Superhuman Magus

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fauxis

New Review From The Author I don't know how many might read this, anyway this review is basically going to tell you about what the novel is truly about as I've finally found my right direction in writing this story as a newbie. The novel depicts main character's interesting journey mixed with pyschological elements of how MC is developing. The story isn't repetitive, I always try to not make the story repetitive. There are grammar mistakes for sure. This is a novel I just had an idea about and wanted to write. I never thought from reader's perspective, so you know. Story's release is slow(minimum, one chapter per week), this is done to just pass my time, that's why. I already have various idea of where to stop this novel. For now, it's probably after war arc. I believe by then, I had enough experience writing this story.

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fauxis

I'll give the rating 5 Star . First of all ,go easy on not using better words or the typos since I'm a newbie . You can advice me on what to edit in the chapter comments. All right , now let me talk about my novel . My Novel is fantasy based novel that's set on sci-fi background . As the story progress ,sci-fi setting will be unraveled slowly. As for my MC , well it's complicated . MC loves his parents and wanted to free his sister and himself along with his race . But after he awakened his hidden talent , his personality will change slowly . I can't say more as that's a surprise. For now, MC will increase his power to ascend such that he can have enough status to communicate with the organisation that controls the land his race lived on. This is just the basic stuff . Plot will only get complicated once he ascends . Until then, you will get to enjoy his rise to power. He will be prideful(shameless pride) and badass when he makes a move. Hope you enjoy it .

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ChangedReviewer

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DaoistMloNr5

Had fun reading but too few chapters to rate it . But doing it for you my friend , I hope you make this a good novel so that everyone can enjoy it.

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DaoistUnDaZU

Nice . Keep it Up ! I enjoyed it but how long is this going to be ? You project seems too ambitious . I don't mind but you outline very well for this novel to be a success

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Daoist1N66Lx

Interesting Setting . It seems you aren't very knowledgeable about modern gadget to be talked about sci-fi world . Plus the grammar problem . Good luck

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DaoistzGmeLN

Loved it !! I'm surprised you have this talent . But yes you can improve more . I hope you improve step by step and make this a great novel .

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DaoistKK79Zy

Enjoying it so far . Hope you release more chapters with no deadline pressure . Interesting setting though . Good potential , make good use of it

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Daoisto2LO4f

Good Job. You just need the grammar . World background is epic but too little information to know about it . Good luck with this ambitious novel

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DaoistCbBL6l

Good Job. Grammar is the only problem . World background seems grand but too little information to know about it . Good luck with this ambitious project

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Daoistcqos7o

Good luck with the novel . Too few chapters to write a review but the novel seems ambitious . Especially the fantasy like feeling over the sci-fi setting.

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Daoist8xQfCO

Nice job in writing this novel my friend . There are grammar mistakes but it's okay. Unless you've a editor it's going to be very difficult . Anyway I liked this novel , but this is just beginning . I can only know your novel's potential if more chapters are released. All I understood you have great ambition