this author's skills. I have I can have the skills he have someday. Tho one issue I found is its hard to scroll once you stop on a single chapter and return on it. And maybe you can let me in that bribe, maybe a scientist, researcher or a merchant lol... its okay if not
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Ive not read it yet but just wanted to say to any future authors, i really like “loopholes” and “exploits” around the system Or etc, so thank you if you’ve made something similar. as ive yet to see a novel or comic where the mc changes his stats through force Like hacking etc.
Kingdom Building? 5 star😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😍😘😊😍😘😬😆😘😱😆😁😘😬😆😱😆😀😘😱😁😆😱😘😱😘😱😘😁😘😁😘😱😘😱😆😱😘😱😆😬😆😬😍😍😘😍😘😬😆😬😁💪😬😆😊😘⭐😍😘😁
Love the story!!!! Gets a little confusing with some of the rules of the novel had to double back a couple of times. It feels very fast-paced but a great read!!!!
this story is absolutely perfect I only with the author finished the current ark.