The Ascension Of The One.

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JBk205AZ

Autor Here. I hope You give my story a chance if you like op protaginist and big harem and enjoy it. 5-star review because I'm a shameless author

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amaturewriter

Bro I like this..the fluff and purpose of the MC and the godlike MC are all dope...all I ask is that you build the romance...keep it happy and fluff no angsty tragic ****...no perverted issei type idiotic MC or wife stealing....its just sad..also the harem..dont make it stupid like 15 or 20//////....keep it small..also bash characters,.... anyway goodluck and goodshow

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SioMino

I must the first chapter is an original way to start out the novel. However, I must say it really picks up later. So, I must say that both his sister and mother better be in the harem. Heh, I especially love the cute scenes between the MC and the sister. Good ole’ booty spanking for punishment. Heheheee. I also hope that she is his first time to be honest. I also wish that the girls actually stay relevant throughout the story and not a vase. Like, make them useful for the MC if you get what I’m saying. Anyways, I do hope the author finishes this novel since I get the feeling that this novel will quite good if the author keeps up with the good work so far. (Only on chapter 6 so far) Go team Xiao Che and Xiao Tan!!!! Also, I think the harem should be around 10 girls give or take. Heh, whatever is fine to be honest. Just make the girls stay relevant. Anyways, keep up the good work author!

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Trisnawan_Putra_4109

Nice story, been looking this kind of novel for long, finally found it. An immortal story in modern age. Waiting for the next chapter. keep it up man...

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UchihaK_3128

Liked it very much :) Your novel was the first one that made me to join as a member of this novel site. Very good story narration and well done

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Darkcultivater

Good best ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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legnar

This dude got us hooked on this like a drug then he stopped updating on it letin us wait patiently or not maybe dropped idk.... Tho overall grate read and other autors should learn from this story writing for future its an amazin novel or this 13 chapters with nice story and amazing pace... So im rating 5 stars even if it might be dropped cheers guys and see you if autor ever decides to update this one :)

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MO0N

keep update .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Vins12

Nice........................................................................................................... .................................

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VitorEduardo

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Prinnce

Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect Perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect

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MO0N

plz update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

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DrunkDargon

Honestly love the novel so much, The progression especially the relations ships are slow and so far im legit coming back every day to check for a new chapter, hope the author comes back to update it because im IN LOVE!!!!!!!!

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XXgamer_98

The story is really good and it has a lot of potential to be one of the best novels that I have ever read. Hopefully the author start releasing more chapters.

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The_Lazy_Monk

Is a good novel Man. I hope hoy Sony drop it Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls

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Ali_z2

chapter update so lateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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UchihaK_3128

Nice story and over powered characters , looks we can look forward for so much story plot with action. Good Mix and Great work Author, Loved it

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Zim_Zimmerhanzel

i love it when she says babay babay , theres nothin in this world i wouldnt doo. i like it like that oh windows down chillin with radio on. baby baby baby oooohh. our love is like habituallll yeah. fresh prince of dick butt ehhh. candypaint with the white on top . randy dandy i love this novel got me singing some dumb****. really this is good real good.

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KBDragon

Nice story, please add more teasing in erotic ways with harem characters . Loved the novel very much and i hope the harem wont be so big without characters development