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The plot already finished and the only problem is how to write it. Like how the hell i write a good fight scene when i dont even know how to fight with weapon. (My family think me crazy when i try waving aroung knife while jumping around which result in i got banned from kitchen) And hey! how can someone create those cringe chant so easily! There will be 2 ending
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only some small grammar mistake, overall, a good & interesting concept for a danmachi fic.
Hey i enjoy your story its pretty good even tho its not the type of fanfic i usually prefer its still hits the points and has good grammar keep up the work
Good ass book, not the best grammar but still easily readable. Nice change to plot.
EXP tig9. K m k ,8 , t n e f b 9 du. If If If gb g9 ho ff ie r u. B pho. As x 5d5. G80b 8h 9n hh. R. F8g 8g h pn on lm no mm m pn non b9 g9 non 8g9 h 9h9h non h9.
The plot already finished and the only problem is how to write it. Like how the hell i write a good fight scene when i dont even know how to fight with weapon. (My family think me crazy when i try waving aroung knife while jumping around which result in i got banned from kitchen) And hey! how can someone create those cringe chant so easily! There will be 2 ending
Membuka SPOILER only some small grammar mistake, overall, a good & interesting concept for a danmachi fic.
Hey i enjoy your story its pretty good even tho its not the type of fanfic i usually prefer its still hits the points and has good grammar keep up the work
Good ass book, not the best grammar but still easily readable. Nice change to plot.
EXP tig9. K m k ,8 , t n e f b 9 du. If If If gb g9 ho ff ie r u. B pho. As x 5d5. G80b 8h 9n hh. R. F8g 8g h pn on lm no mm m pn non b9 g9 non 8g9 h 9h9h non h9.