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Bab 13: Class Promotion and Race Conversion

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In some part of Atlas World a Mansion is standing on a the top of the mountain. It is very elegant and luxurious.

A handsome middle-age man is sitting on a chair on the balcony of the Mansion. He is drinking a tea and enjoying the view when a crack on space suddenly appear on his side, then a strange Statue walk out from it.

If Shin is here he will recognize the Statue because it is the same Statue that he battle for entire two days.

The man didn't get startle because of the sudden appearance of the Statue it is as if he is already use to these kind of things. He continue to drink his tea while the Statue sit on the other chair beside the tea table. Then a chessboard suddenly appeared on the top of it

The man put down his tea and said without looking at the Statue. "You still like 'Cosplaying'? I don't understand you, you keep mimicking those 'Transendant Beings'. First you transform yourself as 'Dragon', next is an 'Ancient Elf' then a 'True Undead', after that is a 'Primordial Beast' and now a 'Nephilim'? Let me ask you, Have you ever get tired on bullying those young bloods?"

Suddenly a lot of cracks appear on the surface of the Statue then it's pieces started to fall on the ground and after a few minutes a man in his thirties is revealed inside the Statue.

He look at the middle-age man and move a piece on the chessboard while saying. "Don't question my hobby, at least in this way I can see the quality of the young bloods of this generation. And you call that bullying? Let me tell you I'm always been fair on all the Trials that I have given."

The middle-age man smirk and said while responding on the move that his friend make. "Fair? You are always beating those kids black and blue, and you call that fair?"

The other man make a counter move while replying "Beating? Heh. Do you know how those young bloods fight? Some of them are 'Sons of God' while the others have similar talents."

The middle-age man looks at his friend skeptically while saying. "So what if they are. You are also one of them, aren't you? And have you ever get anything from what are you doing?"

The other man frown his brow and said. "If you are jealous of those guys just say so. They manage to find a suitable successor because of my help. While you are still here finding nothing and 'Enjoying' your so called peaceful life."

The middle-age man hand twitch when he heard that before rebutting. "How about you, have you ever find yours? Do you find a suitable candidate to become a 'High Human' like you?"

The other man smirks while proudly saying. "Of course! I already found the one that will inherit my Sword Skill. In fact the one that I choose is the one with the highest potential." He pauses for a few seconds before continuing. "Well together with the last one that I have fought earlier. And so if I were you I should go and find a suitable successor of mine before all the talented individuals become chosen."

The middle-age man stare at the chessboard before saying. "I lose."

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Shin walk out the teleportation portal and greeted by loud and busy square. If the plaza of Beginner's Village have a lot of Players then this Square have a massive number of Players.

The are a lot of stalls here and there, while the the Players are too many to count. It is as if Shin is transported on a busy market on the Real World.

"Whoa! That's a lot of Players, The beginner's Village can compare to this. Hmm.. Should I build a stall and sell my things or should I go the Church for my 'Class Change'?" said Shin as he walk on the square while looking here and there.

"Forget about selling my stuffs for now. I should go to the Church now, I'm quite excited to see what is may 'Special Class' and what kind of skills did it have." Said Shin after some consideration.

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This World have a lot of religions and each of them have a corresponding 'Gods' that they are serving.

The 'Church of The Sun and The Moon' serves the 'God of Sun', the 'Goddess of Moon' and the 'Atlas God'. And it's believers are varies from Humans, Elves and Half-Elves.

Base on the Legend from the 'Dark Era', hundreds of thousands years ago. The 'God of Sun' is expelled from the 'God's Realm' because he committed a crime of killing a fellow 'Divine Being'.

His Divine Powers is ripped off from his body, and he was thrown on the Atlas World. He got enraged because of what happened and promised himself that he will regain his powers and returned to the 'God's Realm' to have his revenge.

And during his stay on the Atlas World he was fallen in love on a human being and he forgot about his revenge because of it. And so he chose to stay and lived a peaceful life. And after few years, the wife of the Fallen God gave birth to a child.

The child have a body of a Human but wield a power of a God. The child grew up and became a special existence called the 'Child of God'.

When the other Gods on the 'God's Realm' discovered about that, they became enraged and refused to accept an existence that is not created by them, so they send their 'Envoys' and ordered them to kill the Fallen God and his family.

The Fallen God and his wife sacrificed their life in exchange for their son's escape. The Son escaped on a forest and hidden himself there for a long time.

When he reveal himself again, his appearance changed. His body remain the same as Human but his arms transformed into a demon's arm, his back have a bat wings with eagle feathers. He became a 'Transcendent Being' and he called himself a 'Nephilim' a 'Fallen Child of God'.

He traveled around the world and assassinated all the 'God's Envoys'. The Gods was enraged once again and want to send their armies down to the Atlas World to hunt down the 'Nephilim', but the 'Goddess of Moon'(the Goddess of Elves) was against about it. For her, they are the real reason why their Envoys have died because if they didn't refused to accept the existence of the kid then all of this will not happen, and the 'Atlas God' (God of Humans and a friend of God of Sun) agreed to it.

Then it resulted a rift between the Gods, and because of it, the races that served under them waged war to each other and it became the start of the new Era the 'Warring Era'.

The Elves and Humans were suppressed because they become the focused of attacks of the other races. When the 'Nephilim' saw this, he directly help them because Humans were his roots since his mother is also a Human, and while he was in hiding a group of Elves took care of him.

And because of his assistance the Elves and Humans formed an Alliance and builded a new Religion that worshipped The God of Sun, Goddess of Moon and The Atlas God, and they called it's Church as the 'Church of The Sun and The Moon' while the 'Nephilim' became their first Envoy.

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Shin is reading the history of the Church in the forums while he is waiting for the approval of his 'Request of Audience' to be approve. Even he is not positive about it because he didn't have enough 'Fame' to see an important person like 'Archbishop Ronald' he still give it a try since it is a part of his quest.

"Hmm.. The history of this Church is quite interesting. I wonder what kind of Special Class will I get here." said Shin while sitting on a bench on the waiting area.

Then suddenly a person with red robe enters the Church. He is being escort by a bunch of NPC Paladins and some Priests in tow.

When Shin see the Name above the person's head, his eyes glow and his lips form an exited smile while shouting. "Archbishop Ronald! can I have an audience with you!? I have....." But before he manage to finish what he want to say he is surrounded by the group of the Paladins that escorting the Archbishop.

"Imprudent Commoner! How can you shout at the Archbishop like that? That is considered as a crime. Men arrest this guy and put him in the jail and imprison him for two weeks." said the Captain of the Paladins.

"Wait.... I... I ..." Shin become speechless when see the Paladins apprehending him.

He is being drag by the Paladins when suddenly the Archbishop get a glimpse on Shin's right hand then he shouted. "Wait! bring that young man here."

The Archbishop wait for the Paladins bring Shin in front of him before saying. "Young man, show me the back of your right hand."

When Shin hear that he hurriedly raise his right hand show the mark at the back of it to the Archbishop. Then the eyes of Archbishop Ronald shine with a bright light while taking a careful look at it, after few moments he said to his guards. "Bring that young man in praying hall and wait for me."

Shin wait for entire two hours before Archbishop Ronald arrive at the praying hall, and the moment he enter the hall he walk straight to Shin and directly said. "Young man, how and where did you get that mark on your hands?"

"Eh? I get this mark on a strange cave on...." Shin got speechless at first because of Archbishop's straight forwardness, then after few seconds he explain what he have experienced.

"You have a quite interesting story there young man. But I can't believe you just yet, so if you don't present me a strong evidence then you will regret coming here now." said Archbishop Ronald before his eyes turn fierce while releasing a terrifying aura.

Shin is frozen in place the moment he feel the aura that Archbishop releases while his ears are being spam by a series of fear statuses.

Shin don't know what to do until he suddenly remember the items that he got in that cave, so hurriedly took out the Mask and Katana then show it to the Archbishop while saying. "Your Highness these are the items that I've get after that strange Statue leave."

The Katana and the Mask fly on Archbishop's hands and inspect it. After few minutes, the Archbishop remove his aura and look on eyes become gentle. He look at Shin and said. "Young man do you know the significance of the mark on your hand?"

When the Archbishop see Shin shakes his head he patiently said. "That mark is called the 'Mark of Eclipse'. It is wield by the previous Envoys of the 'Church of The Sun and The Moon', and that being on your hand means that you are the Chosen successor of them."

"It have different kinds of abilities that can assist the Envoys, I don't know what are those, because I'm not an Envoy myself but I can assure you that those abilities are powerful."

"But the question is are you willing to become our Envoy? Let me remind you that becoming our Envoy means Living and Dying for the sake of the Church, so do you want to become our Envoy?" asked the Archbishop after he explained the significance of the mark at the back of Shin's right hand.

Without further ado Shin nods his head, he forget about everything all that in his mind is to get a Special Class. And what is a Special Class? It is a Class that have OP skills and powerful abilities.

When Archbishop Ronald see Shin nods his head he instruct Shin to go the Altar at the center of the praying hall. And when Shin is in the center of the Altar the Archbishop starts the ceremony.

The Altar shines with a blinding light and enfold Shin then he floats in the air, but before he enjoy the feeling he hears the Archbishop's good news together with a bad news. "Ah! I forgot to tell you this. All our Envoys are 'Transcendent Beings', so you are going to be convert into one, and it is going to become a little painful."

Shin don't have a time to react on what the Archbishop said when all the lights that are being release by the Altar enter Shin's body. Shin cry in agony because the pain that he is enduring can't be compared to the word 'Little'.

Shin feels that his body is being change forcefully. And after few minutes of suffering the long awaited sound ring on Shin's ears and what's more a series of it.

*DING*

System: Congratulations you have successfully converted to a 'Transcendent Race' 'Nephilim'. Please look at the information panel to see the details about your Race.

*DING*

System: You become a 'Transcendent Race'. The list of the unlocked 'Transcendent Race' is now available on your Information Panel.

*DING*

System: Congratulations you have successfully Promoted in to a 'Special Class'. Please look at your Information Panel to know more about your Class.

*DING*

System: You become a 'Transcendent Race' with a 'Special Class'. You can now see the current Class of the other 'Transcendent Race'

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Shin is smiling ear to ear when he walk out the Church. He take a look again at the details of his Race at the Information Panel.

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Race: Nephilim

- They are the offspring of a Fallen God and a Human being. They have the Body of Evil but have a Sacred Heart.

Racial Trait:

- Body of Evil: A body of Nephilim is Evil because it is from the Forbidden love of A Fallen God and a Human.

•It gives you a powerful defense and supply you an unlimited Stamina.

- Sacred Heart: The Heart of Nephilim is Sacred because it is bless by The 'Goddess of Moon' and Atlas God'.

•Your Magic Attack now is doubled.

- Mark of Eclipse:

1. Power of the Sun and the Moon:

•Your Physical Attacks now deals burning damage.

=Burning Damage: 2% of your Total Physical Damage.

•Your Magical Attacks now deals Freezing

=Freezing: The moment speed of enemies is slowed by 20% every time you hit them by your magical attacks.

2. Descent of the Fallen God: (Locked)

3. ???? : (Locked)

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"Transcendent Race sure are OP, they are a cut above compared to other Races. I wonder how strong the others." said Shin while taking a look at 'Transcendent Beings' Panel.

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'Transcendent Beings'

1. High Human:

- Sword Saint (Tier 2)

- Weapon Grandmaster (Tier 2)

2. DragonKin:

- Dragon Knight (Tier 2)

3. Ancient Elf:

- Elven Sage (Tier 2)

- Shadow Dancer (Tier 2)

4. True Undead:

- Occultist (Tier 2)

- Night Stalker (Tier 2)

5. Primodal Beast:

- Barbarian King (Tier 2)

- Destroyer (Tier 2)

6. Ninetails:

- Shakti (Tier 2)

7. Asmodian:

- Diabolic Esper (Tier 2)

- Arch Heretic (Tier 2)

8. Deva:

- Immortal Deviant (Tier 2)

9. Asura:

- Ruin Blader (Tier 2)

10. Nephilim:

- Slayer (Tier 1)

...

"Well looks like I'm the weakest in the group. Base on my Class description, I'll be promoted to 'Grim Reaper' once I pass the Trail at Level 50, OK that will be my first target for now." said Shin when saw the list. Then he look at his skill list with glowing eyes.

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Bab 14: Class Fighting Style

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Skill Name: Moonlight Steps

Rank: Basic

Details: Dash on any distance in 10 meter radius away from you.

Consume 100 Stamina

Cool Down: 5 sec.

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Skill Name: Half-Moon Slash

Rank: Basic

Details: Release a 70° Horizontal cone shape Sword Qi 5 meters in front of you dealing 100% Magical Damage.

Consume 150 MP

Cool Down: 15 sec.

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Skill Name: Crescent Cleave

Rank: Rare

Details: Release 5 Vertical Sword Qi's in a cone shape of 90° in front, Extending 7 meters away from you and Dealing 200% more Magical Damage each.

Consume 250 MP

Cool Down: 30 sec.

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Skill Name: Solar Cut

Rank: Basic

Details: Enfold your sword with Solar flame and strike it to your opponent dealing 100% more Physical damage and ignoring 30% of their defense.

Consume 100 Stamina

Cool Down: 15 sec.

...

Skill Name: Hell Execution

Rank: Rare

Details: Hit Your enemy with a powerful Slash Dealing 300% more Physical damage.

Consume 350 Stamina

Cool Down: 25 sec.

Note: Have a certain change to instantly kill an enemy if they have less than/at most 5% of their HP.

...

"Heh. I have more skills now." said Shin after he saw his Class specific skills.

Then he takes a mental preparation on what kind of Stat Build that's more favorable for his Class.

"My Magical Attack is a little higher than my Physical Attack now, it means my 'Class Multiplayer' leans more favorably on Magic Power. But my Physical attack is not that far behind."

"And since my Stamina is Infinite I don't have to think about being exhaust, but my MP will be easily drain because my magical skills takes a lot of mana, so I think I can continue on my previous plan 2/3 of my 'Undistributed Stats' will be equally divided on my STR and AGI while the remaining 1/3 goes to my INT."

"As for my VIT, I'll try to patch it up with a suitable armors. And speaking of armors that Old Geezer Archbishop said he appraised those two items so I can use them now." said Shin when he recalled about the items that he got in the cave.

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Item Name: [ Nephilim's Gemini Mask ]

Item Type: Head Gear

Rank: Special (Race and Class Specific)

Stats:

+20 to all Stats Major

Details: This item is especially created for Nephilim, if a Nephilim equip this they can completely hide their identity and information to other beings.

Requirements:

Can only wear by a 'Slayer Nephilim'

Additional Ability:

Split Release: You can release 2 copies of yourself where each is wielding the power of the Sun and the Moon and have 100% of your Stats.

Cool Down: 6 hours

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Item Name: [ Yamato ]

Item Type: Weapon (One-handed Sword)

Item Rank: Iron (Evolvable)

Growth Type : Current Lvl 15

Stats:

Physical Attack: 150 - 180

Magical Attack: 180 - 210

+15 STR

+15 AGI

+20 INT

Details: An Ancient Katana that is being pass down from generation to generation. It is the same Katana that have been used by the First Nephilim 'Zheptus'.

Requirements:

Level 15

Can only be wield by an Envoy of The Church of The Sun and The Moon.

Additional Abilities:

[ Locked ]

[ Locked ]

[ Locked ]

[ Locked ]

[ Locked ]

Remark: You are still to weak to wield this weapon.

...

"I know that I'm weak right now, since I just joined this game yesterday." The corner of Shin's lips twitch when he read the remarks on the Katana's information.

The Katana is a 'Growth Type' means that it can grow along side him, all he need to do is share some of his EXP to level it up, it can also evolve to higher rank as long as he have enough materials for the ceremony to unlock its other abilities.

As for the mask it is an special item which means it is an Auxiliary Item that didn't take an item slot.

Shin put the Mask on his face and equip the Katana, he also put the Boar Skin armor that he got at Beginner's Village then his stats raise once again.

Then Shin go to City square to sell some of his stuffs. When Shin get on the Square he try to find a place for him to set his Stall but after 30 minutes of walking he still can't see a vacant place for him to use.

"Should I go to Auction House instead? But it have 10% processing fee and I can't afford it for now, I want to earn back my 2Million as soon as possible." said Shin while walking in the square.

When Shin is about to give up, a Player suddenly stand up and take away his stall. The moment Shin see that he hurriedly takeover that spot and setup his own stall.

Shin earn 300 Gold Coins after 30 minutes of selling, he didn't take out the Skill Books that he got because he want to find a perfect opportunity to trade them for Suitable Skill Books of equivalent value.

"Three hundred Gold Coins is equivalent to 30, 000 FC(Federal Coins). This game is really is a 'money printing machine', earning 30 000FC by just selling low level items." Shin is smiling ear to ear while putting away his Stall. Then a group of players suddenly show up and stand in front of him.

"Hey Kid! Done using our spot already? Now pay up some tax?" said the LionKin in the group.

Shin frown his brow and use 'Scouting' on the guy and when he see the guy's level is just 30 he said. "Your spot? but the System didn't say so, so I think you can go and scam other Players."

"Kid! You are new here, right? You should know the Rules before putting up a Stall here." reply the LionKin.

"Rules? The System is the one that will decide about the Rules." said Shin while standing up.

"System? Heh, that is only applicable on a Newbie like you. Don't you know who are we?" said the LionKin while stretching his right hand on the Battle Axe at his back.

Shin hold his Katana and said. "How about introduce yourselves to me."

The other Players in the vicinity put away their things and form a large circle around Shin and the group while whispering to each other.

.......

Meanwhile a group of 5 Players are passing by on the City Square. They all have a six-wing emblem on their chest, the other Players are making a way for them every time they walk though.

Then a Twilight Dark Elf of the group notice the crowd. "Hey Look! There is large crowd over there let us see what's that about."

Then a Berserker TigerKin of the group take a look ta the crowd before saying. "'Raven' don't waste our time, those kind of things are meaningless. Maybe those are 'HeadHunter Guild' people bullying a Newbie again."

"Those guys really like to use their Guild's Name, why don't we teach them a little lesson." said by a White Elf Female Archer.

"Ara, we can't afford to start a useless conflict with other Power at time like this, Especially now that we are about to join the Guild War between 'Hydra Guild' and 'Dragon Pavilion'." said the Berserker TigerKin.

"Captain, if we are going to join, whose side are we on?" said by the Twilight named 'Raven'.

"Whose side? Of course we will not take one. Base on Guild Leader's order we are going to become a Fisherman of this War." reply by the Berserker TigerKin.

....

While they are chatting, the conflict between Shin and People of 'HeadHunter Guild' reach its peak.

"Kid, looks like you don't know your place, let me put you on your place." said the LionKin of the group before using a 'Berserker Charge' at Shin.

'Are these guys not afraid of being apprehend by the City guards. Well since I'm an Envoy of a Church, I'm considered as a Noble of any City.' said Shin while smirking. Then he use his signature opening move.

'Quick Draw'

- 20 424 (Instant Kill!)

The noisy crowd shut their mouths when they see the damage Shin dealt. Even the LionKin's colleagues is frozen on their places. It is as if time stop moving. Then after a few moments the crowd is burst in uproar.

"Woah! what kind of damage was that? I thought that guy is a Newbie?"

"A Newbie? That guy should be a High level Expert or maybe a 'High Ranker'."

"Poor guys, they bump on an Iron Wall this time."

"But those guys are part of 'HeadHunter Guild' so I'm pretty sure that even if that new guy get away from now, he will still be Hunted down later."

The group with six-wing emblem happen to see what have happened. The Captain look at the White Elf named 'Ara' and said. "What do you think?"

The eyes of 'Ara' are shining because of the activation of an 'Observation Skill', then after few seconds she replied. "I don't know, I can't see that guy's information but one thing is for sure he used a High Ranking Skill."

"Even you can't see his information!? Then that guy really is not simple." said a Human Priest on the group.

"High Ranking Skill? Haha... that guy shouldn't be mess with." Said Raven while playing with his dagger.

The Captain is squinting his eyes at Shin before saying to the Twilight. "Raven, I have a work for you. Observe that kid for a while and report your findings to me, and make sure you will not get discovered."

......

Shin doesn't care about the crowd, because he is staring blankly at the System Notifications that he got after he killed the LionKin.

*DING*

System: Your Class resonated with your Skill.

System: Due to repeated usage of the Skill you have generated your Class fighting style.

System: Congratulations you have unlocked the full potential of your Self-Created Skill.

System: Congratulations you have created a Class Fighting Style Skill rewarding you 200 Fame points.

......

Class Fighting Style: Sword Drawing

Details: Slayers are at their strongest when their weapons are sheath because weapons are deadliest when they are about to unsheathed.

.......

Self Created Skill (Personalized)

Skill Name: Quick Draw

Rank: Special (Class Fighting Style)

Details: Draw your sword with a quick motion and dealing (10% P.damage)• AGI.

Consume 50 Stamina

Cool Down: 25 sec

Note: This skill can only be use when the sword is sheath.

....

"Now I know why that Stup*d Statue is always sheathing his Katana. And this also means that I can recreate those skills that he used against me inside that cave? I should ask Arthur about this 'Class Fighting Style' later." Said Shin to himself while sheathing his Katana.

He look at the crowd and curse in his heart. "D*mn it! I said that I will keep a low profile, but from the looks of it I've put myself in the spot light."

Shin dash to the crowd to get out to the seen. And at this moment the LionKin Colleagues recovered themselves and chase after Shin, but they can't catch up on him because Shin is keep using 'Moonlight Steps' every time it cooled down and eventually they lose sight of him. Even a Twilight like Raven is left in the dust.

Raven get back at his group and said. "I can't catch up at him in this crowded place. If it is in a battlefield where I can kill whoever blocked my path then it is possible." Then his teammates look at him and burst out laughing.

.....

Shin unequipped his Mask so that no one can recognize him, then he walk along the crowd on the other street as if nothing happened. As for his weapon and armor? Their appearance are similar to the items that commonly use by other low-level Players, so no one will suspect a Level 15 Newbie like him can kill a Level 30 in one-hit.

"*Sigh*, That was close. For now I can't use the Mask inside the City or else they will recognize me. Just wait for me to catch up to the main stream Players and I show you that you shouldn't mess with me." said Shin while walking on the street.

"I should go outside the City and grind some EXP, I can't waste my 'x2 EXP Boost' and if I'm lucky enough to find another Special Dungeon it can become x4 again." decide Shin before walking towards the City Gate.

After an hour of walking Shin manage to find a suitable leveling spot that he wants. He looks around and when he see that there is no one in the vicinity he put his Mask on.

He choose this place because when he is walking previously he read in the forums that this Swap is one of the most hate places of Newbie Players to grind EXP. Why? Because for them it it not worth it.

The monsters here are 'Dark Swamp Snakes'. They varies from Elites and Special Elites monster, even though it give a lot of EXP they are very hard to deal with.

The Physical Defense of Dark Swap Snakes are high because of their passive skill called 'Iron Scales', coupled with their high attack damage with poisons, so any Low-Level melee classes will be eaten alive.

As for Low-Level range and magical classes? Don't even think about it, snakes have fast movement speed, so it is pretty hard for them to kite these snakes, what's more these snakes are always in group because of their fast spawning rate.

During the early stages of the game, this place is a famous place for 'Farming EXP' of casual party team and 'Boosting Spot' for High Level Players to help their friends or Juniors.

But as game progressed, more and more maps are being discovered, then this place popularity begin to fall and became the most hated Leveling Spot for Newbie Players, what's more is that the New Leveling Sites that have been opened are easier to deal with.

"This place is hard for others but not for me since I can slow them down with my 2 AOE(Area of Effect) Skills and I can use 'Charge' and 'Moonlight Steps' to get away from them."

"But I still can't let my guard down, base on what's on what the other Players said on the forum, A Magical Class can actually kite these snakes using their Blink and other similar Skills, it's just that they don't have enough space to use it because there is a lot of snakes in the vicinity."

"Well that not my problem anymore since I have my 'Immediate Response' here, I can sense your attacks more clearly and my body can move more properly and even more faster." said Shin while making some mental preparation.

Shin walk towards the swap and when he see number of snakes, he whistle and said. "Woo~, That is what you call many? Eh, you can already call the *'Wild Disaster Unit' with this number of Snakes?"

"Well the more the better, I can farm more EXP this way. Let's see if I can recreate those 'Sword Drawing' Skills of that D*mn Statue."

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*Wild Disaster Unit: A Special Military Unit that deals with a massive number of wild and dangerous animals in Real World of this novel.

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