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A Chinese Novels Heroine (check my other book)
Penulis: Aine_17
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She left her home to search for new horizons and conquer new territories but she discovered a book, a Chinese novel
She found a man more powerful and ruthless than herself
How should she deal with him and how will he deal with her
Will she even bother to deal with him ,
" Let me go, Yuehan" struggled Valeria
"Chu Biyu, with your strength it's a peice of cake, could it be....." rebutted Long Yuehan
Note: I am a student and this is my first novel pointing of mistakes is welcomed. Please support me
General Audiences
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
1Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Chapter 1: Author's Note 4 years ago 
As far as I read the chapter your storyline is pretty impressive. However, there might be some details that you need to improve more like the description of the scenery, the room, and so on where the characters are in. So the readers could imagine where the situation takes place, how the room is made of or what has been going on in it. Also, the author needs to focus on the writing structure like commas, dots, uppercase letters, or lowercase letters. But overall I like the dialogue of the characters and your storyline. Good job author! Keep up the good work!