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This is such a hidden gem. Character development and perspective are both probably the best things about this novel (excluding the story itself of course). The fact that there are both good and evil on both sides, and that each race isnt strictly acting as they do in most novels (not all elves are arrogant and hate non elves, "monsters" arent all evil, humans have both kind and evil people) which makes this novel just so much better. I would have still enjoyed this novel had each race strictly acting as their stereotypes, but the fact that the world is not black and white only makes the story better.
I think this story is pretty brilliant. A lot of people complain that the pacing is slow buy for me the pacing is just right. I feel the first 25ish chapters help introduce the MC and develop his personality. And then once you get good understanding of who the MC is and how he thinks, the author threw in some world development and action to show how he would react. Overall this stuff's gold👌🏾👍🏾👌🏾👍🏾👌🏾👍🏾
If you don't like intrusive and unreasonable characters like me, I don't recommend this story, it's the kind of relationship a little comical but above all heavy and seen and seen again
if you are here to see some action and cruel evil mc than turn back nothing but dissappointment awaits you its story of a kid simping over a girl who is annoying af
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The start was interesting because it was written in a non-human perspective. Then the change too was unexpected because I didn't expect *that. Later on, the plot gets moving and for once I don't hate the potential love interest. As for grammar, just ignore if you find errors because these can be fixed if author gets a contract.
I really like what you are doing with this story and can not wait to see where it goes! There are some minor grammer errors, but other then that beautifully done!!!
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This story is really good so far. I love the character development and the world building is great. Usually people have a hard time maintaining the character if said character is supposed to be emotionless, but this author is doing a great job. I think my only problem is with the grammar, but that can always be fixed.
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Muito bom o desenvolvimento do personagem principal, é incrível ver como ele cresce e aprende coisas novas, e esse último capítulo, Meuuu amigooo Que poder é esse.
Everything that I say is based on my opinion and mine only, with my experience as a reader, and there may be some spoil so read the story first (or at least until chapter 55) and come back later ;) So, I think it's a interesting story with a good idea which need to be kept, but I think some things could be improved in your story author-san : - For the dialogues you could just use "..." rather than = "..." = or * "..." *, it would create an aerial text which would be a lot more enjoyable to read. - The Hydra idea is good, but the fact that each an every head will have an independante consciousness like it's a different beast will be pretty confusing in the future in my opinion (when you revealed the hydra I thought it would be like each head has a brain = parallel thinking and multitasking but still one unique consciousness). Finally, I really think this story could beneficiate having a editor/proofreader because there is a lot of clumsy sentences with misused words or time (even though it doesn't prevent the understanding of the story) but I know that you give it your all so keep up the good work !
Very good story, a little hard to understand sometimes but truely a good read if one has the chance to enjoy it.
Good novel thx for hard work. Good novel thx for hard work. Good novel thx for hard work. Good novel thx for hard work. Good novel thx for hard work.
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Pretty good so far the plot development is a bit slow but fast enough to keep you engaged. I personally am a sucker for dark stories and overall evil MC's so I do hope it continues Luke that.
In the beginning the writing is superb, but starting around chapter 35, it goes downhill and is quite uncomfortable to read. There are misspellings, missing words, wrong words, and a ridiculous amount of (brackets). From previous comments I surmised that it’s update schedule was really stable, but in the last two months it has been unpredictable. The plot is captivating, but has a few clichés. Thankfully most are treated in an interesting way. The main character is very smart, and acts intelligently at almost all times. This is not a dumb MC. I repeat, this is not a dumb MC. He grows and his relationships with others are well thought out. Forty chapters in, yet I am still confused about the setting. While reading I have gone from medieval to futuristic, and most things in between. Right now I think it is a standard sword and sorcery world with a little electricity, a global peacekeeping organization that gives everybody magic identity rings, and ridiculously good, well funded citizen care organizations.
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk fala sério cara é legal até mas o mc é aleijado pelo amor de deus ele se fode em todo lugar que vai e pelo que parece ele vai continuar aleijado até o final kkkkkkkkkkk ele é inútil é sério sem conta que a força dele aumenta de forma rápida o núcleo de mana mas ele continua fraco kkkkkkkkkkkkkk a sinopse tem nada com nada é só um meio elfo e que tem afinidade com quatro elementos sendo que isso não é raro onde tem monstruoso nisso? tudo mentira ¬¬ basicamente é a história de como um inútil aleijado consegue se manter vivo foi isso que eu achei kkkkkkkkkkkkkk
It's a great story. For once, the mc is actually smart and keeps the mentality of someone who grew up as a weapon and doesn't become a good for nothing who helps everyone for nothing in return. The only time he actually helped someone in the name of "love"he suffered and regretted it, so I hope next time we'll see that he learned from his past experiences.
Author here and of course five stars because why not? There will be no romance in this story and it also has no 'power of friendship' that can beat any power in the world. This is a story of survival in a world where there is no true good and bad only difference in perspective Hope you enjoy this one!
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Very interesting story I've ever read. Such an extraordinary mind-blowing novel. Please keep on Very interesting story I've ever read. Such an extraordinary mind-blowing novel. Please keep on
The MC has bad luck but that’s fine, it also was a bit darker then I expected. Again I don’t really mind. Keep up the good work. ,wodmiwmdowkqokd
It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work!
Well so far it seems too have a lot of potential and a worth read. Pls no romance. Ps. Having to have atleast 140 characters is pretty anoying
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Okay so at chapter 20 I personally quite like mc. Mc has not yet turned evil but you do have hints‚ he's rational smart and gives an interesting perspective to things also I quite like author's other book so I had some expectations about at least quality and the character design of mc which were redeemed. Anybody in 2 minds about it should give a try And I haven't given 5 starts coz right now world hasn't been explored much so I can't give 5 stars there
This is such a hidden gem. Character development and perspective are both probably the best things about this novel (excluding the story itself of course). The fact that there are both good and evil on both sides, and that each race isnt strictly acting as they do in most novels (not all elves are arrogant and hate non elves, "monsters" arent all evil, humans have both kind and evil people) which makes this novel just so much better. I would have still enjoyed this novel had each race strictly acting as their stereotypes, but the fact that the world is not black and white only makes the story better.
I think this story is pretty brilliant. A lot of people complain that the pacing is slow buy for me the pacing is just right. I feel the first 25ish chapters help introduce the MC and develop his personality. And then once you get good understanding of who the MC is and how he thinks, the author threw in some world development and action to show how he would react. Overall this stuff's gold👌🏾👍🏾👌🏾👍🏾👌🏾👍🏾
If you don't like intrusive and unreasonable characters like me, I don't recommend this story, it's the kind of relationship a little comical but above all heavy and seen and seen again
if you are here to see some action and cruel evil mc than turn back nothing but dissappointment awaits you its story of a kid simping over a girl who is annoying af
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppoood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppoood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
The start was interesting because it was written in a non-human perspective. Then the change too was unexpected because I didn't expect *that. Later on, the plot gets moving and for once I don't hate the potential love interest. As for grammar, just ignore if you find errors because these can be fixed if author gets a contract.
I really like what you are doing with this story and can not wait to see where it goes! There are some minor grammer errors, but other then that beautifully done!!!
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
This story is really good so far. I love the character development and the world building is great. Usually people have a hard time maintaining the character if said character is supposed to be emotionless, but this author is doing a great job. I think my only problem is with the grammar, but that can always be fixed.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Muito bom o desenvolvimento do personagem principal, é incrível ver como ele cresce e aprende coisas novas, e esse último capítulo, Meuuu amigooo Que poder é esse.
Everything that I say is based on my opinion and mine only, with my experience as a reader, and there may be some spoil so read the story first (or at least until chapter 55) and come back later ;) So, I think it's a interesting story with a good idea which need to be kept, but I think some things could be improved in your story author-san : - For the dialogues you could just use "..." rather than = "..." = or * "..." *, it would create an aerial text which would be a lot more enjoyable to read. - The Hydra idea is good, but the fact that each an every head will have an independante consciousness like it's a different beast will be pretty confusing in the future in my opinion (when you revealed the hydra I thought it would be like each head has a brain = parallel thinking and multitasking but still one unique consciousness). Finally, I really think this story could beneficiate having a editor/proofreader because there is a lot of clumsy sentences with misused words or time (even though it doesn't prevent the understanding of the story) but I know that you give it your all so keep up the good work !
Very good story, a little hard to understand sometimes but truely a good read if one has the chance to enjoy it.
Good novel thx for hard work. Good novel thx for hard work. Good novel thx for hard work. Good novel thx for hard work. Good novel thx for hard work.
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Pretty good so far the plot development is a bit slow but fast enough to keep you engaged. I personally am a sucker for dark stories and overall evil MC's so I do hope it continues Luke that.
In the beginning the writing is superb, but starting around chapter 35, it goes downhill and is quite uncomfortable to read. There are misspellings, missing words, wrong words, and a ridiculous amount of (brackets). From previous comments I surmised that it’s update schedule was really stable, but in the last two months it has been unpredictable. The plot is captivating, but has a few clichés. Thankfully most are treated in an interesting way. The main character is very smart, and acts intelligently at almost all times. This is not a dumb MC. I repeat, this is not a dumb MC. He grows and his relationships with others are well thought out. Forty chapters in, yet I am still confused about the setting. While reading I have gone from medieval to futuristic, and most things in between. Right now I think it is a standard sword and sorcery world with a little electricity, a global peacekeeping organization that gives everybody magic identity rings, and ridiculously good, well funded citizen care organizations.
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk fala sério cara é legal até mas o mc é aleijado pelo amor de deus ele se fode em todo lugar que vai e pelo que parece ele vai continuar aleijado até o final kkkkkkkkkkk ele é inútil é sério sem conta que a força dele aumenta de forma rápida o núcleo de mana mas ele continua fraco kkkkkkkkkkkkkk a sinopse tem nada com nada é só um meio elfo e que tem afinidade com quatro elementos sendo que isso não é raro onde tem monstruoso nisso? tudo mentira ¬¬ basicamente é a história de como um inútil aleijado consegue se manter vivo foi isso que eu achei kkkkkkkkkkkkkk
It's a great story. For once, the mc is actually smart and keeps the mentality of someone who grew up as a weapon and doesn't become a good for nothing who helps everyone for nothing in return. The only time he actually helped someone in the name of "love"he suffered and regretted it, so I hope next time we'll see that he learned from his past experiences.
Author here and of course five stars because why not? There will be no romance in this story and it also has no 'power of friendship' that can beat any power in the world. This is a story of survival in a world where there is no true good and bad only difference in perspective Hope you enjoy this one!
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Very interesting story I've ever read. Such an extraordinary mind-blowing novel. Please keep on Very interesting story I've ever read. Such an extraordinary mind-blowing novel. Please keep on
The MC has bad luck but that’s fine, it also was a bit darker then I expected. Again I don’t really mind. Keep up the good work. ,wodmiwmdowkqokd
It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work! It’s good and I like the story and plot so far. I hope it isn’t dropped. Keep up the good work!
Well so far it seems too have a lot of potential and a worth read. Pls no romance. Ps. Having to have atleast 140 characters is pretty anoying
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Okay so at chapter 20 I personally quite like mc. Mc has not yet turned evil but you do have hints‚ he's rational smart and gives an interesting perspective to things also I quite like author's other book so I had some expectations about at least quality and the character design of mc which were redeemed. Anybody in 2 minds about it should give a try And I haven't given 5 starts coz right now world hasn't been explored much so I can't give 5 stars there