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Reincarnated in Naruto anime
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its interesting...SI-OC during kakashi age...but the grammar and english is kinda messed up..plus chps are short..maybe improve on this.......... suggestion: OP MC,,,,no team ****...join anbu.....maybe go on a mission and save the ice clan and mei's clan...?..add some romance and fluff....but pls build it,,,,,,,no retarded perverted MC.....keep him smart and OP,,,,,,also pls build romance,,,,,if harem keep it small...... pairing suggestion: Mei [meet her during mission?....anko....be friends and save her from orochi....an OC from ice clan?]