I transmigrated to a mafia character from a BL Dark novel!

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Take_the_Moon

Hello here is the author! Title of the novel: I reincarnated as an insignificant side character from a Dark BL Novel. Genre: BL, Romance, Dark, Smut, Mystery, Harem, and Adventure. Ideal age: R-18 Content: Love relationship between men, sexual relationship, demons, angels, elves, priests and gods. Number of Chapters: Undefined This is my first BL harem, so bear with me. Any resemblance to real-life facts is purely coincidental. I hope you all like it, I don't know how everyone will react, so I can't say if the novel will progress as I would like it to go. Thank you for reading the novel and for reading this presentation review.

LV 14

MissyLib

I got to chapter 13 so far. If this got rewritten (and edited) then some chapters and details could be completely deleted. The characters are the only interesting thing, but the random trains of thought take away from the story. I know its the author’s way of building the world, but the info could be worked into the plot better.

LV 3

GodEndra

It isn't a dark BL like I was expecting and so far the concept is pretty interesting. I think instead of having it as reincarnated as an insignificant side character from a dark BL novel a more fitting title would be "Trying to survive in a western fantasy BL novel". The dark part usually will scare people away(and the people expecting a really dark story will be disappointed), and it's transmigration not reincarnation. Transmigration is when a soul takes over an already existing persons body, reincarnation is starting out as a baby. Besides a couple grammar mistakes here and there the story is pretty good.

LV 15

wandar

It's a great book so far with the limited amount of chapters that they have release so far and I'm really hoping that they don't stop I hate to see good stories ending because they didn't have enough support so support our peeps here but just make sure that you guys don't over work your self making them chapters boys lol

LV 12

That1Otaku

The story has an interesting plot and the characters so far have been unique. The main issue I have is how the author writes. There's too much explaing of tiny insignificant details and not enough explaining of what the characters are doing. An example would be let's say the main character walking down a hallway and then looks outside a window which would led into a detailed explanation of the architecture of the building. You get what I mean. I as a reader isn't interested in that I would rather know whats going to happen when the mc get to his destination. My advice is to focus on one topic while sprinkling some SIGNIFICANT details that is useful and or will come up later. Besides this I think the story has potentially and will be waiting for more chapters😗.

LV 15

feyari81298

Enjoying it so far. Can’t really tell where things are going right now as it’s too soon to tell with this story development at this stage. Hoping the following chapters continue to hold my attention!

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Perizou

This novel has a pretty interesting Idea, starting with the MC reincarnating in as a side character, the world he comes into is really unique although a bit gruesome. The pacing is odd at first, it takes a few chapters of worldbuilding before we actually start to see the MC story, but after that it' has nice pacing, not rushing and always explaining important details of the world. Overall is a really nice story and I'm looking forward to where it is going to end up in.

LV 3

Kamatis

No offense, but I hate BL. Especially, darker ones. So I'm going to talk about the grammar. Well, I didn't noticed any typos or anything, I'm blind If there was. Story Development is nice, It's going into a nice pace. Write what you want, and keep up the good work!

LV 13

Estela_Rebucas

the updates are very slow but the story is amazing that i can't stop reading and re-reading", thank you, author-nim", 😊😊

LV 13

Isekai_truck

I really liked the novel( suddenly bunch of characters appeared ) but other than that, I have nothing to say than... TAKE MY MONEY! Really hoping for more chapter (just a small review from fan of Azarphy >_<)

LV 11

Gaiadarkstar

The idea for the story is fun and interesting and I really wanted to enjoy it but every time I start to get interested there is pages of descriptions about stuff I don't care about and that are completely uneccessary. Please think about what you would want to read, would you take the time to read three pages about architecture? Details should mostly be peppered in carefully and only when neccessary. The best way is if two people are talking. Worldbuilding is important but extra details like the design of each floor of the building are just not needed.

LV 13

Couchpotato149

I find this story very original and addicting. It’s one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time and what got me into this app.

LV 4

Jophiel_Doctora_2999

well, what can I say. it's good, a decent piece of work on such genre in this platform. the only thing we need is updates, updates people, updates.

LV 1

Daoist1_taiko

terrible grammar. the novel is hard to understand its like reading a machine translated version of a novel😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

LV 1

M1361F

the story is awesome for me, but I just got spoiled when I read the author's other novel. there was this certain chapter that mention our dear Emery and what happened to him.wuwuwu! I hope its not the real end of this novel with that tragic end. that #tragic tag is giving me ominous feeling. I thought it was just for the back stories of the characters but my BE alarm is wailing!

LV 10

hariennyl_ocsalev

I like this story very much, can't stop reading. The story is great but I would rate the writing as 4 star, it's because sometimes the description is too long and it made me a little bored, I suggest the author to make it a little shorter. But other than that this book is great and I recommend it to the readers.

LV 1

Jimx123_

aside from the problems of the word 'mc' being repeated over and over in the beginning chapters there's not much problems , it gets a bit annoying sometimes especially for a reader to read a word like every 2 or 3 sentences.Based on what I've read so far the plot is great the protagonist is a bit dumb wanting to live a peaceful life and not incurring the 'mc' wrath but planned to meddle in his situation with the church helping him gain his freedom yada yada which in turn gave attention to him making him not able to escape from the 'mc' as he wanted, which is pretty stupid tbh .