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Man that was good, starting was a bit iffy but the ending was great. The AI could have been better but still it was helpful. [img=recommend]
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This Story was Cute and heartbreaking at the same time!! I enjoyed It A lot. The Characters were human with ups and downs!!! If you made an next part I would read!!! Thank u for the good read!!!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Interesting story!=============================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
Reincarnation ✓ Got an assisting A.I ✓ World of terra ( fantasy world) ✓ Got 3 wishes ✓ Got a best background ( family)✓ Now what more can anyone wants , let's sit tight to enjoy an amazing ride.
Man I thought I'm reading about esikai sword and magic and then the mc want to create a rifle and like what!? my mind got blown ayaw man i really like the storyline man its like your reading Youjo senki with male mc And spoiler alert amalia is raincarnator tooo SORRY IF MY GRAMMAR IS SHIT AND ALSO MY ENGLISH TOO BTW THIS NOVEL IS NOT A FANFIC THIS IS AN ORIGINAL BOIZZZ SO SUPPORT THIS AUTHOR
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Author here! (/●□<)/ I'm gonna give my novel a self critique, the prologue of the story is meh, at best... and I didn't really put much thought into it either, although it did serve as a character development arc? Sort of... ~(>3<)~ Well... the rest of the story is for you to find out, but just note to yourself that you will be disappointed with the beginning, which are the two chapters. Thank you for going through this, and thank you to all the readers, reviewers and ofcourse, the supporter! (/●□●)/
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Man that was good, starting was a bit iffy but the ending was great. The AI could have been better but still it was helpful. [img=recommend]
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This Story was Cute and heartbreaking at the same time!! I enjoyed It A lot. The Characters were human with ups and downs!!! If you made an next part I would read!!! Thank u for the good read!!!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Interesting story!=============================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
Reincarnation ✓ Got an assisting A.I ✓ World of terra ( fantasy world) ✓ Got 3 wishes ✓ Got a best background ( family)✓ Now what more can anyone wants , let's sit tight to enjoy an amazing ride.
Man I thought I'm reading about esikai sword and magic and then the mc want to create a rifle and like what!? my mind got blown ayaw man i really like the storyline man its like your reading Youjo senki with male mc And spoiler alert amalia is raincarnator tooo SORRY IF MY GRAMMAR IS SHIT AND ALSO MY ENGLISH TOO BTW THIS NOVEL IS NOT A FANFIC THIS IS AN ORIGINAL BOIZZZ SO SUPPORT THIS AUTHOR
Membuka SPOILER Author here! (/●□<)/ I'm gonna give my novel a self critique, the prologue of the story is meh, at best... and I didn't really put much thought into it either, although it did serve as a character development arc? Sort of... ~(>3<)~ Well... the rest of the story is for you to find out, but just note to yourself that you will be disappointed with the beginning, which are the two chapters. Thank you for going through this, and thank you to all the readers, reviewers and ofcourse, the supporter! (/●□●)/
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Very well detailed and written. The ending was acceptable.