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As much as I can enjoy the millions of face slapping novels out there, this just isn’t it. I don’t enjoy plagiarism(not an accusation). Everyone in the novel is brain dead, I almost thought a gen Alpha wrote this. Grade: 21/100
It starts a little slow but is overall a good read. It ends up being quite funny and hard to put down. Although in parts it does get a bit repetitive but I think the author has sorted out their storyline more now. Overall it’s a big thumbs up 👍 from me.
I came across this book not so long ago and to be honest it is one of the best books I have ever read..Keep up the good writing skills dear author
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I quit after reading 4th line from end of 1st chapter. This novel is complete TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is a good story. The plot isn't highly original, but it is a traditional theme done well. I hope this story is picked up, but since it has been several months, I'm afraid that it won't be. It is a shame, since a few turd-garglers get selected when good stories like this one get neglected—but there you have it! Give it a try, if an unfinished story doesn't step you...
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i hope this novel be loved more ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
to someone saying this boring? for me this is a good novel 😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Ihate that when one gets all involved in the story that it stops and there's noway to continue reading it. I thonk we should be able to get the rest of the story. It makes me angry as this not the only story like this. The author of this story is a great writer.
I love the story, thank you author for a great novel like this it's captivating, interesting and excellent work of art. I like to encourage you to try and write more chapters because I am waiting for more and more surprise and action.
This alchemist novel is so refreshing and I need it to be more than 60 chapters. Please translate so more and not leave me at such a cliffhanger.
I love that this book a an original alchemist story line. This should be dropping chapters daily. Why wasn't this story made available for everyone?
Very Funny and interesting. A little worried about the future of this novel, as it looks like it might get very repetitive but I wish for it to get picked so I can find out.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnmmnngickfgmmmmmmmmmvjxtvsuxtxh zig u xdr udy characyuch cyg terisdidutic defily8 chi fufifcy fry by inch huh huh uh bnb gggdyxrduchguhtyd8c7 cdi yfvy
It honestly just feel boring. We pretty much have a main character, who is a genius, and almost everyone else in the sect, who for some unexplainable reason hates him and tries to put him down. It’s just face slapping, but next to no story development. I’m halfway through the 60 chapters, but I still have no idea what the cultivation levels are, how the world outside the sect is (we have 0 world building), or how it will progress in the future. The MC is basically just Face slapping people as he slowly moves through the levels, there are no real fights nor excitement. It’s just Evil disciple 1 going: “I’m sure the MC can’t do this”. MC: completes it. Evil elder 1, who is bribed by evil disciple 1: “he can’t be that good, let me humiliate him with some questions He can’t answer”. MC: “answers with ease” Evil disciple 2: “He was just lucky last time when he answered the elders question, he surely can’t complete this” MC: “completes it”. This has been repeated like 5 times in row. Like seriously, come on, the plot just doesn’t develop. At least the translation quality is high, 5 stars for that. Can’t say much about release rate yet. But character design and world building is definently 1 star, and that is only because I can’t give a 0.
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Nice novel. I like this kind of novel..... So i'm looking forward to this novel.... And how will the character will grow...... And what hardships is coming along the way and how will he overcome it all..
An Alchemist taking over a Body of a young child, Worth a read? No answer till chapter 60 It follows the standard formula - op MC - directly creates enemy's - mighty "noble" sons :p - female best buddy - possible female lead with strong background - weak heavy and ugly friend/underling
Hahahahahahahaha Great novel and I love the storyline, with a lot of face slapping beautiful leading ladies, I love it because the MC is smart, and strong even if he face a lot of difficult situations he will still come stronger.
Good story. I hope to see more! Yes, the MC is... hmm... well, he was a high and mighty master before his death in his last life. he seams to be getting better at the chapters build.
Can someone please tell me the chinese name of this novel...................................................................................
This novel is all about Alchemy, the MC is not bond in revenge plot and Missing Family plot (lacking of information of the MC backgroud, MC first show up is already at sect examination ) Learning martial arts, the MC did not learn any martial arts for protection (until chapter 60, the mc still didnt learn any martial arts technique). He learn technique but all of them are alchemy technique. If we compare this novel to the other Alchemy novel like SOTR, Alchemy Emperor of the divine dao, Medicine God and BTTH. They are all learning both Martial and Alchemit until 60 chapter, but this novel is not giving a sign that MC trying to learn Martial Technique even he is getting bullied by his senior and Sect Elder he fight for reasoning by knowledge and Pill Concocting.
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At first I thought it was cool, but then some things stopped making sense. For example, the cultivation techniques are totally irrelevant. The Cauldron Eater is irrelevant. The character development is kind of vague. All the antagonists are the same. As are the characters who interact with Fang Lin.
As much as I can enjoy the millions of face slapping novels out there, this just isn’t it. I don’t enjoy plagiarism(not an accusation). Everyone in the novel is brain dead, I almost thought a gen Alpha wrote this. Grade: 21/100
It starts a little slow but is overall a good read. It ends up being quite funny and hard to put down. Although in parts it does get a bit repetitive but I think the author has sorted out their storyline more now. Overall it’s a big thumbs up 👍 from me.
I came across this book not so long ago and to be honest it is one of the best books I have ever read..Keep up the good writing skills dear author
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I quit after reading 4th line from end of 1st chapter. This novel is complete TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is a good story. The plot isn't highly original, but it is a traditional theme done well. I hope this story is picked up, but since it has been several months, I'm afraid that it won't be. It is a shame, since a few turd-garglers get selected when good stories like this one get neglected—but there you have it! Give it a try, if an unfinished story doesn't step you...
Membuka SPOILER i hope this novel be loved more ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
to someone saying this boring? for me this is a good novel 😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Ihate that when one gets all involved in the story that it stops and there's noway to continue reading it. I thonk we should be able to get the rest of the story. It makes me angry as this not the only story like this. The author of this story is a great writer.
I love the story, thank you author for a great novel like this it's captivating, interesting and excellent work of art. I like to encourage you to try and write more chapters because I am waiting for more and more surprise and action.
This alchemist novel is so refreshing and I need it to be more than 60 chapters. Please translate so more and not leave me at such a cliffhanger.
I love that this book a an original alchemist story line. This should be dropping chapters daily. Why wasn't this story made available for everyone?
Very Funny and interesting. A little worried about the future of this novel, as it looks like it might get very repetitive but I wish for it to get picked so I can find out.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnmmnngickfgmmmmmmmmmvjxtvsuxtxh zig u xdr udy characyuch cyg terisdidutic defily8 chi fufifcy fry by inch huh huh uh bnb gggdyxrduchguhtyd8c7 cdi yfvy
It honestly just feel boring. We pretty much have a main character, who is a genius, and almost everyone else in the sect, who for some unexplainable reason hates him and tries to put him down. It’s just face slapping, but next to no story development. I’m halfway through the 60 chapters, but I still have no idea what the cultivation levels are, how the world outside the sect is (we have 0 world building), or how it will progress in the future. The MC is basically just Face slapping people as he slowly moves through the levels, there are no real fights nor excitement. It’s just Evil disciple 1 going: “I’m sure the MC can’t do this”. MC: completes it. Evil elder 1, who is bribed by evil disciple 1: “he can’t be that good, let me humiliate him with some questions He can’t answer”. MC: “answers with ease” Evil disciple 2: “He was just lucky last time when he answered the elders question, he surely can’t complete this” MC: “completes it”. This has been repeated like 5 times in row. Like seriously, come on, the plot just doesn’t develop. At least the translation quality is high, 5 stars for that. Can’t say much about release rate yet. But character design and world building is definently 1 star, and that is only because I can’t give a 0.
sini kakak akuh bantu kasi rating yang tinggi karena namany nulis cerita itu gak gampang, apalagi dipublikasi ke masyarakat, butuh keberanian yang sangat besar dan tinggi, setinggi dan sebesar gunung himalaya ^^
Membuka SPOILER Nice novel. I like this kind of novel..... So i'm looking forward to this novel.... And how will the character will grow...... And what hardships is coming along the way and how will he overcome it all..
An Alchemist taking over a Body of a young child, Worth a read? No answer till chapter 60 It follows the standard formula - op MC - directly creates enemy's - mighty "noble" sons :p - female best buddy - possible female lead with strong background - weak heavy and ugly friend/underling
Hahahahahahahaha Great novel and I love the storyline, with a lot of face slapping beautiful leading ladies, I love it because the MC is smart, and strong even if he face a lot of difficult situations he will still come stronger.
Good story. I hope to see more! Yes, the MC is... hmm... well, he was a high and mighty master before his death in his last life. he seams to be getting better at the chapters build.
Can someone please tell me the chinese name of this novel...................................................................................
This novel is all about Alchemy, the MC is not bond in revenge plot and Missing Family plot (lacking of information of the MC backgroud, MC first show up is already at sect examination ) Learning martial arts, the MC did not learn any martial arts for protection (until chapter 60, the mc still didnt learn any martial arts technique). He learn technique but all of them are alchemy technique. If we compare this novel to the other Alchemy novel like SOTR, Alchemy Emperor of the divine dao, Medicine God and BTTH. They are all learning both Martial and Alchemit until 60 chapter, but this novel is not giving a sign that MC trying to learn Martial Technique even he is getting bullied by his senior and Sect Elder he fight for reasoning by knowledge and Pill Concocting.
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At first I thought it was cool, but then some things stopped making sense. For example, the cultivation techniques are totally irrelevant. The Cauldron Eater is irrelevant. The character development is kind of vague. All the antagonists are the same. As are the characters who interact with Fang Lin.