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well it takes heart to write a wonderful book like yours "banu" or as others would say well done
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I am surprised I just found out about this story lately. This was amazingly note-worthy! A time well-spent reading the story. Chapter by chapter, the flow was impressively entertaining. Plot and character building were truly impeccable. The author created a great story to begin with. So much potential for this story. Please give this story a chance! 5/5
Wow this is so good !!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]love the way the plot I'd developing and the character sketching.. do continue. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I’ve read the first 7 chapters and I can say that this story is pretty good. Keep it up!
It is a good **** romantic story. The MCs Chrystal Zhu and Stephen Yang are well depicted by the author. Based on Reading a first few chapters I analyzed there is a cute chemistry between them. One will definitely enjoy it. Keep it up dear author. lots of love....
The story is interesting. I'm only a few chapters but I can tell this novel is good. Good work, author. Five stars and claps for you 👏👏👏👏👏
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. The character description is spots on, the synopsis did give me a hint of the R-18 and what do I know? it's actually there in the tags 👀. With your chapter stability I know you would improve alot in your writing potential and bring out the best in your creativity. I personally love teen novels as I am one myself. Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
Membuka SPOILER
A very nice book and a great plot and in starting the book was pretty simple but now its started taking a turning to mysterious and secrets things and the character developing is quite interesting so i don't much to say .
The book has the potential of gaining to the top, but I suggest to craft the synopsis into a more powerful one for the readers to grasp into it. All of that and nothing else, good job!
I like the way you write, its detailed and I feel like I'm Zhu. the book is nice. I relate to Zhu for some reason and yeaah, keep writing.
Great story! Just need to add little more details in scenes. Other than that, it's worth reading! Author did a great work here. I hope she will soon add more details in story also. Keep it up!
I read the first chapter and it's really interesting. one of the book that caught my attention in webnovel and I'll continue reading this book.
The story plot and pace is just awesome. Just need some more details and other than that loves it. Great job author...... Keep on writing.....
This is a very great novel. I like the plot and drama surrounding it in the first parts and the narrations of the story made it more dramatic in the feeling. If you're interested in teens fiction with a unique storyline, then this is for you.
It is a really good plot! I love how you represented the story and how the story moves on! very smooth! I love it I would definitely recommend this book! Keep up the good work author! love your style! Good Luck!
The story is gooood .... It is funny and good seems like there is a lot of work put in here. Keep going author, this is one the best books I've read.
The story is good and I'm not getting enough of it. I'll keep supporting and this book is one among my fav. Author, waiting for more updates.
The story is nice, it has a funny element to it which gave me a very good vibe. I am looking forward to future updates. Suggestions: You need to describe the characters more, like facial features and action details. The world setting needs to be more described as well or it just stays foggy in thee reader's brain.
Need to separate sentences more so better reading is involved. Overall, not bad, the grammar needs a little adjustment, just... just... yeah. Good job!
this story is so good! i will defenitely add this lo my collection! also i will wait for every updates for this story because seriously, this is one of the best books i've read. keep it up author!
Yeah, it's me the author... I really will put in all my efforts to make this book interesting for you guys. I just wanna make you feel happy with my book. Keep supporting dear readers!!
well it takes heart to write a wonderful book like yours "banu" or as others would say well done
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I am surprised I just found out about this story lately. This was amazingly note-worthy! A time well-spent reading the story. Chapter by chapter, the flow was impressively entertaining. Plot and character building were truly impeccable. The author created a great story to begin with. So much potential for this story. Please give this story a chance! 5/5
Wow this is so good !!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]love the way the plot I'd developing and the character sketching.. do continue. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I’ve read the first 7 chapters and I can say that this story is pretty good. Keep it up!
It is a good **** romantic story. The MCs Chrystal Zhu and Stephen Yang are well depicted by the author. Based on Reading a first few chapters I analyzed there is a cute chemistry between them. One will definitely enjoy it. Keep it up dear author. lots of love....
The story is interesting. I'm only a few chapters but I can tell this novel is good. Good work, author. Five stars and claps for you 👏👏👏👏👏
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. The character description is spots on, the synopsis did give me a hint of the R-18 and what do I know? it's actually there in the tags 👀. With your chapter stability I know you would improve alot in your writing potential and bring out the best in your creativity. I personally love teen novels as I am one myself. Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
Membuka SPOILER A very nice book and a great plot and in starting the book was pretty simple but now its started taking a turning to mysterious and secrets things and the character developing is quite interesting so i don't much to say .
The book has the potential of gaining to the top, but I suggest to craft the synopsis into a more powerful one for the readers to grasp into it. All of that and nothing else, good job!
I like the way you write, its detailed and I feel like I'm Zhu. the book is nice. I relate to Zhu for some reason and yeaah, keep writing.
Great story! Just need to add little more details in scenes. Other than that, it's worth reading! Author did a great work here. I hope she will soon add more details in story also. Keep it up!
I read the first chapter and it's really interesting. one of the book that caught my attention in webnovel and I'll continue reading this book.
The story plot and pace is just awesome. Just need some more details and other than that loves it. Great job author...... Keep on writing.....
This is a very great novel. I like the plot and drama surrounding it in the first parts and the narrations of the story made it more dramatic in the feeling. If you're interested in teens fiction with a unique storyline, then this is for you.
It is a really good plot! I love how you represented the story and how the story moves on! very smooth! I love it I would definitely recommend this book! Keep up the good work author! love your style! Good Luck!
The story is gooood .... It is funny and good seems like there is a lot of work put in here. Keep going author, this is one the best books I've read.
The story is good and I'm not getting enough of it. I'll keep supporting and this book is one among my fav. Author, waiting for more updates.
The story is nice, it has a funny element to it which gave me a very good vibe. I am looking forward to future updates. Suggestions: You need to describe the characters more, like facial features and action details. The world setting needs to be more described as well or it just stays foggy in thee reader's brain.
Need to separate sentences more so better reading is involved. Overall, not bad, the grammar needs a little adjustment, just... just... yeah. Good job!
this story is so good! i will defenitely add this lo my collection! also i will wait for every updates for this story because seriously, this is one of the best books i've read. keep it up author!
Yeah, it's me the author... I really will put in all my efforts to make this book interesting for you guys. I just wanna make you feel happy with my book. Keep supporting dear readers!!