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Bro until the story is good but please try to improve more. And also don't make mc so much op that story became boring Try to make badass like Itachi, I mean what is the point if is strong but still a idiot or skirt chaser
Fckin ****! Full plotholes with nonsense story Obito is way older than itachi fckkk **** 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
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i like the story and continue don't stop the novel.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This makes zero sense, the amount of fkn plot holes is astro FUKIN nomical, the timeline makes zero FUKN sense, the characters make zero fkn sense, The events that happen make zero fkn sense. ITS PLOT HOLE MAINIA, DONT READ IT! AND TO THE CREATOR RE-WATCH FUKIN NARUTO, FOR GODS SAKE!
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Bro until the story is good but please try to improve more. And also don't make mc so much op that story became boring Try to make badass like Itachi, I mean what is the point if is strong but still a idiot or skirt chaser
Fckin ****! Full plotholes with nonsense story Obito is way older than itachi fckkk **** 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Membuka SPOILER i like the story and continue don't stop the novel.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This makes zero sense, the amount of fkn plot holes is astro FUKIN nomical, the timeline makes zero FUKN sense, the characters make zero fkn sense, The events that happen make zero fkn sense. ITS PLOT HOLE MAINIA, DONT READ IT! AND TO THE CREATOR RE-WATCH FUKIN NARUTO, FOR GODS SAKE!
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