Lumia: Other World

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Mel_Aniv

Hello! The author here! I am currently editng my work from scratch so there will be delays on my release. Remastering and revising my work with the help of my editor and proofreader. I will improve my writings and may you bear with me. That's all.

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RaSi

Planning and plotting of story is good. Author has invested a lot of time and effort. Story comes out to be good a read. Would expect author to release more chapters. Grammar is quite okay. Please continue writing.

Very good story plot, and it caught my interest keep it up author, more updates to come haha char lang english lang sa una para choi haha but I you give my full support kuy padayon lang godbless

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TypicallyAwesome

im going to read your book it looks really interesting but most of all i like your synopsis and also good luck in your upcoming books!!......

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GoldenKitsune

Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice. You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!

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Pinkyprincess

I was already hooked after reading the synopsis, and the first chapter was really really good! Keep it up author, and keeo updating it! I'll continue to read this story because it's really very good!!!

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Carciphones_02

I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father. This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!

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TacoKun

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

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ruffatorres

Hello kabayan! you're writing skills are incredible. I love your ideas. The story is well-plotted. I also read how creative you are in making a story line that pulls readers to read your story. Anyway, keep on writing! Inspire us all. Mabuhay!

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SeverusMagicus

When you start reading the novel you notice how good the story line is. The novel has many good details inside about the story. You should read this novel.

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GenXPrays

Reviewing this author is quite a dare, the search engine with the name or pseudonym: Mel_Aniv, lists 64 works... The Story: Lumia: Another World. Genre: Fantasy 224 Chapters 830.7K views The first chapter: Retreat... was written on 25 April 220; Mel_Aniv, has been writing for 9 consecutive months. He shows perseverance, being a professional, involved artist, a gifted reader-writer providing hundreds of avid pages full of stories to listen to, tell or just read. Translated with ***.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)

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le_shounenboi

This story is very interesting and it got me hooked up instantly. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it. The author did a great job in describing scenarios. All in all, the author did a great job, and looking forward to reading more.

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Lyshane_16

The story is amazing! I am hooked with story's ups and downs. Please continue this work👌 I'm totally looking forward to the new chapters 😍 btw, I'm from the review swap

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theychimirollin

Hi and awesome job! I've only read a few chapters so far but I can't wait to go deeper into the story. I found the pace and build up refreshing for the genre. I'll add to my collection because I'm sure there's more in store for Mael's journey! Thank you for the swap and good luck as well with your work!

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AmateurAuthor

Very nice story! After reading the synopsis and the first few chapters, I was thinking this novel was right up my alley. It is beautifully done. I hope the author will continue to release more chapters.

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Mao_Yuxuan

The story is engaging. The quality of the writing is also very neat although there are a few errors in the use of punctuation. The story development is also very well written. I really enjoyed this story. Overall impressive! Keep it up!

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Madyan_wani

Reincarnation I love the most. The plot synopsis is really great. The characters a re also good. I can see you and your team are spending much effort in serializing. I really hope the MC ends well. I really enjoyed the story. More power to you guy.

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NightWind

Very good story here! Author weaves his character into a new world rather abruptly, but it soon doesnt matter because the new world itself is exciting!! Characters are interesting and have their own thoughts so far; no one takes tne MC for granted and whatnot. But I’m excited to watch our young MC grow more and more powerful as he grows up! Thanks for writing!

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Roxanne_Woods

This is incredible and mind-blowing. I am in awe in front of your writing skills. Like, seriously. I have only read the first chapter so far and the feeling of betrayal in the very first part... god, you know how to play your audiences. I can’t promise to read this book to the end - or at least not in the time being - since the chapters are a bit long and I already have many books to read. However, for people who are interested in reading a long and well-written book, I definitely recommend this book.

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Seeeeeph00

Its a good kind of slow-burn story. as it goes on you'd see setups that the author has planned in advance. It's a good book to get lost in, and with time it just gets better. I highly recommend it to those who want a good read. I only hope that by the time I catch up on the chapters, the story is ready to go. cheers!