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I love all your novels. You are a legend. You have great description skills, great character portrayal, and amazing plots. Keep up the good work.
For all purposes this is a great and well thought out novel, but it makes me uncomfortable seeing a unfeeling mc. It's kinda disappointing seeing such a dark mc, he has good sides sure but he is very evil and manipulative. The overlord novel with seraph is much better and a much more fair mc.
This is an amazing original from this amazing author. He will be going places he is my favorite author. So far all the books I've read from this author are fuchkin pheonomanal. I hope to see more, I will hunt you if you drop any of these masterpieces. I would give money to support you I'm sure other others would too. Maybe think about setting something up.
♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ Nobles really are the worst, Royals don't seem to be much better... So arrogant and ignorant of what holy light is before them, he kill'em all before they poison the not-so-innocent mind of Jack's. Try not to Nuke them though this time... ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡
I love this novel. A resemblance to overlord. Big fan. a very detailed story. i like the mc. Good continuaton Good continuaton. #FrenchFan
This novel is bland. I don't like any of the characters personalities present at all. The way people are reacting and communicating is disappointing as well. I was intrigued at the start of the novel since it's somewhat similar to Overlord. Once they reached the tavern that's when I started disliking the story. You could have done some world building, develop their personalities,or push us to in the direction that this is a real world and not some game. From what I seen is a novel that makes no sense. The emotions and the reactions of the MC feel forced and cringy. Once they started the dungeon the story just turned to hell due to the revive function and vampires. Sorry but If your just going to make the MC some powerhouse with slaves and have a revive function then story is not going to go far unless you want to make a average novel that's filled with readers that praise your novel for having an OP character with a harem. If you want to improve as an author you need to compare the emotions and world building of your work with great novels that are similar to the genre of yours.
The best thing since chocolate cake. 140140140140104014014010104140 140140140140410144010401401404040440104014040140 Oone fucking forty. i dont need 140 characters to day this novel is the best thing since chocolate cake
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Me*reads all chapters released* *looks over at the clock to see the time* clock: way too late to be up. Me: 〣( ºΔº )〣 also me*?@!#* In all seriousness this is a good story,
Well-written and enjoyable, this story promises an intriguing future for its characters. Recommended not let Jack have any sort of harem, and also to show more focus on the rest of the party, such as the lich. Please give Jack more male companions to balance out the party's gender ratio, and for his peace of mind.
『Dear Reader,』『Shameless Author with Shameless 5 Stars, again. I thank those who have been continually watching my work. Thank you for all of your support. Please, if you have suggestions, please leave them. Thank you, good day.』『Sincerely,』 – ZGearCecil
Playing with them tags I see. Currently enjoying the pace of the novel, wish you would post a bit more. But you have two+ projects going on, plus reality. Uh... Giving plenty of details, ya know, the ... World Background Kind. Try not to make the MC's party too big...! And I think Nakajima should die, he's a liability, kill him. Do et! Papa Palpatine Demands!
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Dark Fantasy Content . . . Check Murderously Ruthless MC . . . Check Quirky Characters . . . Check I think we got plenty of what we need here for a great story.
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Congratulations for writing your Original 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Author-sama, you are doing my laundry. Keep up the good work! Loving the story so far... Curious if the Moon Elf will be the Romantic Interest, or if they'll be some other character later on! Ohohoh! If you drop this, I'm drop kicking your face. Mk? Got it? Good. Now keep writing.
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I see your inspiration, your aspiration. Go forth fellow Shameless Author, with these five stars, create something magnificent. I can't wait to watch all of Jack Graham's One Sided Murder Scenes and Romance. The MC seems to have this Cold, but Quirky side to him. He likes teasing, making fun of people either straight out, but also subtly. Especially that little arrogant brat of an Elf and her fun-sized superiority.
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Loving what you did with this story so far, even brought Jack along. You're like Gene Roddenberry who used Dylan Hunt over and over again. So Cute. The characters are likable, unique, and varied in racial class. An Undead, A Moon Elf, a High Human and a Seraphim. What else could you possibly ask for!? Keep it up Author-sama! You have our support!
Jack has visited a couple other novels in the past and I think that this new home of his will suit him well, I’m excited to see this new adventure of his and his companions! カンバてください！
Membuka SPOILER 『Dear Reader,』『Shameless Author with Shameless 5 Stars. I hope all who read this will enjoy it. If not, I hope they give me suggestions on how to improve. Thank you for reading, taking your time to read this review, and maybe leaving me a little something too.』『Sincerely,』 – ZGearCecil
I love all your novels. You are a legend. You have great description skills, great character portrayal, and amazing plots. Keep up the good work.
For all purposes this is a great and well thought out novel, but it makes me uncomfortable seeing a unfeeling mc. It's kinda disappointing seeing such a dark mc, he has good sides sure but he is very evil and manipulative. The overlord novel with seraph is much better and a much more fair mc.
This is an amazing original from this amazing author. He will be going places he is my favorite author. So far all the books I've read from this author are fuchkin pheonomanal. I hope to see more, I will hunt you if you drop any of these masterpieces. I would give money to support you I'm sure other others would too. Maybe think about setting something up.
♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ Nobles really are the worst, Royals don't seem to be much better... So arrogant and ignorant of what holy light is before them, he kill'em all before they poison the not-so-innocent mind of Jack's. Try not to Nuke them though this time... ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡
I love this novel. A resemblance to overlord. Big fan. a very detailed story. i like the mc. Good continuaton Good continuaton. #FrenchFan
This novel is bland. I don't like any of the characters personalities present at all. The way people are reacting and communicating is disappointing as well. I was intrigued at the start of the novel since it's somewhat similar to Overlord. Once they reached the tavern that's when I started disliking the story. You could have done some world building, develop their personalities,or push us to in the direction that this is a real world and not some game. From what I seen is a novel that makes no sense. The emotions and the reactions of the MC feel forced and cringy. Once they started the dungeon the story just turned to hell due to the revive function and vampires. Sorry but If your just going to make the MC some powerhouse with slaves and have a revive function then story is not going to go far unless you want to make a average novel that's filled with readers that praise your novel for having an OP character with a harem. If you want to improve as an author you need to compare the emotions and world building of your work with great novels that are similar to the genre of yours.
The best thing since chocolate cake. 140140140140104014014010104140 140140140140410144010401401404040440104014040140 Oone fucking forty. i dont need 140 characters to day this novel is the best thing since chocolate cake
Membuka SPOILER Me*reads all chapters released* *looks over at the clock to see the time* clock: way too late to be up. Me: 〣( ºΔº )〣 also me*?@!#* In all seriousness this is a good story,
Well-written and enjoyable, this story promises an intriguing future for its characters. Recommended not let Jack have any sort of harem, and also to show more focus on the rest of the party, such as the lich. Please give Jack more male companions to balance out the party's gender ratio, and for his peace of mind.
『Dear Reader,』『Shameless Author with Shameless 5 Stars, again. I thank those who have been continually watching my work. Thank you for all of your support. Please, if you have suggestions, please leave them. Thank you, good day.』『Sincerely,』 – ZGearCecil
Playing with them tags I see. Currently enjoying the pace of the novel, wish you would post a bit more. But you have two+ projects going on, plus reality. Uh... Giving plenty of details, ya know, the ... World Background Kind. Try not to make the MC's party too big...! And I think Nakajima should die, he's a liability, kill him. Do et! Papa Palpatine Demands!
Membuka SPOILER Dark Fantasy Content . . . Check Murderously Ruthless MC . . . Check Quirky Characters . . . Check I think we got plenty of what we need here for a great story.
Membuka SPOILER Congratulations for writing your Original 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Author-sama, you are doing my laundry. Keep up the good work! Loving the story so far... Curious if the Moon Elf will be the Romantic Interest, or if they'll be some other character later on! Ohohoh! If you drop this, I'm drop kicking your face. Mk? Got it? Good. Now keep writing.
Membuka SPOILER I see your inspiration, your aspiration. Go forth fellow Shameless Author, with these five stars, create something magnificent. I can't wait to watch all of Jack Graham's One Sided Murder Scenes and Romance. The MC seems to have this Cold, but Quirky side to him. He likes teasing, making fun of people either straight out, but also subtly. Especially that little arrogant brat of an Elf and her fun-sized superiority.
Membuka SPOILER Loving what you did with this story so far, even brought Jack along. You're like Gene Roddenberry who used Dylan Hunt over and over again. So Cute. The characters are likable, unique, and varied in racial class. An Undead, A Moon Elf, a High Human and a Seraphim. What else could you possibly ask for!? Keep it up Author-sama! You have our support!
Jack has visited a couple other novels in the past and I think that this new home of his will suit him well, I’m excited to see this new adventure of his and his companions! カンバてください！
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『Dear Reader,』『Shameless Author with Shameless 5 Stars. I hope all who read this will enjoy it. If not, I hope they give me suggestions on how to improve. Thank you for reading, taking your time to read this review, and maybe leaving me a little something too.』『Sincerely,』 – ZGearCecil