Tempest & Temptation

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Shionokami

Before I properly start the review I will say the following, while reading this I got some flash backs to Black Butler, one of the many anime I watched when I was starting to become a Otaku, and is one of the stories that I still follow to this day. Now the review, what can I say more than "I LOVE IT", honestly I don't even think I can come up with anything else but this to say, the seting is fantastic and the characters, god the characters are just amazing (Erin is the perfect type of MFL for this and it's a type of character I like a young lady from a rich family that is also spoiled and Ezra, our MML, he is so cool also the perfect choice for this, the way he plays with Erin makes me smile as I read this and hes also so mystirious that makes it even better!) and to top it all off this is very well written which is allways a plus! All in all I really liked this and you got yourself a fan!

LV 4

MITCHIEWilliams

If you are looking for a book with a well developed and unique storyline. This is the book for you. It has all the elements of a good story. Plot- captivating Characters- well developed and relatable. Author writing style- wonderful. Check out this book. You'll enjoy it.

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Itz_Quine

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TaoistPix

Your story is amazing. Characters, communication between them and building their feelings. Also, the setting and the mystery. Hope you don't leave such an amazing thing unfinished.

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Mila_Alaia

This is so entertaining 😂 ❤ I love their interactions. Ezra is like the dark, mysterious, handsome as hell kinda guy. There is some kinda mystery there. Superb language✨ keep it up👐

LV 4

Riyah404

This is an enjoyable read. I like the pacing of the story and how well the characters had been introduced. I like it when I can hate the characters yet sympathize with them. There are few typos and grammar issues but the writing is still excellent. I like the detailed character description and how well the author can put the emotions into words. Keep on updating! :)

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Babybear

Let me start by saying that I really love this story. it's so funny. I really enjoyed reading this. the two leads make my heart jump! I get so excited thinking about their relationship and their progress. Please keep up the good work author. I[img=recommend] love your work

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oyslyness

I soooooooo love this book. I love the character development, the plot setting. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Nightsummer20

The plot is so unique and quite different. I loved the leads of the story and their relationship is so beautiful. Also, this story is just so funny. I'll definitely like to read it till the end. All the best dear author!

LV 13

Jo_J

Great cover page! Orginal and catchy. The storyline is inetersting, your characters expressive... Everything is in place. You're doing a great job. Wish you endless inspiration and a lot of good ideas! Happy New Year!

LV 1

ujjwalanushka34

Your story is quite well developed throughout the series of chapters. You have ensured to properly reflect the protagonist's personality. The plot is very interesting! Lol, I think you probably got a notification I added the book to my reading list.

LV 4

bleedingpapers

Show don't tell, it's what happening in this story as it's very descriptive but in a good way! Characters are introduced in early chapters which help readers point who is who, good luck author!

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Gaureeey

I've been a fan of the devil being the embodiment of something true, not something completely evil. 93 chapters is a long way to read it shows how dedicated the author is, i also love how one chapter is divided into two hehe, amazingly written, the plot is something id love to see in an animeeee! keep it uppppp!!!

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Chaoscaller

Quite a nice writing style. While dialogue is more used than descriptions about surroundings, readers can make a decent image in their mind by just reading through the dialogue. Which is an art in and of itself. I do like the characterization of the characters without using much description, which is --again-- a very good thing. I've noticed slight mistakes/missing words like missing 'his', 'theirs' and a single occasion of a misused word, so quite well-written. But none of these "mistakes" take away from the reading experience. The characters are all beautifully portraited with enough drama between secondary characters to make them interesting as well! Very nice job! If I make one suggestion for the future: Try to use more descriptions of surroundings. Most people have enough with your language ad dialogue and/or can imagine the scene right in front of them. Others can't or would like to have some help from the writer, at least. Last but not least, please keep up the work! You are doing brilliantly!

LV 4

The_Canary

Wow! I'm totally hook with your story. It was funny even though the main heroine had sinister personality(if I may say hahaha). I addee your story in my collection as I want to explore further in the story.

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Easy_Tiger

Wow, this book certainly took me on a wild ride for a few hours. Colorful characters, perfect dialogue and a great sense of humor really drew me in from the start. And that was before any of the crazy supernatural stuff came rushing in. Incredibly enjoyable. I hope this work is finished soon so I can catch the ending.

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pelzy

This is seriously not like the normal butler and heiress stories. I really love the way the book is written, all the way from the synopsis. I also like its uniqueness, so do give the book a try.

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EldritchTheDead

A well-written story with unique characters that make the story interesting. No problems whatsoever and the dynamic between the two main characters make it all worthwhile. I may not be a fan of this genre but would recommend to any type of reader out there.

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Glenstonx

Omg this is cool and nice, I took the book cover's character as my preference on how he looked and oh boi, he looked hot being a butler. ANYWAY WHAT IM SAYING IS THIS IS GOOD OVERALL LIKE SRSLY. hope you continuously update~