Trash in the Apocalypse

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Weirdo

I haven't read this yet, but I know I would hate it!!!!!! Apocalypse genre? Hate it so much I puke!!!!! Zombie?? Monster?? Hate it for the cliche!!! Game system? Hate it also!!!! You cliche writer, write and post more chapter so I can hate it more!!!!!! More chapter for God sake so I can thrash you!!! *Actually, I'm just writing it to fulfill the exp requirement. *

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KingofMortals

A new Apocalyptic- game-genre novel.. Thank god it's happening in another country... Unlike other CN... The background is based in semi realistic world... The style of narration is simple and easy to understand.. And makes you feel the simulation as if we are watching... The characters are excellently fleshed out.. With their own unique temperaments and backgrounds... Author incorporated both game and system fiction into the world building.. To create a fantastical fiction novel... With the same stable updates and writing quality.. I hope author continues writing this amazing book... And journey us through the end...

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Aaron_True

This book is really just amazing I find the plot and the storyline very interesting it seems as the book goes along it just becomes even more fascinating

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8Eight

writing is pretty good for the most part, plenty readable, however occasionally some explanations get somewhat convoluted, but not really a deal breaker. updates arent exactly fast, but writing is difficult so i cant hammer the author for it really. story, honestly it starts out pretty good, till chapter 30-40ish the story is pretty interesting, new things happen, but after that i feel like things starts to get stale pretty quickly, combined with the fact that i feel like the author almost forgot that the game system was a thing between chapter 40-100. theres just a lot of repeat fighting. the power ups feel boring in a way, "i want to see the world in chaos" and he gets time dialation? and then its never brought up again. the cross/church is talked about being something good for like 15 chapters. and its just exp bonus?. ive rambled enough here lets move on. characters. they arent bad per say, just occasionally bipolar. i kind of expect a "reasonable tyrant" type of mc, but he just switches between dumb violence, and stupid sympathy. world background is fine-ish, and is fed pretty dynamically, eg not info dumps. but i still feel like i know nothing. i think alot of this can be attributed to the small scale of the current "world" since its effectively like a 1km radius and its being described almost a bit too much for whats actually there? anyway i ended up putting it on hold at chapter 128, i dont hate the story, it just feel really dull to binge. good luck

LV 12

smith41

apocalypseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 13

MarcGem

Writing quality started off alright, then slowly came to sh!t. The grammar mistakes (lots of em) come at around chapter 40. At this point, the writing is not even a fraction as smooth as it had been when the story started. Can't say much about story development since I'm only up to chapter 58. All I can say is that it's quite boring at the later chapters, like you can predict what's going to happen. MC's merry band is equipped with thick plot armour and his only goal is to lead them to build a shop where they can sell goods.? I feel that author is downplaying the sense of danger in an apocalypse. It's like I'm reading a book about a party in a videogame farming for exp instead of an apocalypse story... There's plus sides though, in the earlier chapters, the entire part showcasing MC's history was done splendidly, but it all went downhill from there. The author only uses MC's background to explain his skillfulness at killing zombies and doesn't touch upon it again. Is he worried about his remaining family or does he not care and wants to forget them? And the other main characters (his best friends) are not emphasised upon. (at least not at chapter 60, maybe they will be later). They seem like the bland side characters instead of the mains because the author doesn't put much of an effort to describe their relationship with the MC. Side characters are side characters. Up to chapter 60, we only now their names and their previous occupation or general information (she is a middle-aged woman!). World background is actually pretty okay. Typical zombie apocalypse stuff yada yada. I like what the author did with the system, and explaining that those who couldn't take the pain at the start became zombies. He could build upon this and slowly reveal stuff about how it happened and why the system is in place. I stopped reading at chp. 65 because of the bad grammar. If it's fixed, I may start reading again. The novel started off strong and i hope it can salvage it's quality in future chapters.

LV 5

Xoul

The story started good with a mc that was leaning on the dark side ... but it quickly ****ed up and the mc became a tsundere hero ... Even his badass "strategist" freind became a moral compass for the mc to do good ...

LV 14

Rexburn12

This Great is pretty the zombie genre is time overused but this book is pretty awesome I like the game aspect of it I like how jun gets really powerful threw out the story he's one of my favorite characters

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PaNNong

Liking the novel so far. Well except when the Mc became a bit soft hearted. but I think, he could’ve explain things a bit better than as for why would the Mc suddenly do that. It just kinda ticks off the readers a bit, because as far as they know the Mc is a bit cold blooded....

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Search1999

pls if you plan to make a new zombie novel in future, then could you make it like, where mc either play solo or is kind of indifferent and cold and only care about himself and no one else. He may have goal like survive, become strong or become god or something, ...........maybe one day. Well i just want to see a dark novel with strong mc and with a zombie setting where betrayal , killing, backstabbing .. ....should be kind of normal if you are weak. Like Survival of fittest or strong and weak meat or something like that. Even though i didn't like much but still your story is great, so keep up good work.

LV 6

Zerzuskan

I read until 75. The novel startet on the strong side, few grammar errors aso. so all in all something I'd like to read. Unfortunately the more I wrote the worse the quality of the story became. Grammar was still on the strong side, but characters didn't make sense anymore(including the mc) and I couldn't really identify them anymore based on their actions. Initially I tried to fel into them but it became impossible. The author mentioned multiple times how busy his job is and that he doesn't have much time so I guess there was less and less planning and thinking and he just rushed out chapters to match his schedule... which I guess is also a noble trait but unfortunately the story suffered under it and I can't enjoy it anymore

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Laycanos

voce sabe exp exp...............................................................................................................................................................

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devt2

This is a good new novel, I found this noval few days ago and cough up with current chapter in a day. The story is going very well, like this main character, the world, the power system.

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APEX_APE

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Alakabam

Started reading yesterday and have caught up as of just a few minutes ago. I had been searching for a kingdom-building novel for some time now and this really scratches that itch. The characters Jun meets feel genuine and fleshed out, the dynamics/feelings between them seem realistic. The worldbuilding is also quite detailed and the video game elements give it a nice spin opposed to a regular apocalypse novel. The writing is decent and stays consistent throughout the chapters I've read, slight improvements have been noted but there's still some grammar mistakes here and there but one easily reads past those, it's not annoying enough for me to call it a flaw. And I'm sure that the Author over the time of writing this novel will slowly improve his style. All in all I love the novel so far and have enjoyed every minute of reading it, keep on trucking Author and I hope this gets the attention it deserves. ** if you're in need of reviews maybe swap some with other writers on the Webnovel forums, that could also give you an insight into what other writers think could improve or what you do really well. Thanks for writing Author! (っ˘з(˘⌣˘ )

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SCRudro

Great story man, it's only a shame I can't pay my way towards the locked chapter. But keep up the good work. I love the apocalypse genre ;)

LV 15

Pragmatico

The characters are developing nicely and the world is also slowly changing but not to fast. Soon spelling or grammar errors but over all it’s a good read.