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Writing Quality: Amazing. There are almost NO grammatical errors from my perspective. (English is my second language so...) Stability of Updates: Really good, 2 chapters of intriguing and extremely interesting chapters a day. Story Development: Sometimes it's fast, sometimes it's slow, depending on the universe Grandpa is in, but I like it! Character Design: Honestly I love 'em all. Especially Grandpa Universe. Gosh, he's so god damn nice it just sometimes makes my heart melt. But, of course, he still knows how to be ruthless when it comes to it. World Background: Although a lot of things change with the involvement of Grandpa, I like every way it has changed up to this point. And a heads up to those that don't like wish fulfillment, cuz this is kind of that. So if you don't like it, don't read it and don't complain about it. But honestly, this is probably my favorite fanfiction of all time. I absolutely love every god damn thing about it, and I sometimes wish that there were more chapters released every day. But, I can't get too greedy, now can I? Either way, all I can say is, I god damn recommend this. It is so good!
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One of the best multiverse fic I've read and the best part is that there is NO HAREM !
Just finished my 3rd go around & loved every moment of it again, cheers for the amazing journey
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What is L + ratio? L + ratioĀ is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letterĀ LĀ is used as a slang term forĀ lossĀ (as in the opposite ofĀ win). The wordĀ ratioĀ is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.
Very disappointing really... Have you ever watched an omake of certain fighting animes? Animes like Naruto perhaps? Well, this entire fic is an omake in its entirety. Absolutely no interactions are ever fleshed out. Characters are so easily accepting of the MC's world breaking powers. Like, Tony Stark suffered from fking PTSD just coming into contact with Loki and those weak-a** chitauri. And now you expect me to believe he wouldn't have any mental repercussions coming into contact with something way-way-WAY larger than aliens? It would have been awesome if MC was something of a shadow puppeteer, controlling plots behind the scenes. But no, he will always have the spotlight. He will always tell the characters of that world his entire life story and everyone will love him because he is just so fking perfect. Even Jesus Christ has haters around the world. You telling me nobody has a single negative opinion on this guy? Yeah, right. The appeal of a good story is the difficulties that the MC has to face. But this MC doesn't face any difficulties. He literally has no character development. He reached his mental and emotional peak at chapter 5! He stuggled (take that with a grain of salt because he never fking stuggled in my opinion) for like 2-3 chapters in the early worlds at most before he eventually stomps the opposition. Most would find that fun, but the way the author does these things is just brainless. I'm even stuggling to call this fic a power-fantasy because power-fantasy makes me feel the thrill of battle in a way that sends a chill down my spine. This? I felt absolutely nothing. The relationships between characters is very shallow. Now, you can argue otherwise, but to me, the author simply lacks the writing skill to allow meaningful interactions to ensue. I never felt the emotions that the characters are feeling while I'm reading them. Simply writing, "he smiled sadly," or "he became angry," will never allow the readers to emotionally connect. I've also noticed that the author can't write a good dialogue scene. If you pay attention, characters will literally stop existing during interactions. For example in the world of "Avatar." When MC first made contact with Aang in the Northern Water Tribe, Aang was acknowledged ONLY when it's his turn to talk! Aang literally just pops into the conversation, like, where tf did you come from?! This entire story the author made just feels artificial. The writing style made it the shallowest story I have ever read thus far. The worlds' characters' problems are solved so easily that prevents the readers from feeling the catharsis of seeing the light at the end of a very long tunnel. If anyone reading this still decides to read this fic, then by all means. See for yourself. PS: I started reading this fic with the knowledge that this was one of those stories in which you simply turn off your brain and just enjoy. And I did. I did turn off my brain. And I did came into this would such mentality and I STILL had to write this review.
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One of the best fanfics to exist. The character buildup, world hopping, the main story, etc, everything is very well done.
wonderful one this was , i will give you all the stones and bananas i can ,i will enjoy the others too
It was so good. I recommend it to everyone. (I really like this fic and felt like crying at the end. It was just too good.)
this is Garbage, there is no other word for it, it reads like it was written by a 13 yr old edgelord wannabe.
One of the best fanfics you will ever read. There may little to no romance but the storyline is GREAT...
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It reminds you that stories can be very good even if they don't have adult content and caring stories can be written and developed with loving family hats of to you man making and writing this piece of art.. well Grandpa Universe is the best š š
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Rarely does someone come across a novel with such variety, excitement, and fantasy all rolled into 1! This is truly an excellent adventure and wholesome fiction!
It is a fantastic concept that could have been accomplished better. I love the idea of OP MC Grandfather character that fixes the multiverse; it just needed to be done better. He doesn't act like a kind grandfather with wisdom but more like an arrogant person who thinks he can do no wrong. The story also needs to catch up more in a fix for each world rather than a systematic fix. For example, in the Harry Potter world, he fixes characters' lives years after he should have learned about them. It is readable, but it is easy to skim through everything and notice what happened based on a quick read-through.
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One of the best stories I have ever read. This is second WebNovel I have fully read without getting bored and losing interest and both stories were from this author mister immortal š¤£š¤£
Tbh I love this ff but the GOT really killed it for me since I'm not a fan of it at all, but i skipped it and everything else was amazing thank you for the ff
I donāt usually give reviews but this is probably my favorite fanfiction on this app and any other all hail grandpa universe.
Hey guys, author here, hope you all are doing great in tough times like these. Let's all pray that Corona-chan quickly dies, so that I can go out and buy some bananas. *Sigh* I need a bananaš¦.
Writing Quality: Amazing. There are almost NO grammatical errors from my perspective. (English is my second language so...) Stability of Updates: Really good, 2 chapters of intriguing and extremely interesting chapters a day. Story Development: Sometimes it's fast, sometimes it's slow, depending on the universe Grandpa is in, but I like it! Character Design: Honestly I love 'em all. Especially Grandpa Universe. Gosh, he's so god damn nice it just sometimes makes my heart melt. But, of course, he still knows how to be ruthless when it comes to it. World Background: Although a lot of things change with the involvement of Grandpa, I like every way it has changed up to this point. And a heads up to those that don't like wish fulfillment, cuz this is kind of that. So if you don't like it, don't read it and don't complain about it. But honestly, this is probably my favorite fanfiction of all time. I absolutely love every god damn thing about it, and I sometimes wish that there were more chapters released every day. But, I can't get too greedy, now can I? Either way, all I can say is, I god damn recommend this. It is so good!
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One of the best multiverse fic I've read and the best part is that there is NO HAREM !
Just finished my 3rd go around & loved every moment of it again, cheers for the amazing journey
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What is L + ratio? L + ratioĀ is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letterĀ LĀ is used as a slang term forĀ lossĀ (as in the opposite ofĀ win). The wordĀ ratioĀ is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.
Very disappointing really... Have you ever watched an omake of certain fighting animes? Animes like Naruto perhaps? Well, this entire fic is an omake in its entirety. Absolutely no interactions are ever fleshed out. Characters are so easily accepting of the MC's world breaking powers. Like, Tony Stark suffered from fking PTSD just coming into contact with Loki and those weak-a** chitauri. And now you expect me to believe he wouldn't have any mental repercussions coming into contact with something way-way-WAY larger than aliens? It would have been awesome if MC was something of a shadow puppeteer, controlling plots behind the scenes. But no, he will always have the spotlight. He will always tell the characters of that world his entire life story and everyone will love him because he is just so fking perfect. Even Jesus Christ has haters around the world. You telling me nobody has a single negative opinion on this guy? Yeah, right. The appeal of a good story is the difficulties that the MC has to face. But this MC doesn't face any difficulties. He literally has no character development. He reached his mental and emotional peak at chapter 5! He stuggled (take that with a grain of salt because he never fking stuggled in my opinion) for like 2-3 chapters in the early worlds at most before he eventually stomps the opposition. Most would find that fun, but the way the author does these things is just brainless. I'm even stuggling to call this fic a power-fantasy because power-fantasy makes me feel the thrill of battle in a way that sends a chill down my spine. This? I felt absolutely nothing. The relationships between characters is very shallow. Now, you can argue otherwise, but to me, the author simply lacks the writing skill to allow meaningful interactions to ensue. I never felt the emotions that the characters are feeling while I'm reading them. Simply writing, "he smiled sadly," or "he became angry," will never allow the readers to emotionally connect. I've also noticed that the author can't write a good dialogue scene. If you pay attention, characters will literally stop existing during interactions. For example in the world of "Avatar." When MC first made contact with Aang in the Northern Water Tribe, Aang was acknowledged ONLY when it's his turn to talk! Aang literally just pops into the conversation, like, where tf did you come from?! This entire story the author made just feels artificial. The writing style made it the shallowest story I have ever read thus far. The worlds' characters' problems are solved so easily that prevents the readers from feeling the catharsis of seeing the light at the end of a very long tunnel. If anyone reading this still decides to read this fic, then by all means. See for yourself. PS: I started reading this fic with the knowledge that this was one of those stories in which you simply turn off your brain and just enjoy. And I did. I did turn off my brain. And I did came into this would such mentality and I STILL had to write this review.
Membuka SPOILER One of the best fanfics to exist. The character buildup, world hopping, the main story, etc, everything is very well done.
wonderful one this was , i will give you all the stones and bananas i can ,i will enjoy the others too
It was so good. I recommend it to everyone. (I really like this fic and felt like crying at the end. It was just too good.)
this is Garbage, there is no other word for it, it reads like it was written by a 13 yr old edgelord wannabe.
One of the best fanfics you will ever read. There may little to no romance but the storyline is GREAT...
Thanks for the story I loved the characters the background the worlds and their stories and abilities [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
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It reminds you that stories can be very good even if they don't have adult content and caring stories can be written and developed with loving family hats of to you man making and writing this piece of art.. well Grandpa Universe is the best š š
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Rarely does someone come across a novel with such variety, excitement, and fantasy all rolled into 1! This is truly an excellent adventure and wholesome fiction!
It is a fantastic concept that could have been accomplished better. I love the idea of OP MC Grandfather character that fixes the multiverse; it just needed to be done better. He doesn't act like a kind grandfather with wisdom but more like an arrogant person who thinks he can do no wrong. The story also needs to catch up more in a fix for each world rather than a systematic fix. For example, in the Harry Potter world, he fixes characters' lives years after he should have learned about them. It is readable, but it is easy to skim through everything and notice what happened based on a quick read-through.
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One of the best stories I have ever read. This is second WebNovel I have fully read without getting bored and losing interest and both stories were from this author mister immortal š¤£š¤£
Tbh I love this ff but the GOT really killed it for me since I'm not a fan of it at all, but i skipped it and everything else was amazing thank you for the ff
I donāt usually give reviews but this is probably my favorite fanfiction on this app and any other all hail grandpa universe.
Hey guys, author here, hope you all are doing great in tough times like these. Let's all pray that Corona-chan quickly dies, so that I can go out and buy some bananas. *Sigh* I need a bananaš¦.