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Perhaps English isn't your first language, but there are a lot of grammar mistakes and pretty disturbing when reading, so I really recommend using Grammarly to help with that issue. The beginning is pretty good. I'm looking forward to furthering developments between the main characters. Fighting!
Where's the next chapter? T.T 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
It's so interesting and I like the story as I read the story,.. the characters and plot was so good and I am hoping for more chapters.!!!!.
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You know a story is good when you just started reading that day. I dying to read what happens next. They always are able to keep my interest at all times. 😆😆❤
Please update more chapter if your not busy because I really really love your story it so awesome and cute can’t wait for more 😆😆😆😆👌👌👌👍👍👌❤️
I love the story and the characters very much! ❤️ I hope we will get more chapters soon, I can't wait!:) I'm very curious what will happen next.
Perhaps English isn't your first language, but there are a lot of grammar mistakes and pretty disturbing when reading, so I really recommend using Grammarly to help with that issue. The beginning is pretty good. I'm looking forward to furthering developments between the main characters. Fighting!
Where's the next chapter? T.T 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
It's so interesting and I like the story as I read the story,.. the characters and plot was so good and I am hoping for more chapters.!!!!.
Membuka SPOILER You know a story is good when you just started reading that day. I dying to read what happens next. They always are able to keep my interest at all times. 😆😆❤
Please update more chapter if your not busy because I really really love your story it so awesome and cute can’t wait for more 😆😆😆😆👌👌👌👍👍👌❤️
I love the story and the characters very much! ❤️ I hope we will get more chapters soon, I can't wait!:) I'm very curious what will happen next.