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i just read your other fanfic and man you know how to make them interesting and real...i hope you dont give up on this one please🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾 its amazing
IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS! this is already so well written and YES an OP OC. Like there’s barely any TOG fanfics and the ones that are made people are scared of making their character op and just make them weak which is ???? Because irregulars are strong asf??? We haven’t even met all the irregulars and they are so far bad ASS (urek my baby) like the OC can be strong because the way TOG is made there will ALWAYS be someone stronger. It doesn’t impact bams growth at all like look at all the damn enemies the kid has right now all these strong ass people... ANYWAYS I’m so EXCITED
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this mother****er.....look heres a warning.....this assholes books are art, each chp draws you in due to the amazing writing and character development, but be warned, this asshole updates are slow as ****, like old people sex but the wait is worth it....but still the authors an asshole. yes..I recognize that the analogy I have used is strange and pointless, and I still used it.....but I dont care, **** you if ya have a problem
more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.
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Good flow and grammar. Only two chapters were released but they are very interesting and make me want for more. everything gets a full 5 stars except for stability since its been nearly two months since the last update.
I loved Author's other works. I can't believe thag you're hiding such a gem. The intro itself is much much better compared to the other two fanfics. Yeah. Definitely worth the read.
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i just read your other fanfic and man you know how to make them interesting and real...i hope you dont give up on this one please🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾 its amazing
IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS! this is already so well written and YES an OP OC. Like there’s barely any TOG fanfics and the ones that are made people are scared of making their character op and just make them weak which is ???? Because irregulars are strong asf??? We haven’t even met all the irregulars and they are so far bad ASS (urek my baby) like the OC can be strong because the way TOG is made there will ALWAYS be someone stronger. It doesn’t impact bams growth at all like look at all the damn enemies the kid has right now all these strong ass people... ANYWAYS I’m so EXCITED
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this mother****er.....look heres a warning.....this assholes books are art, each chp draws you in due to the amazing writing and character development, but be warned, this asshole updates are slow as ****, like old people sex but the wait is worth it....but still the authors an asshole. yes..I recognize that the analogy I have used is strange and pointless, and I still used it.....but I dont care, **** you if ya have a problem
more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.more chaps.
Membuka SPOILER Good flow and grammar. Only two chapters were released but they are very interesting and make me want for more. everything gets a full 5 stars except for stability since its been nearly two months since the last update.
I loved Author's other works. I can't believe thag you're hiding such a gem. The intro itself is much much better compared to the other two fanfics. Yeah. Definitely worth the read.
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