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The story begins so cute. I love how sweetly everything is going so far, despite the death looming on our heads. The story is well written, and something I hadn't really thought of as most reincarnation stories are all about being born as a human. I am excited to see where this will go.
The story is a good one so far, I find the cub development very cute and adorable. I love how the writer placed everything in this book, keep it up author! Your story is one of a kind!!!
really immersive, really good description of what the mc's doing and how he did it, it felt like im the one doing it. Its exactly what a human would do when they became a wolf cub. Although i think mc accepted the fact that he became a wolf to easy and fast, like the eating part. A bit emotional turmoil would seems great. I cant see any grammatical error, great!! More world description and power's system are always welcome in the future. I'm now interested on how the Author will do the mc's romance(if there will be any).
This is really entertaining! I love such novels and this one just perfect. It is amazing! What will be next?! I am wondering now! Great novel!
Just the first sentence in and I'm already hooked! The setting and the plot are beyond intriguing! Not much to say except cut down on the -ly words, but other than that, it's a good read!
I love the first three chapters. I could feel the process of 'how to reborn as a wolf puppy' ... the way you explain it is awesome... couldn't wait for what will happen next to Nuh... the only problem I get, only to get an idea about all characters. I feel that there are too many characters at the beginning of the story. But as more part are going to be published, wish I could read more about other characters as well. Keep on this great work[img=recommend]
It was basically the life of a wolf that used to be a human. It was an interesting story because a wolf was not a character many people would expect. People would expect a human. And the fact this is a wolf makes this ever more interesting. At the beginning, you're wondering how this human is suddenly a wolf. You're asking, "how did he die?" or "how did this even happen?". And it makes you enticed until the very end of the novel.
I don't see any problem with the grammar. The beginning of the story got me hooked! I’m excited about what the wolf’s fate will be. The updating stability is only the problem but it's fine.
I find the story cute. The way the author describes the characters made me think that I am the character. How I find that I suddenly have a tail and can swish it away..I had fun honestly[img=recommend]
At first thought I mistook them for werewolves then later realized they are isekei I must say I am really impressed and I look forward to seeing this book on recommended page[img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp]
I really like the story man, simple, unique, and interesting, a very unique story and development, and writing is good, Really waiting for new chaps
awesome execution of the story! it was very immersive and entertaining althroughout the chapters! will definitely read it again and again and again! Author, update us with more chapterss!!!!
I realy like the story its rather unique and the quality of writing its excellent it was really good and I see you did some deep research about our leading wolf its a very nice arcs with more efforts into it imma leave it in my library since ill be watching for more chapter hehehe please update more
It took a few chaoters for the story to finally progress but once it did it’s very ineresting! Your writing overall is very unique and this is one of the few times I’ve seen a novel in first person that’s been written very well. I like our MC’s personality very much~ I haven’t seen any other novel with animals involved. I hope you’ll continue to update frequently! A little confused on the sudden switch from first to third person though? Even thiugh it did change back. ╮(￣▽￣"")╭
I like this a lot so far. my only issue is that it's in first person for the first few chapters, then swaps to third person, and then first person again. Also theres a random chapter which i think is about the mc in a past life, but that chapter is both too brief and too abrupt for it to work. Overall, it's a great start and I will add it to my library because I simply enjoy reading it
Oh but this is GOLDEN! A***w! I feel so warm just reading this. It is a fantasy novel without it being on the heavy side with all the terms and whatnot related to world building! It was great that you are taking it slow and the chapters are short, however I was expecting for the inciting incident to happen and what really happened to Adam. Haha. I am definitely curious! Overall, this is really well-written and I had a great time reading! ❤️
You should change the perspective to third person. If you wrote this story in first person, I think your story would be either rushed or very slow, depending on your writing style, so third person would be ideal. Concerning for story development, it was slow it first because you stayed on an event or idea too long, but later on you picked up the pace. If you wanted to captivate readers, you should rework the first few chapters, so it would be eye-catching and intriguing.
I do see where you want to go and where you are coming from. Your writing style is very distinct in a way that creates a definitive connection between the narrator and your main character. As in: you use only your main character's thoughts to describe what is going on around him/her. Which is perfectly fine. Although I would suggest describing what your main character sees/smells/hears/tastes as well. That helps shaping an image for your reader to immerse themselves into. However, this is a more than decent start! Keep up the good work!
The story is tender but perhaps a bit tedious at first, and did not really invite me to read on. But later on it charms it’s reader into reading on as the author’s pleasant and easygoing way of writing starts growing on you. And I found that it was quite an unique story, perfect to cuddle up with on a rainy day with a hot drink in your hands. A charming, gentle story that grows on you the longer you read.
First review beside the author so I will give you my full support. It was unique in my opinion. The way the author describes the MC's new life as a newborn wolf cub is nice and easy to understand. World background still not much developing, but it could be better later as it was still below ten chapter. Good luck author :)
Yay! Self advert! Please review my book if you liked It! This is an attempt at isekai (yes, I know it's overly used). I thought of writing this because I couldn't find a good one that suited my tastes. I wanted to see if I was capable of writing a light novel that wouldn't stress out the reader due to incorrect facts, grammar and a painful storyline. I decided on this because normal novels are much heavier and require a lot of work and time dedicated to it. If this novel has helped you relax your mind then I would be glad to know and of course, be more motivated to write more. I love reading comments and scouring discussions. Also, don't forgwt5to vote so as to let more people find out about my book.
This book is one of the most enjoyable first-person POV books that I've ever read. I'm not a fan of books writing in first-person POV because sometimes they are awkward and too cliche, but I didn't feel that way when I read this book. The descriptions are quite poetic and wonderful, I enjoyed the chains of words in every paragraph. It's well-balanced and realistic. The word 'Umma' is not in the glossary, so I was confused at first. I thought it was the word mother in Korean, lol. But then I found the explanation in the fifth chapter. Overall, I enjoyed this book. Thank you for the hard work! [img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER The story begins so cute. I love how sweetly everything is going so far, despite the death looming on our heads. The story is well written, and something I hadn't really thought of as most reincarnation stories are all about being born as a human. I am excited to see where this will go.
The story is a good one so far, I find the cub development very cute and adorable. I love how the writer placed everything in this book, keep it up author! Your story is one of a kind!!!
really immersive, really good description of what the mc's doing and how he did it, it felt like im the one doing it. Its exactly what a human would do when they became a wolf cub. Although i think mc accepted the fact that he became a wolf to easy and fast, like the eating part. A bit emotional turmoil would seems great. I cant see any grammatical error, great!! More world description and power's system are always welcome in the future. I'm now interested on how the Author will do the mc's romance(if there will be any).
This is really entertaining! I love such novels and this one just perfect. It is amazing! What will be next?! I am wondering now! Great novel!
Just the first sentence in and I'm already hooked! The setting and the plot are beyond intriguing! Not much to say except cut down on the -ly words, but other than that, it's a good read!
I love the first three chapters. I could feel the process of 'how to reborn as a wolf puppy' ... the way you explain it is awesome... couldn't wait for what will happen next to Nuh... the only problem I get, only to get an idea about all characters. I feel that there are too many characters at the beginning of the story. But as more part are going to be published, wish I could read more about other characters as well. Keep on this great work[img=recommend]
It was basically the life of a wolf that used to be a human. It was an interesting story because a wolf was not a character many people would expect. People would expect a human. And the fact this is a wolf makes this ever more interesting. At the beginning, you're wondering how this human is suddenly a wolf. You're asking, "how did he die?" or "how did this even happen?". And it makes you enticed until the very end of the novel.
I don't see any problem with the grammar. The beginning of the story got me hooked! I’m excited about what the wolf’s fate will be. The updating stability is only the problem but it's fine.
I find the story cute. The way the author describes the characters made me think that I am the character. How I find that I suddenly have a tail and can swish it away..I had fun honestly[img=recommend]
At first thought I mistook them for werewolves then later realized they are isekei I must say I am really impressed and I look forward to seeing this book on recommended page[img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp]
I really like the story man, simple, unique, and interesting, a very unique story and development, and writing is good, Really waiting for new chaps
awesome execution of the story! it was very immersive and entertaining althroughout the chapters! will definitely read it again and again and again! Author, update us with more chapterss!!!!
I realy like the story its rather unique and the quality of writing its excellent it was really good and I see you did some deep research about our leading wolf its a very nice arcs with more efforts into it imma leave it in my library since ill be watching for more chapter hehehe please update more
It took a few chaoters for the story to finally progress but once it did it’s very ineresting! Your writing overall is very unique and this is one of the few times I’ve seen a novel in first person that’s been written very well. I like our MC’s personality very much~ I haven’t seen any other novel with animals involved. I hope you’ll continue to update frequently! A little confused on the sudden switch from first to third person though? Even thiugh it did change back. ╮(￣▽￣"")╭
I like this a lot so far. my only issue is that it's in first person for the first few chapters, then swaps to third person, and then first person again. Also theres a random chapter which i think is about the mc in a past life, but that chapter is both too brief and too abrupt for it to work. Overall, it's a great start and I will add it to my library because I simply enjoy reading it
Oh but this is GOLDEN! A***w! I feel so warm just reading this. It is a fantasy novel without it being on the heavy side with all the terms and whatnot related to world building! It was great that you are taking it slow and the chapters are short, however I was expecting for the inciting incident to happen and what really happened to Adam. Haha. I am definitely curious! Overall, this is really well-written and I had a great time reading! ❤️
You should change the perspective to third person. If you wrote this story in first person, I think your story would be either rushed or very slow, depending on your writing style, so third person would be ideal. Concerning for story development, it was slow it first because you stayed on an event or idea too long, but later on you picked up the pace. If you wanted to captivate readers, you should rework the first few chapters, so it would be eye-catching and intriguing.
I do see where you want to go and where you are coming from. Your writing style is very distinct in a way that creates a definitive connection between the narrator and your main character. As in: you use only your main character's thoughts to describe what is going on around him/her. Which is perfectly fine. Although I would suggest describing what your main character sees/smells/hears/tastes as well. That helps shaping an image for your reader to immerse themselves into. However, this is a more than decent start! Keep up the good work!
The story is tender but perhaps a bit tedious at first, and did not really invite me to read on. But later on it charms it’s reader into reading on as the author’s pleasant and easygoing way of writing starts growing on you. And I found that it was quite an unique story, perfect to cuddle up with on a rainy day with a hot drink in your hands. A charming, gentle story that grows on you the longer you read.
First review beside the author so I will give you my full support. It was unique in my opinion. The way the author describes the MC's new life as a newborn wolf cub is nice and easy to understand. World background still not much developing, but it could be better later as it was still below ten chapter. Good luck author :)
Yay! Self advert! Please review my book if you liked It! This is an attempt at isekai (yes, I know it's overly used). I thought of writing this because I couldn't find a good one that suited my tastes. I wanted to see if I was capable of writing a light novel that wouldn't stress out the reader due to incorrect facts, grammar and a painful storyline. I decided on this because normal novels are much heavier and require a lot of work and time dedicated to it. If this novel has helped you relax your mind then I would be glad to know and of course, be more motivated to write more. I love reading comments and scouring discussions. Also, don't forgwt5to vote so as to let more people find out about my book.
This book is one of the most enjoyable first-person POV books that I've ever read. I'm not a fan of books writing in first-person POV because sometimes they are awkward and too cliche, but I didn't feel that way when I read this book. The descriptions are quite poetic and wonderful, I enjoyed the chains of words in every paragraph. It's well-balanced and realistic. The word 'Umma' is not in the glossary, so I was confused at first. I thought it was the word mother in Korean, lol. But then I found the explanation in the fifth chapter. Overall, I enjoyed this book. Thank you for the hard work! [img=recommend]
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