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Mob devil's guide to surviving DxD
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An absolutely normal otaku you could find anywhere gets reincarnated into the world of highschool DxD.
unfortunately for him, he has no cheats what so ever.
-He didn't meet a bored god that reincarnated him.
-He didn't get any blessed cheats.
-He wasn't implanted with some game-like system..
-he wasn't lucky enough to get a sacred gear.
Nothing. he was an absolute mob. a destined side character.
But heaven....or in this case, hell, had not abandoned him.
His greatest luck was that he reincarnated as a devil living in the gremory territory.
With that as a starting point, he forged a path to the top. using every bit of geek knowledge available, he makes his own legend.
No cheats? Only losers cheat.
No systems? No problem. I'll make my own.
No sacred gear? what is an artificial sacred gear?
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This is my first story, don't be afraid to lay it on me if I write absolute trash.
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DUDE THIS IS FUCKING TRASHHHH. WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU MAKING THE MC BE APART OF ISSEI PERVERT SHIT. FUCK THIS AUTHOR. AUTHOR KEEP SUCKING ON ISSEI DICK. GOOD JOB MAN.
I try my best to stay true to the real DxD as much as possible.. While following the rules and try not to break the story. The protagonist will reach the top within the rules of this world without relying on any bull****
NOTHING NEW... Another of these novels to please incel virgins with HIGHSCHOOL DxD and Harem for them to masturbate imagining themselves as the main character...SUCH A SHAME
this is a trash story needs to be put down like a rabid animal trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh never read it .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................trash...............................................................................................................................
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At the beginning, the story was fun. It has funny and interesting enough to follow. But everything become **** when sona kidnapped. And now you are making the mc a God? Let me guess in the Next fee chapte mc will make kuroka, gabriel, yasaka and other characters from dxd into the his harem. If you gonna make a fanfiction be orginal
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You know the drill people, a person dies and gets reincarnated into DxD as a devil and trains to become the strongest. The title is a bit misleading as the MC is by no means a mob as he is one of the more outstanding members of the new generation of devils. At the very least I'll give it points for not going the route of Rias bashing or having the story set before anyone is actually in Kouh.
Eenie meenie miney mo catch a tiger by the toe if it hollers let it go eeny-meeny-miny-moe eeny-meeny-miny-moe eeny-meeny-miny-moe..........
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mc is just fanboy and rias tool boy/servant, meh mc is just fanboy and rias tool boy/servant, meh mc is just fanboy and rias tool boy/servant, meh mc is just fanboy and rias tool boy/servant, meh mc is just fanboy and rias tool boy/servant, meh mc is just fanboy and rias tool boy/servant, meh
The sentence structure and grammer are bad In Chapter 9-11 was his first real fight. The author changes the POV between the fighters countless times without reason. During the POV changes he repeates the same paragraphes he has already written and therefore artificially increases his word count. Thats just poor writing.
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๐๐๐ I think it's good somehow, but I don't know why I don't like it that much. Especially when he suddenly have the three abilities. The thought acceleration and the other two(that I forgot the names) in "magic" chapter... I mean it feels so sudden because in previous chapters, I read he reincarnated without any cheat, right? Then why he suddenly has them??? Or am I miss some part about them when I read the story???
I got to chapter 3, but then I had to drop it. It's just kind of a mess. The writing in of itself while not as bad as most on here as far as grammar goes, is convoluted and reads like gibberish half the time. Not to mention you forgot to capitalise the first letter in a new sentences dozens upon dozens of times in each chapter. I've no idea how he randomly knew he was close to Rias, I couldn't make heads or tails of that gibberish. Honestly, not a good read at all. I'd recommend taking it down and giving it some thought before writing it again.
just commenting more when only having 5 star comments it is likely that the author deleted the other comments ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ I didn't say anything
So there are a few problems I see. You jump around with the pacing and into unrelated events. First it's him inside his mother, then a birthday party, doing contracts, getting his first harem and back to actually training. All in a few years. Honestly you need to slow down a bit and arrange an order of events you'll be focusing on. I don't want to see him juggling his harem building, work and training all at once. It doesn't seem very productive and ruins the flow of the story.
fic is about average for webnovel. non native English speaking writer, but the author doesn't do terribly. the best thing about the story is some aspects of the MC. he min/maxes the shit out of his new opportunity. the spells he creates initially to give him an edge are the perfect choices, thought acceleration, parallel thought processing, and memory repository. then he Rock Lee's the shit out of his life and becomes OP (for his age). only thing missing really is mastering structural analysis from fate.
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nice story but mc is too op already in the first chapters, the fight with tiamat sucks the words are repeated and the povs are confusing, the story started to get worse later on because there is hardly any development, the author makes false promises saying to post and not post, fallen novel, bad grammar and op too easily, Skills too strong and meaningless, I understand that in 10 years create Skills but already have the power to ignore and erase memories from all living beings or other stuff op is too much
Membuka SPOILERJilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1
- 1 1 Reincarnation 4 years ago
- 2 2 Future Investments 4 years ago
- 3 3 To do list (re-upload) 4 years ago
- 4 4 Strange families. 4 years ago
- 5 5 "Magic" 4 years ago
- 6 Monster 4 years ago
- 7 Gremory family. 4 years ago
- 8 Rias Gremory 4 years ago
- 9 Vs Dragon King (part one) 4 years ago
- 10 Vs Dragon King (part two) 4 years ago
- 11 Vs Dragon King (part three) 4 years ago
- 12 Red and Blue 4 years ago
- 13 Birthday party and kidnapping. 4 years ago
- 14 Infinity 4 years ago
- 15 Gifts 4 years ago
- 16 16 Dreamweaver 4 years ago
- 17 17 Dimensional Fortress Babel 4 years ago
- 18 pick your poison. Christmas R 18 chapter 3 years ago
- 19 I finally remembered my login password 2 years ago
- 20 DxD 10 year anniversary 2 years ago
Get all woman and milf only for mc,, don't give issei the harem and if can kill raiser and get all raiser peerage become mc part servant harem